#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys !! 😃
Thank you so much for all the wonderful response, i'm glad that u guys r liking and appreciating my story !! Love u guys !! 🤗 ❤️

THREAD 1
THREAD 2
THREAD 3


INDEX :

PART 16 - PAGE 1
PART 17 (A) - PAGE 44
PART 17 (B) - PAGE 72
PART 18 - PAGE 96
PART 19 - PAGE 114

THREAD 5
THREAD 6
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mariam1368 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Am so excited :-)
Update Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariam1368

Am so excited :-)
Update Soon


Patience Mariam !! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Not unressing (I know...no such word)

Congratulations on the new thread

Mwah well deserved little Api 🤗


Will read and come back 😉
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update 👏 and very emotional 😭
continue soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Resh 😃
___

Unreshh...
First things first!

CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS NEW THREAD! I HOPE THERE ARE MANY MORE TO COME!!
😃 🥳
Second things second 😆: the update
I could feel my heart slowly breaking yaar! It was just SHOOO sad! 💔 😭

I just... i just... noo... i feel like... URGGHHHGGGCRCTBITF 😭
It was amazing 👏
I just... BLEGHHH
I seriously have no words
Im speechless
Just like im blabbering 24/7 and you shut me up with this update
It was just... amazing
No words can justify how amazing it is
Just like... WOW 👏

Like i have no favorite part
Like the whole update was my favorite part
Like... URGHH
My mind has words flowing inside but i doesnt want to form a sentence

How i am feeling:

My feelings in one pic

Seriously yaari! You like never seize to amaze me!



The only problem is these pics dont do justuce to my amazement right now...

Just... wow 😲

Like... wow😲

I have nothing to say but wow. This was just amazing and just... wow
Just...

This is for you for writing this

I just hope Saviour and Angel patch up as soon as possible.
Please update soon! Like ASAP!
Thank you! 🤗
Edited by -Pyaar- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Awesome update👏and very emotional😭

continue soon please


I know ! But I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dnt even knw what should i call this update,..fabulous,superb,amazing,flawless or what? I'm really speechless.
Update was soo emotional and i must applaud you for this 👏
Its like am feeling Zoya's pain,the emotions she experienced,the fear of loosing her baby was fantastic nd very well written...!
Since the beginning of this story i've nt seen Asad hurt so much like in today's update...i feel pained to see him like that but the way he display his emotions when his Angel hurt him OMG that was amazing!
Sana was really nice...she provided support to Zoya.
Pls n pls update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariam1368


Congratulations on the new
thread!
I dnt even knw what should i call this update,..fabulous,superb,amazing,flawless or what? I'm really speechless.
Update was soo emotional and i must applaud you for this 👏
Its like am feeling Zoya's pain,the emotions she experienced,the fear of loosing her baby was fantastic nd very well written...!
Since the beginning of this story i've nt seen Asad hurt so much like in today's update...i feel pained to see him like that but the way he display his emotions when his Angel hurt him OMG that was amazing!
Sana was really nice...she provided support to Zoya.
Pls n pls update soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unress

emotional update

well Choti honestly I too didn't want Zoya to give birth to Akrab's child like as many readers who have been suggesting u with abrotion or misscarriage.
And finally no abortion, I am okey with it bcoz I can understand it wasn't baby fault.

Anyway thank-u for PM
&
Update Soon

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