BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
And I hope asad doesn't get to know it soon that she is married! :(

Asad Khan sounds better today 😆

Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

res😊

unres

I m a little relieved wid this updt😊

only a little relieved?? chalo koi baat nahin... at least you are relieved even if a little.😆
so my mostly guesses were right😎
Zoya lost her memory & taklu hide it 😡
Asad due 2 his condition thought he's not worthy of Zoya😭
Zoya is still confused about her behavior wid Ayaan 😕
Ayaan is angry & frustrated wid her
Shireen i always disliked her seems she's -ve or grey here also😉
Taklu asked Zoya 2 hide her ML from Zainub that's why she used 2 see in her eyes looking 4 answers mayb
Yep.
Asad's part of d updt really took my heart way🤗😭
d way he was restless 4 Zoya's safety during after accident👏
he even tried 2 find out about her through nurse & his PA😃
he sometimes wanted 2 get well soon 4 her❤️ but alas
I m scared what will b his reactions knowing Zoya's marg💔

lets see... he won't know it so soon.
& one thing i didn't get Asad was critically injured, brain was also damaged still he didn't forget her but Zoya had no injury still she forgot completely about Asad I m confused😕

It happens Dear.. memory loss is a strange thing and usually its more from shock and psychological than any physical injury... the kind of brain injury Asad had usually results in things like paralysis, blindness etc which Asad is having... and then have take to take little creative liberties as well in this kind of stories.

I also felt Asad said Zoya was independent & couragious so why she agreed wid taklu 2 marry Ayaan. I know she had ML but she didn't lost her persnality & attitude why she didn't objected its not like she loved Ayaan. In d last part u wrote she took him as his frnd only so why she married😕
if you remember previous chapter Zoya did refuse to marry Ayaan initially and to escape that she went to Paris as well.. but here the problem is even though she is independent and strong willed she had grown up to respect her father as well... she knows that her father is not entirely good but still she respects him and to an extent listens to him as well.. so that is the reason why she finally agreed to marry Ayaan.. ghaffur was pestering her too much and then she knew Ayaan, was friendly with him so finally she thought why not marry Ayaan like her father says as Ayaan is a good match for her... of course if she remembered that she is in love with some one else, then she would have fought with her father and would have never agreed to it.

precap will get an Asya flashback
is it Zoya's Fb or Asad's i hope Zoya's 😃😉.. it might be neither's .. just Authors point of view... but i haven't completely decided how to bring out that part.
continue soon😃

when r u updting SC&TF🤔

will try to update a chapter soon... but i am trying to finish this quickly.. its difficult to write both together.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Mine 😃

Hey Kausar, nice update and it did put a lot of people at ease with the zoyaan track 😆

thanks Dear... haha..i see that some are still not completely relieved.. i have really become GUL 2 now.😆.. but there is one more twist after which i think everyone will forgive me.


I knew Zoya has partial memory loss and Asad obviously because of his condition can't reach out to her. I fell so bad for him.

yea i thought everyone will guess it by the end of first chapter but only few did.😊


Hope Zoya regains her memory soon and goes back to him. But what is a story without any drama 😉

you are absolutely right... without drama its boring.😉

Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

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unress...,

thanX for PM

and one question is Asad related anyhow with Zoya,before she lost her memory?

looking forward so continue soon

hey didn't you read Asad's thoughts?.. its clear he and Zoya knew each other and were in love... or was it really confusing?... i guess the style of narration makes it confusing.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

nice update
ayaan and zoya are so confused about their relation and future
mr. siddqiue is so bad...hate him
i m feeling bad for ayaan , zoya and asad...no one is happy😭
precap...lovely, but is it a flashback
continue soon

Thanks😃... yea the situation is even bad for Ayaan.. lets see what happens in everyone's life.

ya precap is flashback.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

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Hnmm kuch thi clear hua phew
Awesome prt nd I loved it 😛
thanks Dear... glad somethings got cleared for you.😃

Huh asad had saved zoya... !!!! Buri tarah hurt hone se
That's y he gt hurt so badly 🤢 😭
yea thats why he got hurt so bad while Zoya escaped with minor injuries..
Ooohhh god... Wht was that...
Asad dream 😲 through I ddnt gt anything clearly 😕

