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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Awesome update
Zoya wanted answers so she went to asad room.
He spoke to her hashly. He wanted her to hate him & leave him as he thought he was not for love
Zoya decided to play in a asad way. It's was her last chance & she want to win
Asad saw the accident news & he was he'll worried for zoya
He reached hospital as he got the call from hospital for zoya death
He remembered his words & cursed him
The moment he heared zoya voice, he didn't control himself
He hugged her & sure himself that she was safe
Zoya didn't show him that his care towards her does matter
Both confessed to themselves
Hope zoya will successful soon
U wrote it beautifully & the song was exactly showed their emotions
Plz continue soon
Do pm me for next update
Thanks

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Nayab (Naha)

@janaa_way

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Ya Allah Surbhi!

How more amazing are you gonna get? Well I pray you get better and better and keep giving us more!

It was love! I hope Asad voices his feelings before its too late!
It feels bad to see him cry!

Awesome as always! gr8 job! Keep it up and yes please PM me?

Love Nayab

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nazali

@nazali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

It was dam good! I cried while reading it.

Such a good writer u are.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

what to say yaar what an update ?!

cant express through word but still I would say

a worth waiting update if you are going to give this kind update I will wait wait and wait as long as possible .

and hey whoever you think is an out standing writer here count your self with her in the same level at least from my POV ( if its worthy of it 😆)

love each and every part of it zoya's confession asad's regretting his behavior and feelings

and now they are going replace their places .

its really going to amazing as always .

now when you promised to update it sooner so eagerly waiting for but plz make little longer 😉

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

awesome updates. Loved very much. Continue soon.

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Congratulations for new thread...👏

Nice happy note...😉

Update is full of shocks and twists...👍🏼

Just love it...🤗

Waiting for nxt part eagerly so update soon...😃