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@One-Of-A-Kind

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

It was superb!! Great job dear! Do write more

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
This is brilliant!

The gift.

The emotion.

Aahil Aahil Aahil!!!!

Aaahhh I wanna scream!!!!!!

I love it!

Yes yes yes!!!

The rose!

"Toh Rehan se lene ki kya zaroorat thi." Aahil said still annoyed.

Best part.

Wow!

Thanks so much for appreciating my work!
Its genuinely overwhelming... 🤗

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sageflower7
*swoon*
I felt slightly breathless after reading your OS .. ooh the moment had so much awareness and and attraction. .. beautiful! !👏

Thankyou... you don't know how much your response means to me as a writer...

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: fanraya
😳 Hyee so beautiful, loved it.. Please do write more...great job...

glad that you liked it...😃

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Would have been nice if it happened this way instead
Great writing!

thankyou...😊

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@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN
It was superb!! Great job dear! Do write more

thankyou soo much!😃

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: najma123
nice one...

thanks😃

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
amazing OS

glad that you liked it!😃

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pattiala

@pattiala

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Beautifully written ⭐️
I wish something like this happened in the show as well. Loved the way aahil replaced rehan's gajra with a rose given by him.

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Sharyn

@-LarryGurl-

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

So beautiful! Short and Sweet and Non-Draggy! Totally perf!
WHY couldn't this have happened?!
It was lovely on the whole but i especially enjoyed, "making him feel like death would be better than another breath." *swoonworthy!* and, "Usse lene ki kya zarurat thi?" *haha*
Gotta love jealous Aahil. :P

Keep Writing!

~Much Love.

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