SaHil FF: Mohabbat Toh Ek Javeda Zindagi Hai. Completed! *AWARDED*

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

I love this and I love their slow courtship...

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Tannu

@Tannakstar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Ahhh I can't believe that he ate all the chillies!! How stupidly adorable!

And I LOVED the fact that she went over to his house to "return plates to Lateef" LOOOL

Plus that pillar scene with Aahil's slightly wet hair - UUFFTT.

I thought it was a nice way to end the chapter by just saying that Aahil got his answer. It leaves the doors open for the relationship to progress even more.

Fab, wonderful, I loved it!

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chahatmalhotra

@chahatmalhotra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

great concept continue soon
love chahat malhotra

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Omg punching air!!!!!

Hahahaha!!!!

Now!

How do I tell you which parts I love if I love them all!!

Aahil had to go prove himself! Awww! Silly boy he is! Jealous that no one was paying him attention! Come here you!

I like that you don't jump straight to them getting together! I like this baby steps! I want more! More tests that are not test actually but really you just know Aahil would turn it into a test! Heee!!!

More small small moments that tug at the strings of your heart! Like him seeing her in his house!

Oh Mahu love!!!

There's so much in this update!

And this time you added some humorous part!

So funny!!!! Punching air ;) And Sanam asking Badi Ammi and Badi Ammi going all SANAM! on her. Haha.

Ant then Aahil telling her she did it coz she wants to see that glory chest! Hayyyeee! Of course you made her blurt out her dreams of him! Wowzer!!

And earlier when she went all hot stuff live your bod *okay she didn't exactly say this ;)*

And his slight smirk awww. Keep it slight! Don't want him arrogant. Oh well arrogant. I'll take him still.

Love love LOVE your Sanam here.

Okay I hope I was able to tell you what I thought about the update!

Oh and thanks for including Rehan!!! And Rahat!

Rahat jokes too!

Amazing my love!

Mwah!

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heena

@heena24

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Wow amazing

Just love the way sanam blurted out things

And the chilli competition:-) 👏

Thanks for updating:-) :-)

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Saydaa

@SATD06

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Amazing chapter, loved reading it!
I like the way this story line is moving, you are going a great job 😊

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

superb update
chilli scene was so lovely

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

That was an awesome update

Ahil being so blunt and telling sanam she's checking him out - I love it!

Sanam being brave and going to see him - I love it!

Yeh thought that chili scene was from hddcs but your description was as beautiful
Loved it
Can't wait for the next update

Thanks