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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

Part 13:

Wow Number 13 is really an unlucky number.

I hate You Suds for making me cry over an imaginary character. Of course I knew that you going Sparks way with all the Hot and Cold attitude of Aahil towards Sanam and his secret stash of medication. But your writing made my heart heavy. I was this close to shedding tears and I hate crying.

Thanks to Farz, I did relish Part 12 thoroughly before moving on with Part 13. Yes Farz now I really need that hug.

I don't know what else to say. I'm speechless...


OMG I MADE YOU SPEECHLESS THIS IS LIKE THE BEST ACHIEVEMENT EVER OMG DONT DIE I LOVE YOU <333333333

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crystaltwirl

OH MY GOODNESS :(

He is dying and she didnt even know. How the hell do you deal with that? I mean is it even possible to deal with somethiing like this. I feel Sanam now. She has lost so many people, her parents, grandpa, and now her one true love? Why? Its like hoping for a beautiful miracle all your life, you finally get it.. only to lose it an the end. The worst part is she's helpless. And Aahil behaved like a true lover. I mean I didnt get this guy at the start.. but then got to know his famiily history. . His ammi and everything. Natural for him to isolate himself from the world that left him orphaned and alone. But hes DYING! HOW DOES HE DEAL WTH IT? Its pure agony, to know something like that but having to hide it, and keep it to yourself is just.. excruciatingly hard. I have so much to write but I dont know how to describe thiis feeling. This reminds me of a walk to remember.. except the situation is reversed.. THIS IS THE WORST PAIN EVER.. EVEN GETTING BURNED ALIVE DOESNT COME CLOSE! 😔


It's actually the hardest thing in the world, finding out that someone you love is going to die, and you know they are, and you can see it happen, slowly.

Truly awful.

Eilqugrkqgfgvqjlgqgig ANGST ANSGT ANSGT I'm MAKING MYSELF SAD.

Here have a hug 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: music1

Just one word...beautiful!!!!!!! I teared reading this part...


oh my god dont cry have a hug 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

UGH. SARRU!! NO! PLEASE! STOP IT. STOP THIS TORTURE. STAHP MAKING ME..CRY :'((

You can't just WRITE and make me CRY!! Please!! I beg of you!!
First that "Love is.." and then..THIS. :'((

This is the best piece by me. :') :'(
What!! WHAT! WHAT. EVEN. What SHOULD I DO. CRY OR JUST..CRY.
YOU TELL ME NOW. TELL ME PLEASE.

HE IS GONNA DIE! HE. AAHIL. Aahil is gonna die! DIE.
Aaahhh!! I wanna scream! Hug him. :'((

BUT. Thanks would still be my favourite. :')

I want you. But..I can't, because I am dying. :'((

PLEASE. DON'T DO THAT.

YOU ARE..LOVE! You are LOVE Sarru!! Making your readers cry is just..just.. :'((
Your writings make me go crazy with joy and sorrows. HOW COULD YOU?! HOW INDEED.

I LOVE YOU!! <3

:'(


DON'T CRY BB HUGS 🤗

Just go watch Sherlock or something jUST DON'T CRY I DIDN'T MEAN TO MAKE Y'ALL CRY JESUS CHRIST I SHOUDLVE PUT A WARNING ON THERE OR SOMETHING.

Yeah thanks is my favourite too bc I thought it was too cute. Even tho it was me that wrote it.

PRAGUUU NOOO DON'T CRYY HAVE HAPPY FACES NOT CRYIE ONES :)))))))))))))

🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. This was amazing n written so beautifully. With emotions I still can't stop crying. Very touchy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful update <3
Screwed up my heart strings :(
I need a big hug.
And the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Wow. This was amazing n written so beautifully. With emotions I still can't stop crying. Very touchy.



Thank you so very much!!

Don't cry love!

Have a hug 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadz20

Such a beautiful update <3

Screwed up my heart strings :(
I need a big hug.
And the next part soon.



HERE HAVE TWO 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for reading!

I'll update soon <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
U made me cry...omg it was so emotional my heart goes out 2 pooor sanam...shes head ova heels in l9ve wiz ahil...mayb getting rejectd wasnt dt bad...know8ng da whole truth dt he loves her back but cnt b wiz her coz hes dying z more devastating
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Posted: 11 years ago
What?? No, No, No, Nooo... Please, tell me I read wrong!? 😔

He cannot die. Aahil cannot die. He cannot leave Sanam like this. Oh My God, I'm crying over here. :,( Poor, Aahil. Poor me and my heart.

I never get tired of saying how beautful this story is. Gah, my feelings ae all over the place. <3 I LOVE THIS. But, I'm feeling really sad right now.

Please, let him be okay. Let him survive it through.

I loved the way you captured the suspence of his illness. They way you gave us a insight in that he does have feelings for Sanam. <3

THAT PICTURE Damn, I was smiling like a idiot when I got to that part. Beautiful thought!

I'm really crying right now, but it's tears of joy by the very last scene. It really touched my heart. <3 - Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.

I'm going to look forward to see what's going to happen next. How the convo is going to be held between Sanam and Aahil. 😳🤗

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