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Posted: 11 years ago
And Dippu.



She got up late right that day at his house. And he got up early.


So like when he got up. When he opened his eyes. What happened.

Paint a scene for me.


Yeah?



I love you.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lastdesire


U made me cry...omg it was so emotional my heart goes out 2 pooor sanam...shes head ova heels in l9ve wiz ahil...mayb getting rejectd wasnt dt bad...know8ng da whole truth dt he loves her back but cnt b wiz her coz hes dying z more devastating




:'(


*hugs a stranger*


That's all I can offer...lastdesire.


Last desire.



God. That's just very appropriate.


:''''(
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just really held my breath till the end and Oh My God! You
re brilliant hon! I don't know shit about brain tumors but I'm going to be all filmy and ask you to NOT let Aahil die. PLEASE.
I mean, there can be struggles of recovery and all but not death pleaaase :(
Ok. Sorry. Your fic. You get to decide. But pretty please? :')
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SapphireFlames

I just really held my breath till the end and Oh My God! You[DIV]re brilliant hon! I don't know shit about brain tumors but I'm going to be all filmy and ask you to NOT let Aahil die. PLEASE.[/DIV][DIV]I mean, there can be struggles of recovery and all but not death pleaaase :([BR]Ok. Sorry. Your fic. You get to decide. But pretty please? :')[/DIV]




Struggles of recovery.



:'(


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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for Chapter 12

(Too much wine... haha, will comment properly tomorrow!)

Unres!

Omg!

I nearly died reading this the first time. The last part... man, oh man!
The way he scooted over for her, the way he shuddered... the way he held her hand to his cheek.
THE WAY HE KISSED HER!

Amazing girl!

Really, I have to tell you... you and your story inspired me to write on SaHil :)
I think I'm in love with Aahil the artist!

And I have a surprise for you. Well, Farz and I do. I think. I gotta check with boss lady first haha!

I know, I should comment on the whole part but the end just got me!
All of what I said above, but also Aahil in his black boxers - anything sexier?! I don't think so!

Lotsa love!
Edited by Tamara27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for Chapter 13
(Too much wine... haha, will comment properly tomorrow!)

Unres

Sorry... I can't even...

This part was so bloody sad. Way to depress me, Suds :(
Suddenly, I'm rethinking my surprise...
Jokes!

I'm sad and depressed but I still want to surprise you.

I want Part 14 now.

You know I'm in love with Aahil the artist, right?
You can't take him away from me.

That's that. Full srop. End of story.

I NEED the next part asap!

Lotsa love!
Edited by Tamara27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just happened to come across this FF...and you had me in tears...its so beautiful...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Res for Chapter 13

(Too much wine... haha, will comment properly tomorrow!)



You're behinddd.



I'm already asking for part14:)


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lastdesire

U made me cry...omg it was so emotional my heart goes out 2 pooor sanam...shes head ova heels in l9ve wiz ahil...mayb getting rejectd wasnt dt bad...know8ng da whole truth dt he loves her back but cnt b wiz her coz hes dying z more devastating


omg dont cry love, have a hug!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mahwash17

What?? No, No, No, Nooo... Please, tell me I read wrong!? 😔

He cannot die. Aahil cannot die. He cannot leave Sanam like this. Oh My God, I'm crying over here. :,( Poor, Aahil. Poor me and my heart.

I never get tired of saying how beautful this story is. Gah, my feelings ae all over the place. <3 I LOVE THIS. But, I'm feeling really sad right now.

Please, let him be okay. Let him survive it through.

I loved the way you captured the suspence of his illness. They way you gave us a insight in that he does have feelings for Sanam. <3

THAT PICTURE Damn, I was smiling like a idiot when I got to that part. Beautiful thought!

I'm really crying right now, but it's tears of joy by the very last scene. It really touched my heart. <3 - Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.

I'm going to look forward to see what's going to happen next. How the convo is going to be held between Sanam and Aahil. 😳🤗


ahhh I LOVE YOU HAVE SOME HUGS 🤗🤗

pls dont cry i dont know how to comfort crying people jfc

thank you so much!!

<333

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