#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread ! - Page 61

Originally posted by: Amulya9

cute n funny update..
I loved d phone convo.
Zoya is so funny... 😆
aww msg on cupcakes is so cute...
finally patch up hogaya..he loves her a lot..
ab thoda romance pleej
my like is not working... I vl like tomorrow

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Superb update
asya cute and funny moments love them
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

Cute

Originally posted by: KReyAS

lovely updt

Originally posted by: jaanu013

nice update.finally asad zoya patchup

kitchen part was cute. continue soon

Originally posted by: p_s05

<font color="#6600ff">"Haan Beta, bolo..."</font>

🤣 It took me a minute to get over this.

<font color="#6600ff">"Itni jaldi apni Angel ki aawaaz bhi bhool gaye ?"</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"Kyon ? Mujhse baat karo na !"</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"Mujhse bhi zyada important ?"</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"Agar itni importance dete ho mujhe toh meri bewakoofiyon ko maaf kyon nahi kar dete ?"</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"Dekha, ab mujhe 'Angel' bhi nahi bulaate !"</font>

Mrs Khan in true essence. She was damn adorable and endearing in that conversation. 😎

<font color="#6600ff">"She put the phone back on the bed-side table and lay back down while hugging his pillow that she had stolen and put hers on its place."</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"After a while, Zoya thought about cooking for him, she would bake cupcakes for him, a grin was seen on her face when she remembered how 'their' Ammi had taught her to bake."</font>

Hayee! ❤️

<font color="#6600ff">"...she was ready to go to any extent to get her best friend's forgiveness."</font>

You broke my heart, Princess! 💔 🤣

<font color="#6600ff">"There was written and put in order with a cupcake where was written 'Sorry', then below were four other cupcakes in a row, 'Asad' 'is' 'the' 'best' and below were other four cupcakes, written in a row again, 'Zoya' 'is' 'an' 'idiot'."</font>

*SIGH* ❤️

<font color="#6600ff">""I'm sorry, i didn't heard right, what did you say ?" Zoya asked him to repeat while controlling her anger and he tried hard not to smile, nor laugh.

"I said that it was nice..." He replied casually and this time Zoya fumed and grabbed his collar, pulling him closer.

"I spent two hours in the kitchen, baking these cupcakes and all you have to say is 'Nice' ?!" She was infuriated because he wasn't appreciating her efforts and he tried hard not to laugh while removing her grip from his collar.

"Maine kab kaha tha ke mere liye cupcakes banao ?" Asad irked her further, but then said softly, "I had already forgiven you, i was only pulling your leg..." He smiled at her and she got even more angry, "See, look at the plate..."

When she looked at it, she noticed that he had switched the positions of 'Asad' and 'Zoya', so now it was 'Zoya' 'is' 'the' 'best' and below, 'Asad' 'is' 'an' 'idiot'."</font>

<font size="2">Hayee! Zoya is/shall be one violentwife. Asad's witty response ☺️ </font>

<font size="2">Food Fight! </font>

<font color="#6600ff">"Ghussa ho ?"</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"No..." He said kissing the top of her head, "It's just that i'm not happy with your decision..."</font>

<font size="2">Life's beautiful when they both behavematurely. 😉 ❤️</font>

<font size="2">A fluffy, sugary and chocolaty update. </font>

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<font size="2">For the love of AsYa! ☺️</font>

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How do you write this? *sigh*

P.S You need to write a super fluffy OS! Its been ages! 💔 😒

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Originally posted by: shonajain

beautiful progress bano
luved the gusse wala asad n guilty wali zoe waiting for asad
their nok jhok fyts and their lov


sorry 4 nt replying previous paart
hectic schedule

continuee soon
lots of lov
shona

Originally posted by: -Pyaar-

Res

Unres

Im always late

I dont like being late😭

Anyways... AMAZINGLY PURFECTLY AWEZOMELY PURFECT UPDATE!!! Im SOOO HAPPY my Saviour and Angel patched up! Yes, theyre mine now. 😆

It was SHOOO purfect!

Asad and Zoya's food fight was SHOOO cute! ❤️

Zoya telling Dilshad gussa doesnt fit her was SHOOO funny! 😆

And i just... LOVEE Asad and Zoya! SOO much! I just loved the way Zoya answered Asads phone call! That was shooo curpte! One of my most favorite parts!

And Asad and Zoya's conversation at the end broke my heart in a good way... is there a good way for that...? ...Well there is now 😆

I just LOVED THIS PART! It was PURFECT!!

Once again GREAT JOB!!!!!👏

Pleasee update soon!! And the Chef Asad one too!!!

Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad wanted to know abt zoya & he rang at landline
Zoya picked the phone & tried to apologise
She made pancakes for him & their kitchen fight was cute
The way she spoke to dilshad was wonderful, those moments reminded beautiful memories of QH
Asad talked to her & she said she wanted to continue
Asad told her that he was not angry but he was not happy as well
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Loved it! ...

Dilshaad is super cute!. ..loved that 10 mnts. ..

Poor kitchen.. .

Asya patch up.. ..

Nice. ...

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Chapter 17 A & B:

Both were amazing.👏Zoya is somewhat now showing symptoms of maturity. I'm extremely glad with that progress! 😳

Asad is completely right from his POV and Zoya is right to a certain extent. I still am on Asad's side coz it makes more sense to save what can be saved and not wait for something that has only a percentage chances.

Enjoyed the update a lot behna!

Finally Asad has forgiven her but he is still upset and I can understand what he is going through.

Continue soon.. ❤️ 🤗

- Mrina <3

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

I myself laughed at taht, wondering from where do i get such crazy idzas !! 🤣

Haha yeah she's unknowingly behaving like a typical wifey ! 😆

🤣 🤣 arey kyon ? U should be thanking me that Pat took the backseat !! 🤣 🤣 Zoya isnt in love with him yet, she's only starting to feel things like teenagers 😉

I forgot about Pat, I should really be grateful then. 😛 Love's realizations is a distant dream, she would first have to get well, then fight with him and then realize she fell in love with him. 😉


Bechara Asad, sabse maar khayega ! 🤣 🤣 pehle Ammi, phir dost aur ab biwi bhi ! 🤣 🤣

Yeah when they becomes maturz ! [lLOL]

Thank you so much Prashni for always leaving heart warming and beautiful comments !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️

Oh I forgot, I loved the repeated reference of "their" baby and him been the second important person after "their" baby in her life and also the mention of "their" Ammi. ⭐️


PS: even i want to write OSes but i'm too lazy to update my index afterwards ! 😆

What type of excuse is this? 😲 😆

P.S We live in the same time zone, I'm an insomniac, whats your excuse? 😆

Lots of Love! ❤️ 🤗