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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
wow..it is really a passionate one...hope something happen in the show as well..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: pattiala

Beautifully written ⭐️
I wish something like this happened in the show as well. Loved the way aahil replaced rehan's gajra with a rose given by him.



Thanks a Lot!
I am glad that you liked it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: _stella_

So beautiful! Short and Sweet and Non-Draggy! Totally perf!
WHY couldn't this have happened?!
It was lovely on the whole but i especially enjoyed, "making him feel like death would be better than another breath." *swoonworthy!* and, "Usse lene ki kya zarurat thi?" *haha*
Gotta love jealous Aahil. :P

Keep Writing!

~Much Love.



Aww... your comment means a lot to me... Thank-you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Gayu-Sahil

wow..it is really a passionate one...hope something happen in the show as well..



Ohh! For CVs, the infamous Gajra is long forgotten...😆

I don't think they would show anything regarding it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Coming back to read again... It's truly beautiful...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Priyu! Like I said, it was sexy!😉 And the thing I loved the most was Sanam's reaction. I didn't even feel like kicking her once. *honest*

It was too lovely to read just once.
Keep writing moree..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: radt

Priyu! Like I said, it was sexy!😉 And the thing I loved the most was Sanam's reaction. I didn't even feel like kicking her once. *honest*

It was too lovely to read just once.

Keep writing moree..🤗




Finally the comment I was waiting for...😃

Thank-you so much... my motivating queen!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sageflower7


Coming back to read again... It's truly beautiful...

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Aww... Thank-you so much!!!😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Ok. Ok. So I think I just got to know how awesome of a writer to you are Casper. I absolutely loved loved it. Ahil and his emotions were so well portrayed. You keep writing and share with me.


Lekhu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Ok. Ok. So I think I just got to know how awesome of a writer to you are Casper. I absolutely loved loved it. Ahil and his emotions were so well portrayed. You keep writing and share with me.


Lekhu




Ohhh!!! Lekha!... Your comment means a lot to me...
Thanks so much!!!🤗

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