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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
The update was tooo awesome...felt good that you updated...I was waiting for too long for update...and you updated such a nice update... felt bad for AsYa...you always excel in explaining the turmoil, emotions and hurt...what is the past...that's the question confusing me and I often think about it when I stalk the thread... nice plan Zoya... but Allah Miyaan helped her...thanks god nothing happen to Zoya...when Asad got to know about her death... his emotions.. I cried for him...too emotional...at last he confessed to himself...let's see how Zoya makes him confess to her...and his past reveals ..don't make her hate him... he doesn't deserve this...he deserves love...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
OMG! WOW!
This was an emotional roller-coaster ride!
AMAZING chapter! Hats off!
Can't wait to read the next chapter! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
am totally speechless
it was tooo awsume
from zoe pain to asad frustration to zoe plan to asad realisations

part b obviously took my heart away
because i simply love n adore mangalpuri asad
i can never forget that episode
sooo u hav written beautifully tooo awsume

continue supeersooon
n thanxxx alot dear for super long part

lots of lov
shona
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Amazing just amazing update...i love it...in short you are amazing writer...but when are you making out the real reason of asad behavour and condition...asad loves zoya but don't have courage to voice it and make her face his real mental condition and past and ask her is she ready to accept him with all this...leaving him without having valid reason is just not fair on part of zoya so she is investigating asad's past...zoya's planning and her luck is on her side his time...infact, fate is also helping her by this bus accident...helping asad to understand his situation and need...love for zoya...thanks for pm and update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Amazing update
Loved every thing in it
Indeed this upadate was full of emotions and described beautifully
Plzzz plzz update soon
Cant wait for the next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
I like the fact that Zoya finally has a solid plan to break Asad's wall so that she can what made him this way and also in a way make him realise his true feelings for her. It's good that now she is being indifferent to him so that he will realise what he's losing. The part where Asad breaks down hearing that Zoya is dead was beautiful and heartbreaking as it was, I loved how Zoya remained indifferent when Asad hugged as he realised she was still alive. Will be looking forward to part 15.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
brilliant update..well written..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
What a part yr...so full of emotions. ..
Lvd it so mch...Zoya took such a good decision. ..dat wd definately help asad to know and accept his feelings. ..
N dat whole accident vala part ws mind blowing. ...d bst part...
I m so looking forward for the next part. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Kk I know m super late for unresing my comment
But cudnt help it , was really busy
Firstly I wud like u start with a thanx
For the dedication in post
Also m not angry anymore
Cuz u totally made up for it
By the 2 long updates
K now starting abt the updates
I just loved it
Asya always give me goosebumps
They r such a magical couple
Even though he denied and regretted abt the kiss
But his concern surely shows how much he loves zoya
And zoya , even after goin through so much still is trying to give the relationship a last chance
Cuz obviously she feels for him
Can't wait to read how will she make asad react
And make him confess
I so badly wanna know what happened to najma
Cuz u mentioned in one of the updates that 1st dilshaad also blamed asad
But later on behaved well
M sure she came to know something
And it only proves that maybe asad is innocent
And at last they both confessed that they love each other
Even though only in their mind
But still
Really good update
Keep up the good work
And plzzz Update soon this time
And again soory for the late comment
Hopefully this long comment will make up for it
Love ,
Marcoe🤗
Edited by marcoe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Omg I am completely speechless, no words to describe how beautifully you have written, you are truly an amazing writer, great work, and my fav story. Thank you for updating these two parts, I just can not wait for the next one, really heart touching story.. and these two chapters are absolutely amazing, touch my soul.. Thanks again, and please update soon,hopefully Asad will confess his love for Zoya soon..

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