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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I WANNA GET INSIDE WITH HIM TOO!!!!




Zomb.



I need!

Originally posted by: Axiom

This fic is bloody brilliant!!

Thank you for writing this!

Can't wait for the next part!!!

Originally posted by: batgirl67

i love your story! it makes me smile yet pains my heart and makes me cry!

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiLover1

Omg this is so good! I hope Aahil doesn't die! Please don't kill him off! I want him to survive and be happy!!!! I love the update! Please update again soon!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh I'm a lil late! :'(




Dippu!!



Why.


*eyes welled up, lump in throat, heavy hearted*




I need a hug.

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

@Part 11:

Wow Badi Ammi, I never knew that you have Time Machine hidden in the basement and you could travel through time and space continuum, or else how could one explain your relaxed outlook on the whole "A-Stranger-returning-Sanam's Clothes" and "Sanam Telling-You-That-She-Kissed-The-Hot-Old-Artist-Who-Drew-Her Fiasco??!!" Keep it up Badi Ammi you are making progress and welcome to the 21st century Alfaalfa. Hope you had a nice flight.😆

Haya Darling I swear to God one more comment about Aahil being a "Axe Murderer" or "Serial Killer" or anything at all!!! I will ship your beloved Dr. Rehaan to the stone age, yup the same place from where your beloved Badi Ammi has just returned in her invisible time machine.😡

Aahil Sweetheart, Why do you try all this odd antics?? I know the attempt of delivering Sanam's clothes to her house personally by becoming a Courier Man instead of going to the Coffee Shop was your idea of letting Sanam's Badi Ammi be aware of the fact, that her Granddaughter is making random visits to your place these days and also to emphasize the fact that you are NOT Shoaib Sahab Version 2.0. Were you somewhere vaguely hoping that this might discourage Sanam from revisiting your place or her Badi Ammi might stop her future visits to your Humble Abode??!! Hmmm... You are a Mystery, that's why we, I mean Sanam and me love you. Muahh

Congratulations Sanam, for once your lack of Filtering the words helped you escape Badi Ammi's wrath. It was only b'cos of your Blunt Response, she believed that whatever you said was truth, b'cos normally in these situations young girls lie through their teeth or deny the whole thing all together by making innumerable false stories, by putting the whole blame on the guy. Weather your Badi Ammi would have believed the false stories or not would have been whole another Theory Of Speculation. Well putting all that aside, and now coming to the Juicy Part that is the "Kiss" ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME??!!! After all my pointers and tips, all you end up with is giving a small Peck on his Lips. I know, I know Aahil is an sexy idiot, he didn't respond to your advances, well what do you expect from him?? I thought you are a Tigress who likes to ravage and devour her prey but you turned out to be a meek Gazelle. *Sigh*!! 😕😭

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Brilliant, it hit all the right emotions with me, the sad ones mostly. I'm kinda late with this comment probably cos I'm not sure what to be typing!

This story gets more amazing with every chapter. And Aahil dying, I mean I guessed it would be something, just never thought of a brain tumor.

Your writing is perfection and I read in amazement, sorry for such a short comment. I'm still trying to take in what I just read

Love you 🤗

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

You're truly, very talented my dearest most loved Sarru.




You're amazingly brilliant. Your words your description your characters your dialogues.


All this emotions muddled jumbled.


You're brilliant sayang.



Thank you thank you thank you.


For posting for sharing for quick updates for the love I can feel seeping through my skin.


You're beautiful.

Your heart is beautiful.


And yes. That brain.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I wish you live next door or down the street so I can run straight to your house and to your room. Coz Imma need no permission to enter it would be my second home what with you there and all.




I love you Sardeep.


Such a melancholic ambience.


And everything's that is happening.



I love Aahil for not budging after she shouts at him.



His best.



And the hand on shoulder...


:'(

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

Part 12:

Finally the Epic Kiss Happened


Aahil Miya

"You are The Man" ⭐️

But Please Please Please Don't Die on Me.


But even after my continuous pleading you are still adamant to leave the world then please do fulfill some social responsibilities before departing

1) Bronzify Your Torso. Create an exact replica of your awesome abs in bronze. Its a must.

2) Please donate your sperm. The world needs to have your copies. It would be unjust to take all the awesomeness of yours to grave.

3)Make LOVE to Sanam.

4)Talk a little more, laugh more, hell laugh atleast or smile for starters.

5)Please do tell Sanam when you fell for her.

This is it for now will add something later if I get anymore bright ideas i.e., Brain Storming.