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nia.dhar

@nia.dhar

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Omg..
I can't express in words what I am feeling...I was crying through the updates...this just shows how brilliantly you have penned down the emotions...my heart is breaking for asya...pls don't keep us waiting for the next update...

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jaanu013

@jaanu013

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

first time commenting here.beautifully written chapter and very heart touching.

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

OMG that was amazing

I loved this so much

Asad was broken thinking Zoya died

Im really speechless it was beautiful

thanx for the pm

update soon please

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Beautifully written update...it's very difficult to write this "reverse psychology" and achieve the feelings! Looking forward to more! Soon :-)

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Boring not at all. I almost felt wat zoya was goin thru... Both the updates were fabulous ... Lovely.. Plzzz now dnt make us wait for sooo long again...

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annanya

@annanyaksgian

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

i m happy u r updating

i feel sad for zoya,but glad she is not giving up

and accident needed for asad s feelings

plzzz try to update next part soon

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Please PM the next part.. Can't buddy u there is some problem with my id

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coco_adelyn

@coco_adelyn

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Hey... I am new to this forum... I just started reading ur
FF , I read it all in one go ... It's amazing u r a fantastic writer
Plz do PM me when u update...

Lots of love
Shahd

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

hey superb updates

I love every bit of the update

the way Zoya approached Asad and called him by his name, show him the difference in his behavior and hugged him and confessed her love... I cant tell you how much I love that

I feel bad for Asad poor guy was already suffering and fighting with hisself and now Zoya is up with another plan...

now Asad is testing his own medicine... the whole incident where asad was believing that Zoya is dead... was superb... loved it...

she is also understanding his feelings for her... more determined with her plan...

cant wait for the next updates...

song in the end... it was so perfect and fitted to the situation...

loved the updates, thanks for updating and and pls update next part sooner