#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread ! - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago
You Updated Itni Jaldi Kyon Kiya.Chalo Kiya Toh Sahi!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing updt Bano👏
so Asya r back again😃
there phone convo was nicely written👏
Zoya baked cake 4 him wid cute words😛
Asad pulled her leg & she took revenge😉
we witnessed a food fight😆
Asad tried 2 talk her out once again😊
but Ziddi Zoya is still not agreeing
d way she was saying it looked some mature person is talking😃
I m confuse Asad said I m not happy phir is he sad😕
Good job I m satisfied wid Zoya's antics👏
but Asad still lost it uske manne ka kya fayda she's still keeping d baby

btw i forgot Zoya now gave Baby more importance than Asad😲 I m disappointed wid that😒 true baby is special but her savior did so much 4 her & now she loves d baby.😭 ok fine but she give baby more imp. than Asad this is not done. Asad should have 1st place 4 her. 😡😭
I m angry on Zoya😡 baby aya aur Asad ko side kar diya😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Thanks Bhai !! 😳

For any mother, her child comes first, for now Zoya isn't in love with Asad yet, she's only feeling new things and realizing others ! 😊
Yes of course Asad will be there in her toughest tile for her, sirf mohabbat nahi ki, nibhane ka bhi iraada hai ! 😳



Choti itni samajhdar aur meeti bateen(i'm impressed)😉😉😉
😉😉lagta hai badhi ho gaie ho par mere liya meri Choti hi rahoogi
and u haven't answer my main Question:"r u still going with Zoya's miscarriage track?"
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW...asya are back again with bang...😃

zoya is thinking...how to pacify asad😳

loved their asya conversation on phone ...😊

"Ammi kidher hain ? Unhe phone do !" He asked straight to his point without answering her question and she gasped.

"Haaawww ! Main kaise doon ? Phone toh tumhare paas hai !" She giggled happily to finally hear his voice again after what seemed like ages to her.

hahaha...that was so funny...🤣
🤣
zoya...how can you think that any other work is important than you for asad...

he wants to know about you through dilshad...😳

"Zoya...i..." He was cut off by her.

"Dekha, ab mujhe 'Angel' bhi nahi bulaate !" Zoya sniffled and Asad closed his eyes and sighed heavily.

pregnancy ke mood swings pure josh mein hai...beta asad sambhalna bhi tumhe hai...😉
😉
aww...she bake cupcakes for asad...😃

she can go any extent to manao asad...

lekin asad toh pehle se hi maan gaya...zoya woh tumhse jayada der gussa nhi reh sakta...

There was written and put in order with a cupcake where was written 'Sorry', then below were four other cupcakes in a row, 'Asad' 'is' 'the' 'best' and below were other four cupcakes, written in a row again, 'Zoya' 'is' 'an' 'idiot'.

aww...so sweet...❤️
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asad is pulling her leg...

and then their cat and dog wali fight was awesome...🤣

zoya didn't change her decision...

and asad is not agree with this...

both are right in their place...

i hope baby sahi salamat ho jaye...and koi complication na ho...

awesome and mindblowing update...👏⭐️
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thank you for sharing update with us...🤗

please continue soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: captjs

wowie... so so so cute... i can never wait for you to put up the next update... happy



Originally posted by: anjali9996

cake fight was awesome
loved it dear
pls update soon



Originally posted by: padda3princess

Lovely update asya are so cute



Originally posted by: cale

nice update
cupcakes...nice idea zoya
their kitchen fight was adorable...
finally patch up ho gaya😃
update soon



Originally posted by: --RUBAB--

You Updated Itni Jaldi Kyon Kiya.Chalo Kiya Toh Sahi!😛



Thanks guys 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014

BANO I M FAN OF YOUR WRITTING SKILL.I REALLY LIKED THIS UPDT

ASAD IS REALLY SWEETHEART.I JUST LOVE HIM.
PLLLZZZ UPDT SOON


Thank you so much Sucharita !! 😳 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

amazing updt Bano👏

so Asya r back again😃
there phone convo was nicely written👏
Zoya baked cake 4 him wid cute words😛
Asad pulled her leg & she took revenge😉
we witnessed a food fight😆
Asad tried 2 talk her out once again😊
but Ziddi Zoya is still not agreeing
d way she was saying it looked some mature person is talking😃
I m confuse Asad said I m not happy phir is he sad😕
Good job I m satisfied wid Zoya's antics👏
but Asad still lost it uske manne ka kya fayda she's still keeping d baby

btw i forgot Zoya now gave Baby more importance than Asad😲I m disappointed wid that😒 true baby is special but her savior did so much 4 her & now she loves d baby.😭 ok fine but she give baby more imp. than Asad this is not done. Asad should have 1st place 4 her.😡😭
I m angry on Zoya😡 baby aya aur Asad ko side kar diya😭


Thank you so much Jas !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Zoya wont be Zoya if she doesnt reply to tease ! 😆
Yes, as a mother, she's talking very maturely ! 😳
Well Asad respects her decision but he still let her know that he's not happy with it !
Arey Asad wasnt abgry against Zoya because of her decision, he was hurted by her words that nobody cares about her !

Dont be upset, Zoya doesnt realize yet what everything her Savior did for her, she's still naive, and she's not in love with Asad yet, she's starting to feel things just like teenagers now 😉 and for a mother, no matter what, her child holds more importance than anybody else even Asad because she dorsnt love him yet 😕 but be happy that Pat took the backseat ! 😆
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Originally posted by: imcooldude



Choti itni samajhdar aur meeti bateen(i'm impressed)😉😉😉
😉😉lagta hai badhi ho gaie ho par mere liya meri Choti hi rahoogi
and u haven't answer my main Question:"r u still going with Zoya's miscarriage track?"


Lolzzz thanks Bhai !! But i always speak like taht ! 😆 i know that i'm more mature than girls from my age but it doesnt mean that i'm an adult and i realize that, main choti hi thik hoon ! 😆
Yes miscarriage track still there, its one of the most important point of the story ever since i had planned to write the story 😛

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