#3 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 10- 15 ! Link new thread ! - Page 26

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Awesome update.
Najma deserves this treatment.
The asya moments was so beautiful, emotional.
Love the way zoya scolding asad. The way she feeding him was cute and sweet.
The way asad reassuring zoya was a beautyful scene.
Asya getting more and more cute.
Love it.
Hope zoya recoves soon.
❤️ Raj

thanks bhai !!
haaha Najma ka dushman lol !!
i'm glad u r liking it !!

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely update...
aww my poor baby najma...
i felt so bad for her... she was defo at fault but inna gussa bechari par...
when asad was scolding her and asking for explanation i was abt to cry...
chalo all is wel that ends well...
pakki ho gayi between siblings...
continue soon

thanks so much Aapi !!
kuch log usse bechari keh rahe hain aur kuch log keh rahe hain she deserved it ! lol
awww aapko scold nnahi kar raha tha voh ! lol

Originally posted by: gowtu

It was gud dear
Loved it


N the blackmailers prt was so cute
Poor njma...
Continue soon

haha thanks so much Gowtu !!

Originally posted by: parakshi

Thanx for the pm!
awesome update
loved it
bechari Najma!
I loved ur signature! 😊

Originally posted by: nilusoni

amazing part

asad is sooo much angry

awe very cute asya moments

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: cale

nice update
asad is so angry with najma
but his anger is also justified
loved asya's bonding
loved zoya when she said ' chalta fhirta dictionary'😆😆
loved to see the bonding of asad and tamatar
continue soon

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

Awsm lovd it 😉

Originally posted by: rhythmsangh

wow chapter was fantastic

loved it

update soon

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

fabulous...

asad forgive najma...

zoya is so cute...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

thaank u so much guys !!

Originally posted by: jas91

awe such a cute part Bano

Asad scolded Naj 4 her carelessness

buddhu injured his hand

Asya scene was too cute

i loved all of it

Naj apologized in d end

& Asad forgave her

D scene on breakfast

when Zoya & Dillu were convincing Asad was cutest

Loved it aur kitni baar bolun yaar😆

thanks so much Jas !! i'm glad u liked it !!
well, i love this buddhu ! ;D
thanks so much !! love u !!

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Bano.. you don't get depressed thinking it is not coming out well.. Infact the story is progessing very well.. Liked the way Zoya and Najma bonded during ice cream scene but later whatever Zoya went through was 😭.. so how does she come out of her current mental status and realize Asad's love for her.. and what had happened with her ..the baby.. am sure you will be doing a great job out of it.. so relax and write..

Thanks for continuing 😊

awww thanks so much Devika !! actually it doent come out the way i want everytime, thats why i feel that its not good :-/
thanks so much for the encouragement !!

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

Wow lovely chapter :)

They went to have a picnic.

Finally asad forgive her :)

Thanks 4 pm

Update soon.

thanks so much Teju !!

Originally posted by: Amulya9

awesome update Bano..
loved it..
asad scolded nazma... I can understand his fear...
ASYA r so cute n lovely...
they slept together ...hayee
wow they r gng fr picnic...would love 2 ASYA scenes more...
I'm happy all is well between asad n nazma
continue soon..

thanks so much Amu !!
i'll try to give more scenes with them but it will be difficult since Asad needs to socialize her and himself needs to back off, so that she doesnt cling to him...

love u !!

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

This was so cute

Zoya is changing for the good

I am loving the bond between Asad and Najma too

Dilshad and Zoya are coming close

AsYa scene was so cute

❤️

thanks so much Mahima !! i'm glad u r liking it !!

Originally posted by: swapno

OMG Ms MAlik you are on role!!
This chapter was so good!!
How Asad behaved with Nazma
Zoya's fear!!
and overall Dilshad the mother!!
It is just surpassed all the emotion when Dilshad decided to patch up between her children
Too good...loved it 😳

haha thanks Sadia !!
i'm glad u liked it !!