Let it be page 1
And it is!
I'm really sorry this is late! But hey ho! I'm here!
I love this simple style too yo! Makes me think I'm actually a real smart reader...no need to have a go at Senate cues to grasp its meaning and significance...not that it's a problem. Still. Simple is nice!
Love the characters. And your ideas. Haha on the love on the cup. And that middle aged Lady swooning. I'd swoon myself if the likes if Rehan makes me a love on my cup.
And Sanam is so funneyh! Like she doesn't even try! Too bad the men is not affected. Or don't they...?
Oh and one thing I gotta say, I felt really bad having to read that part that Sanam says 'Hai Allah...' and the words that come after. Especially the wirds that come after. I don't wanna sound like I'm this holy pious person. It really is that it would make me feel worse if I say nothing on it. So yeah.
Anyway. As I'm typing this I realise there's already a part 2??!! Say whattt!
Already! I love ya Saruu. You better have BABY ready. Part 2 of course! You're on a roll and I'm lovin' it! And and and Imma reserve a soot first lest I miss first page (of update)
Hee! Excited!! ;)
Running off to read part two!!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago