An Honest Attempt - A Humble Request - Page 9

Thank you so much for the link julliet the os was just awosome

Dear Farz,Farzi,Farzu!

I have not watched last night's episode. Tamara is "Wonder Woman" and I am cluster f**k...I have so much on my to do list, I struggle every single day.Considering I have only watched selected 4 episodes so I don't know if this fits the bill. But you gave a cue " Rehan offers the gajra to Sanam and his emotions there in that scene.."

This is my vague attempt but time constrains my Faru, so I will probably do something more dignified later next time..

Just for Farzu and Tamara... Do you not know, I can never say no to my Tammy!

***

Rehan !

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

That only infinite circle

I never will out fall

To become your someone

Like you own my all

Searching my vacant vast

A token that is like you, pure

One string of that white garland

Binding to my heart, soul to endure

Sanam " Mein apake liye kuch laya hoon... Yeh Gajra!"

To my world, "You" denote its axis

Dancing a giggle, you hold and allure

Vacant doesn't seem empty any longer

Hope, mirth, faith, LOVE

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

Love,

(Red Treasure - The land of love.

Coiled and Bestowed - When Sanam coils the gajra in her braid..)

Hey Juliet,

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Dear Farz,Farzi,Farzu!

I have not watched last night's episode. Tamara is "Wonder Woman" and I am cluster f**k...I have so much on my to do list, I struggle every single day.Considering I have only watched selected 4 episodes so I don't know if this fits the bill. But you gave a cue " Rehan offers the gajra to Sanam and his emotions there in that scene.."

This is my vague attempt but time constrains my Faru, so I will probably do something more dignified later next time..

Just for Farzu and Tamara... Do you not know, I can never say no to my Tammy!

***

Rehan !

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

That only infinite circle

I never will out fall

To become your someone

Like you own my all

Searching my vacant vast

A token that is like you, pure

One string of that white garland

Binding to my heart, soul to endure

Sanam " Mein apake liye kuch laya hoon... Yeh Gajra!"

To my world, "You" denote its axis

Dancing a giggle, you hold and allure

Vacant doesn't seem empty any longer

Hope, mirth, faith, LOVE

...coiled and bestowed.

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

Love,

Juliet!

(Red Treasure - The land of love.

Coiled and Bestowed - When Sanam coils the gajra in her braid..)

Qh1 left a bitter bitter taste in my mouth! I just cant connect with qh2 as it happened at the cost of my beloved AsYa! The characters of SaHil i hate with a passion which prevents me frm reading their stories no matter how good they are! I mean no harsh feeling to tamara she really is a great writer but i cant read SaHil to save my life!

Amazing lines Juliet!!

:')


Like you own my all



Juliet thank you.


The land of love...and his vacant vase. Is now full.



He's tied to her now. With the token of his love all coiled and bestowed upon her.



It lived up to every bit of of the mega high expectation I had. And Jules you ought to know what poetic words especially the ones that rhyme do to me. And this one has this noble, aristocratic feel to it. Oh yes, very dignified. And if it's not...I do wonder what is...?


So Farz, Farzi, Farzu and Farru approves!!!!!


The story of a gajra, and a beating heart reaching out to another.



Tammy be proud!



She has exclusive rights I heard over your poetry. And yes. What Tammy wants. Tammy gets.



I'm impressed...just too bad many is missing this out. What is it doing in a comment section. It deserves a post on it's own. With Shehzadis like myself can relish. The beauty of a man in love.




And Jules...? Watch that episode. This one's s humble request.
Who knows your promise for a more dignified piece can be fulfilled with this one?


Take a break. You deserve it. Buy yourself a Snickers bar. On me. Though I still don't get why you'd like that more than a Mars bar. Oh well. Still. Get that choc. Or KitKat. Yeah. Have a break have a KitKat. Not everybody get to be Wonder Woman. At least you're wonder-ful.



;)



Love you.



Mwahhh!

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Dear Farz,Farzi,Farzu!

I have not watched last night's episode. Tamara is "Wonder Woman" and I am cluster f**k...I have so much on my to do list, I struggle every single day.Considering I have only watched selected 4 episodes so I don't know if this fits the bill. But you gave a cue " Rehan offers the gajra to Sanam and his emotions there in that scene.."

This is my vague attempt but time constrains my Faru, so I will probably do something more dignified later next time..

Just for Farzu and Tamara... Do you not know, I can never say no to my Tammy!

***

Rehan !

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

That only infinite circle

I never will out fall

To become your someone

Like you own my all

Searching my vacant vast

A token that is like you, pure

One string of that white garland

Binding to my heart, soul to endure

Sanam " Mein apake liye kuch laya hoon... Yeh Gajra!"

To my world, "You" denote its axis

Dancing a giggle, you hold and allure

Vacant doesn't seem empty any longer

Hope, mirth, faith, LOVE

...coiled and bestowed.

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

Love,

Juliet!

(Red Treasure - The land of love.

Coiled and Bestowed - When Sanam coils the gajra in her braid..)

Originally posted by: MsGrumpyShumpy

Qh1 left a bitter bitter taste in my mouth! I just cant connect with qh2 as it happened at the cost of my beloved AsYa! The characters of SaHil i hate with a passion which prevents me frm reading their stories no matter how good they are! I mean no harsh feeling to tamara she really is a great writer but i cant read SaHil to save my life!

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Juliet,

thank you for encouraging me to read this. Its not like I don't follow Tamara's stories, I always do & love them too but you know just like you I wasn't a fan of SaHil so just didn't read it. But your message made me go through it, to see for myself what it was about. Okay honestly the part about Asad just pushed me more. You know I cant say no to Asad. I am super glad that I did. It was really worth reading, sharing & loving.

Thank you sooo much.

Love lots..