Asad's dream if you read carefully you will know... its a reflection of what happened in their life so far... may be with next chapters you will realize it.😃

Poor asad.. He missed zoya a lot nd has done all the things to find her..
But he can goes to her nd meet na..
The fir gaya kyon nai..y he waited for her to come..
he can't go alone when he is paralyzed right... but he tried to find out about her in ways in which he can.. and also he is right now having conflicting emotions.. at times he wants to be with Zoya at other times he wants to be away from Zoya.. so with such thoughts in his mind its natural he hasn't done more to be with Zoya and bring her back to his life, like perhaps telling his parents about her and asking for their help.


Other hand zoya 😕 asad k bhoolgai...
Ony2months memory loss 🤢 hota hai aisa?????

yea can happen.. any kind of shock and trauma can can cause loss of part of the memory which is related to that.

Do one. Thing. Doosri baar accident kaardo... N the same way...
She ll gt her memory back 😳
Trust me.. Telugu movies mein aisa hihota hai 😆 😆

haha... LOL.. good idea.😆


Nd. Ayaan.. Door raho zoya se 😡 😡
She has forgotten her memory.. Asad.. But her heart... !!!!
It knws whr. She belongs 😊

Yep😃


Tho dillu rashid ko bhi nai pata zoya k baaremein 😕
Then y rasid did reacted like that when he gt to knw abut the accedent ..
Like he knows evything about them .

Rashid didn't react that way..from that call Rashid knew only that Asad had an accident and was critical .. actually he didn't see a newspaper also.. so he didn't know about Zoya till he reached Paris... there he did suspect something... that part will come later.😃

Overall gud... Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aha!, Retrograde Amnesia it is.


Well Ayaan and Zoya's marriage isn't as painful as it could be. 😳


Sneak Peak: Well that's most probably Mr.Khan's independent recollection of his recent Paris vacation. 😃 Look forward to the next chapter.


P.S If you send out update notification PMs, would also appreciate them...Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful update kaussar...
a lot of my confusions cleared ...

thanks Aarzoo.. glad your confusions got cleared.😃
so AsYa were in a relationship prior to accident .. n it had started just lately in paris itself...
it wud definitely had run a greater course infact forever hadnt it been for the accident...
Agree.😃
Asad is all the tym remembering n thinking about zoya...
hes confused as to wt it is that made her part her ways...
little does he kno that she is equally at loss regarding her life...
the dream asad had wr zoya was snatched away from him was reflection of reality if her being married to ayaan...

Bang on... you have interpreted the dream well.. actually the initial part of the dream is also significant... that symbolizes their time together in Paris.
as of now one part of asad wants zoya to b A PART of her life n other part wants to b APART frm her...
there zoya is suffering from amnesia... n her father turned out to b a cunning man...
he used simple words to keep zoya at bay frm knowing anything abt those two months in paris or rather abt asad to b more precise... Agree.. ghaffur is too cunning and knows Zoya's weak spot and at the same time he knows that Zainab is the only one who will try to make her remember Asad if Zainab had any inkling that Zoya loved Asad.
she cant accept ayaan... she doesnt kno why... but her subconscious mind doesnt let her...
n finally she decides to leave for her parents house till she gets the clue abt wts wrong ovr there...
continue soon...
p.s... vn r u gonna update SCTF... i want an update of that too...
i am actually trying to finish this off before i update SCATF... difficult to write both together.. but will try to update a chapter of that as well.
plus my exams r going fine.. js 1theory paper left... thnx fr the wishes...thats nice Dear... good luck for the paper left..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TaiLung

wow this makes lots of confusion clear

asad is longing to know to about zoya
and zoya just forget everything

and last part abt asya were awesome
cant wait for the next chapter
hope zoya will came about her past soon

hey nice to know you are following this story.😃.. and glad confusions got cleared... Zoya's memory will come back soon.. i won't dilly dally with that part..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Nd nd precap !!!!

It was their 1st meet right ?

yep.. it was their first meeting.😃

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