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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletmalik


awsome update

loved it❤️
loved the classes
poor zoya😭
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm


Thank you so much Scarlet ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So zoya starts her tutoring
Asad with her like a love struck teenager
He gets jealous when she don't want him in class
Omg zoya in pain she bleeding
So her keeping the baby can harm both of them
Asad don't know what to do he knows zoya will want the baby but to put her life at risk,
Love how he was determined to stay with her I will never leave u
And sweetheart wow
Continue soon


Thank you so much Anopama !! I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Asad is again in a dilemma ! 😕 because he doesnt know what he should do ! 😭
Yes she's his sweetheart after all ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haw !! Asad is feeling jealous!!
worth to read that jealous part!! 😆
love this update!!
Then comes the horrible news!!
awww poor Zoya !!
but Asad he was totally devastated!! Uff that was really heart breaking to read !!
Asad is in dilemma and now we have to wait for his decisions!!!
Do continue soon ...pretty please 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Hey Bano!🤗


That was an awesome update..👏

The ending made me cry.. Poor Zoya!😭

How she was beaten and abused by Haseena..😡

Zoya has started her tutoring lessons but wants Asad by her side..😃☺️

Asad stares at her like a love-struck teen..

Asad is jealous now that she doesn't want him by her side.. And he is scared too..😔
Don't worry Asad.. Zoya will always want her saviour..😉😆

She called his name for the first time..

Zoya started bleeding.. I was hoping it wouldn't be that serious..
😭
When Zoya has finally developed an attachment with the baby, she must abort it..

Asad is in for a difficult decision..😒

This was so emotional..😭😭

Do update soon!😊


Hey buddy ! 🤗 (why do i still dont know ur name ? 😆 )

Awww Thank you so much !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Really i made u cry ?! 😲 i'm sorry ! 😭

Dont worry Asad will take care of them personally before letting Zoya punish them ! 😈

Haan ! Akhir apne Savior se zyada kisi pe trust nahi karti ! 😳

Ab Zoya bhav nahi de rahi toh Asad jelly hi hoga ! 😆

Haan ! Called his name in pain ! 😆

I know its sad ! But its the dark reality of life that even past overshadow ur present !

Do u think she will abort ? 😉

Asad is indeed in a dilemma !

Thank you so much for such a sweet comment !! 🤗 MWAH ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

very long updt😊

I loved it😃
Zoya was scared of Pinto
I wanted 2 hug her Bhaseena tortured so much😡
D classes were awesome loved teacher Pinto
Zoya started getting along wid him even in Asad's absence
Asad felt jealous loved their scene in Asad's bedroom😛
& than suddenly Zoya started screaming
i didn't thought it will b like this i thought koi accident hoga mayb😲
seeing her state Asad was also intears & feeling helpless😭
Mr. Pinto came 4ward 2 help
Sana told him about complications
Asad is sad & in turmoil how 2 take d decision cuz he has no rights 4 that

I think he's also guilty usse kya jarurat thi Zoya ko baby ke liye itna feel karwane ki.😳 She will b hurt na now.😭Stupid Asad😡😆


Yeah i dont know how i managed to write so much ? 😆
Dont worry Aqad will teach a good lesson to Bhaiseena and Akram ! 🤬
He's a good teacher ! 😳
Haan ! Zoya bhav nahi de rahi thi toh jelly hoga na humara Asad ! 😳 😆
Haha do u really think that i'm done with the baby ? 😉 😆
Yes, since Asad is not the mother he cant decide for her even though he wants the best for her ! 😕

Arey ! Asad ki kya ghalti ?! 😡 😆 he only wanted to make a new bond for Zoya ! Usse kya pata tha ke itni zyada complications hain ?! 😭
I know i'm always here as Asad's advocate ! 😆

Thank you so much for such a sweet comment Jas !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

It was nice part.
The way Asad(KSG) convinced Zoya for learning was so nice.
Danial teaching Zoya very nice.
Poor Zoya😭she was crying and asking Asad(KSG) to reduce the pain,it was so sad.
The way Asad(KSG) pained for Zoya's pain,It was so sad.😭
It was so sad to see him like this.😭😭
Sana said to Asad(KSG) that Zoya had to abort the baby,it was so sad.
How Asad(KSG) will convince Zoya for it?
I hope Zoya will be fine.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI.




Thanks Priya ! I'm glad you liked it !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

It all started on a happy note

But the end of the chapter😭

Lets see wat happens


I know its hard ! but its the reality of life 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Haw !! Asad is feeling jealous!!

worth to read that jealous part!!😆
love this update!!
Then comes the horrible news!!
awww poor Zoya !!
but Asad he was totally devastated!! Uff that was really heart breaking to read !!
Asad is in dilemma and now we have to wait for his decisions!!!
Do continue soon ...pretty please 😳


Zoya ehmiyat nahi degi toh Asad jelly hi hoga na ! 😉 😆
Thank you so much !! 🤗
Haan he's in dilemma he doesnt know what to do ! 😭
I'll try to update soon ! 😳
I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

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thanX for PM

Update was little emotional but I liked it.

So Choti finally thinking about Zoya's abortion? Please go on with it. Coz Its like that none of reader wants Zoya to give birth to that bu**ard Akrab's child.(includeing me)

anyway try to update next part soon.
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Thanks bhai ! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
Haan lekin baby abhi bhi picture mein hai, maine aur bhi plans banaye hue hain 😉
Dont worry she wont give birth to the baby 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
zoya and Mr. pinto are getting along very well
i m so glad that zoya is trying to study again
and that bhaiseena🤢🤢
poor zoya...she got attached to the baby
now what will Asad do??
update soon

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