#3 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 10- 15 ! Link new thread ! - Page 24

Created

Last reply

Replies

929

Views

58.9k

Users

94

Likes

1.4k

Frequent Posters

Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Res

Unres


Hey little Api sorry it's taken so long.

The update was perfect as always. Loved the angry Asad, but his anger is justified

Looking forward to the next part

Love u lots


no worries its ok ! :)
thank u so much Aapi !!
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ssrdj

Beautiful update

Asad's anger is really justified.

God he cares for Zoya so much.



thanks Sarita !!
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Awww so cute update

They going on a oicnic

Me waitibg for next part 😃


thanks !!
haan picnic lol !

Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

oh my good gosh u updated before expected :O

Haiyee Asad's justified anger..
furniture todu Asad <333
how much I love ett <333
Cuteo Zoya <33 how I wish to take her home <33 kucchi kuchi koo <333
haiyee sweeto Asad n Najma ka bonding <33
Cuteypies <333

awaiting for the next update <333


achi baat hai ke nahi ? lol
mujhe bhi angry Asad bohot zyada acha lagta hai !
agar usko ghar le jaogi toh tum unke beech kabab mein haddi nahi ban jaogi ? lol
next update in 2-3 days
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

hay, Choti thanX for PM

amazing update
enjoy reading it
Loved Asad's anger

CONTINUE SOON



thanks so much bhai !!
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome!!
Loved their bonding!!
Asad's anger Oh God!!
superb!!


thanks so much di !!
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suganti

poor najma..she's feeling very guilty and had to face her brother's anger

glad that asad forgive her in the end



Originally posted by: dranzer007

Awesome update!!!

Asad's anger is really justified

Loved Asad and najma ka bonding

Continue soon and thanks for the PM...


- Sushma





Originally posted by: cutie15

Zoya is such a cutiee yr .!!
Luvd how zoya admird asad..!!
Awsum update..:*
Ty for d pm..:*





Originally posted by: anushadasi

wow so nice

asad is so understanding
thanks for the pm




thank u so so so so so so much guys !! i'm glad u r liking the story !!
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

her apology at the end was soo cutee...!!

It made me cry...!!

A lovely update...!!

Loved how Zoya was concerned for him on seeing his hurt hand...!


thanks so much little sis !!
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

I really felt bad for najma

But asad was also right she has to grow up
Love the last part
The brother-sister scene was just perfect .
Just one thing zoya asked asad to promise never to leave her alone but what about her ?
If the time come that she is going to leave him then ?
Ok not to think negative .
But personally I love to read sad scene .😉



haha thanks so much Amin !!
haha u'll see what i planned for AsYa once she'll be alright😉
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maz8

Loved the update. Amazing. Thnx for pm 😃



Originally posted by: scarletmalik

read 2 chapters together

awsome updates
loved them
loved angel nd saviour's bonding
nazma apologised nd asad hugged her
continue soon
thnx 4r pm



Originally posted by: KReyAS

love angry aak

asya sene awsom
all goes to picni
asad forgive nazma
lovely updt
cont soon
thnx fr pm



Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

Love it...😊

Update nxt part soon...😃



thanks so so much guys !!! i really appreciate it !!

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee · 7 months ago

Theme - Theme 1 : The Bag (Graphicer - WildestDreams) The Weight of Love The rain drummed softly against the glass windows of the airport, a...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 7 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".