#3 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 10- 15 ! Link new thread ! - Page 27

Originally posted by: p_s05

Zoe is simply adorable. You write her delightfully.

Highly anticipate the next chapter.

awww thank u so much Parakshi !!

Bano I m so sry...
I will unres my both comment tomorrow. ..
Actually I m not well from quite few days...

Originally posted by: Aliza9300

Honestly this is one of the best Asad and Zoya scenes in this FF.
I thoroughly enjoyed the whole update :) ❤️
I apologize for not commenting earlier tho I read it just because I was so caught up with Ramadan and as eid's also coming near so...SORRY!
Update Soon!

Aliza❤️

awww thank u so much Aliza !! its ok dont worry i understand ;)

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Bano I m so sry...
I will unres my both comment tomorrow. ..
Actually I m not well from quite few days...

its ok dont worry lekin tumhe kya hua ?

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Oh Najma got tell off good he is not talking to her

He was so scared for the safety of both of them

He punched the wall he recede his room both hands injured

Now zoya have to take care of him and feed him 😃

Oh she got scared seeing his wounds want to know who hurt him

Oh she made him promise never to leave her so nice

He slept near her bed and she admire him

Dilshad and zoya was cute together to get asad to agree

Najma on her knees begging forgiveness 😭

Continue soon

haha thanks so much Anopama !! i alwas enjoy ur comments !!

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

late ho !😡 but i forgive u becoz puppy is cute !😆 kidding😆 thanks so much !!!🤗

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

awww thank u so much Parakshi !!

Originally posted by: kanchan23

<font color="#0000FF">amazing chapter...👍🏼

you write it so well...

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zoya is bonding with her child...
her hand is constantly on her belly...lovely🤗

now dilshad and zoya are bonding well...

but still uncomfortable with najma..

my poor asad is thinking...

will zoya move on with her child after she will be alright?

that thought is bothering him...poor asad

and the cute schene is...

when zoya and najma is eating icecream...sharing is caring😃

najma is so innocent...she doesn't think before eating that uski ammin ko empty icecream tub dekh kar uspe hi shak hoga...🤣.

so sweet of my asad he doesn't tell dilshad about the empty tub...brother and sister love...😃
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<font color="#0000FF">then in the mall...
my poor baby zoya...she is afraid of crowd...woh 17 years tak locked thi...that baisheena😡

thank god asad time par aa gaya verna pata ni kya ho jata...

now najma ahmed khan has to give expalanation...

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Awww Thank you so much dear !!
I'm glad u r liking it !!
Tsk tsk tsk Najma ! Not good ! Lol
Thanks for the lovely comment !! :)

Originally posted by: p_s05

Hey Princess!

It's Prashni not Parakshi😉

Hey Prashni !

I'm extremely sorry !! Actually i was thinking about a girl named Parakshi and then it came out !! I'm so embarassed !! I'm so sorry !!

Originally posted by: kanchan23

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asad is right in his place...

how can najma be so irresponsible...

she know about zoya condition and her mental state...

phir bhi woh usse mall le gayi...

but i understand najma is only 18 years...

she doesn't think that zoya conditon is that much serious...

moreover that place is not is not safe for girls...

thank god the girls are safe...

now asad is very much angry with najma...poor najma..

so sweet when zoya took his spoon and feeding him...

now zoya is again in her shell...
she is not comfortable with najma...

wow picnic...aisa idea aisi situation mein dilshad hi de sakti hai...🤗

i love the last schene...

the najma sorry part...

ab jab najma itne pyaar se sorry bolegi toh asad kaise ni manega...😃

loved the both chapter...

continue soon

P.S-sorry for late comment...kya karu aaj kal jaha dekho books books and books hi rehti hai...isliye pehle comment ni kar pae...sorry with my puppy face...sowwry
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Yeah uske POV se voh thik hai, even though she's only 18, she needs to grow up !
Haha glad u liked picnic idea ;)
I'm glad you liked it !!
Its ok i understand that studies can be busying