#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread ! - Page 60

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-SilverSparkle- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Haan Beta, bolo..."

🤣 It took me a minute to get over this.


"Itni jaldi apni Angel ki aawaaz bhi bhool gaye ?"

"Kyon ? Mujhse baat karo na !"

"Mujhse bhi zyada important ?"

"Agar itni importance dete ho mujhe toh meri bewakoofiyon ko maaf kyon nahi kar dete ?"

"Dekha, ab mujhe 'Angel' bhi nahi bulaate !"


Mrs Khan in true essence. She was damn adorable and endearing in that conversation. 😎


"She put the phone back on the bed-side table and lay back down while hugging his pillow that she had stolen and put hers on its place."

"After a while, Zoya thought about cooking for him, she would bake cupcakes for him, a grin was seen on her face when she remembered how 'their' Ammi had taught her to bake."


Hayee! ❤️


"...she was ready to go to any extent to get her best friend's forgiveness."


You broke my heart, Princess! 💔 🤣


"There was written and put in order with a cupcake where was written 'Sorry', then below were four other cupcakes in a row, 'Asad' 'is' 'the' 'best' and below were other four cupcakes, written in a row again, 'Zoya' 'is' 'an' 'idiot'."


*SIGH* ❤️


""I'm sorry, i didn't heard right, what did you say ?" Zoya asked him to repeat while controlling her anger and he tried hard not to smile, nor laugh.

"I said that it was nice..." He replied casually and this time Zoya fumed and grabbed his collar, pulling him closer.

"I spent two hours in the kitchen, baking these cupcakes and all you have to say is 'Nice' ?!" She was infuriated because he wasn't appreciating her efforts and he tried hard not to laugh while removing her grip from his collar.

"Maine kab kaha tha ke mere liye cupcakes banao ?" Asad irked her further, but then said softly, "I had already forgiven you, i was only pulling your leg..." He smiled at her and she got even more angry, "See, look at the plate..."

When she looked at it, she noticed that he had switched the positions of 'Asad' and 'Zoya', so now it was 'Zoya' 'is' 'the' 'best' and below, 'Asad' 'is' 'an' 'idiot'."


Hayee! Zoya is/shall be one violent wife. Asad's witty response ☺️


Food Fight!


"Ghussa ho ?"

"No..." He said kissing the top of her head, "It's just that i'm not happy with your decision..."


Life's beautiful when they both behave maturely. 😉 ❤️


A fluffy, sugary and chocolaty update.


For the love of AsYa! ☺️





How do you write this? *sigh*


P.S You need to write a super fluffy OS! Its been ages! 💔 😒


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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful progress bano
luved the gusse wala asad n guilty wali zoe waiting for asad
their nok jhok fyts and their lov


sorry 4 nt replying previous paart
hectic schedule

continuee soon
lots of lov
shona
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres
Im always late
I dont like being late 😭

Anyways... AMAZINGLY PURFECTLY AWEZOMELY PURFECT UPDATE!!! Im SOOO HAPPY my Saviour and Angel patched up! Yes, theyre mine now. 😆

It was SHOOO purfect!


Asad and Zoya's food fight was SHOOO cute! ❤️
Zoya telling Dilshad gussa doesnt fit her was SHOOO funny! 😆
And i just... LOVEE Asad and Zoya! SOO much! I just loved the way Zoya answered Asads phone call! That was shooo curpte! One of my most favorite parts!
And Asad and Zoya's conversation at the end broke my heart in a good way... is there a good way for that...? ...Well there is now 😆

I just LOVED THIS PART! It was PURFECT!!
Once again GREAT JOB!!!!! 👏
Pleasee update soon!! And the Chef Asad one too!!!

Thank you! 🤗
Edited by -Pyaar- - 11 years ago
jaanu013 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update.finally asad zoya patchup

kitchen part was cute. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Asad wanted to know abt zoya & he rang at landline
Zoya picked the phone & tried to apologise
She made pancakes for him & their kitchen fight was cute
The way she spoke to dilshad was wonderful, those moments reminded beautiful memories of QH
Asad talked to her & she said she wanted to continue
Asad told her that he was not angry but he was not happy as well
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it! ...

Dilshaad is super cute!. ..loved that 10 mnts. ..

Poor kitchen.. .

Asya patch up.. ..

Nice. ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 17 A & B:


Both were amazing. 👏 Zoya is somewhat now showing symptoms of maturity. I'm extremely glad with that progress! 😳

Asad is completely right from his POV and Zoya is right to a certain extent. I still am on Asad's side coz it makes more sense to save what can be saved and not wait for something that has only a percentage chances.

Enjoyed the update a lot behna!

Finally Asad has forgiven her but he is still upset and I can understand what he is going through.

Continue soon.. ❤️ 🤗

- Mrina <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

unres
nice update Choti&I enjoy reading it.

Just wanna ask one thing: as u said u found abortion horrible & u 'll going with Zoya's miscarriage.
But after this update in which Zoya said baby is important than Asad.
So,r u going with Zoya's miscarriage? Though Asad will be there for Zoya,on her toughest time.
but I still want to know.


Thanks Bhai !! 😳

For any mother, her child comes first, for now Zoya isn't in love with Asad yet, she's only feeling new things and realizing others ! 😊
Yes of course Asad will be there in her toughest tile for her, sirf mohabbat nahi ki, nibhane ka bhi iraada hai ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

🤗

Bano I loved this update it was super cute

It's amazing how in one part you can write so emotionally and in the next make us smile like fools


Absolutely brilliant

Mwah


🤗
I'm glad you liked it Aapi !! ❤️

Awww Thank you so much Aapi, u dont know how big compliment it is for me !! 🤗

Love u Aapi !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️
Miss-Appy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ak020203

Nice update..

Had fun reading the kitchen part.. Lovely

Thanks for updating


Haha thanks ! 😆 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳

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