Asad-Zoya OS: Life Status: Delayed - Page 7

Originally posted by: jas91

awesome Os Noe👏👏

brilliant work👏⭐️

I want part 2😆😉

just give me that😈

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

You know what's the best part?



The endless possibility.

I agree. 😊


Noe, I'm beginning to sound oddly repetitive.

How do you do it? How are you able to capture a moment? And leave us wanting more?

😳


I'm pretty sure your other readers would (and should too) be asking for a continuation...and I'll be lying if I say I don't want it. But that's the beauty of it right? As aforementioned. What IS the continuation?


So many things you've included in this two-hour-long moment. Where to begin?


Everything.



If I have to point out one thing..coz I don't think many will...the part where he said Ammi and Najma are now able to hide how much they misses Zoya from him...that whole thing. Even of him accusing her of not keeping in touch...there's something else there. This underlying current that I felt.

They hiding their feelings in front of him. Why. He's hurting more? He's upset?


Hmm.

Whatever happens, how much ever bad it was, everyone learns to hide it after a while. Yh...a part heals, too and the part that hasn't healed yet is hidden. Here, he is not totally hung over the fact neither is she. And, there is some healing, too. But, there are things that are there, just under the surface, hidden.

And that thing you did with the company logo/emblem...a random -but no quite so-thought. A memory.

Thank you for noticing. Memories are everywhere around us.

I love you Noe.



You've once again outdone yourself.

Thank you. 😳


Having said that, I'm not asking for a continuation, I'm asking is there one? Is there a continuation. Coz I keep looking at the title and the two letters are screaming 'you fool' at me. This IS an OS. Or is it? Being foolish gives me hope.

There isn't. "Being foolish gives hope." Agree. But, there isn't. After reading everyone's response and demand for a part 2, I was very tempted to write next part. A happy ending. But, after a day, I just wanted to write the car ride to her hotel. He is going to drop her. But, that would have been it. It would have shed some more light on Zoya's psyche. This one - unintentionally - ended up being Asad-heavy. I didn't want it to become so. It just happened. But, it would still be incomplete just like this one and again there would have been demand for next part. So, I changed my mind. This is it.


And now speaking of the title. Life status. Flight delayed. They've broken up three years ago. He's still sporting a ring that could be the same one as she'd put on him. And hers is still empty from the moment she took the one from him off.

Now. The bag. The wobbly bag. What an amazing touch with the bag, Noe! Even getting it repaired got delayed.



And wanna know something else that I caught that's funny. Asad going back to the counter for more napkin/tissue (when Zoya was on the phone).


I'm guessing I got your humour. Unless it was just one of those things and I may have read too much into it.


Did I? Did I read too much into it? No, right? Coz Zoya did tear the last piece...but it wasn't enough for him was it. Haha.


Yes, it is his OCD at work, but because he fixed the wheel of her bag. Now, wheels aren't much clean, are they? He would want to wipe his hands. I would (also use sanitizer).

Okay.




You're amazing Noe! So very.


I'm very very impressed by the quality of your work.




And I honest to God love this.



Love you!



Mwah!


🤗

I see that Asad hare. No, no. Not from your Emma one. Heartbeat. Or maybe even the show. Same, but different. Oh I don't know.

I read somewhere in time again...in one go...again!

Oh...thank you. Somewhere in Time is special. I was saddest when it ended.

And. I'm still blown. As if I was reading it for the first time.

You are very generous. 😳

And. That Asad did sound like the Asad from your Asad-Haya story. Zoya is different. Yet the same. She's actually the same. You put her in different situations. And it is still Zoya. Though different. Get it?

Of course, he is show-wala Asad - at least the way I understood him and so similar to Asad from the story with Haya. Zoya is Zoya.

Oh well.


You awesome.



And I'm so blessed to have found you and read your excellent work. So contented I am.



Hugs.

Hugs. I am blessed to find readers like you.

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Amazing Os Noe

Pls give me next part & a happy ending too

The title suits well .They are now too delayed to realized thr love to each other

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: 1ksk

Great story line, Very interesting, look forward to next update.

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

AsYa meeting after 4 years!!
After breaking their engagement!! Asad still protective of her!!!
Do we hav a nxt part?

Originally posted by: TaiLung

How beautifully u written

it was awesome

I want an another part 😃

Originally posted by: sweety003

Amazing!!! Noe

So it was just delayed 😉

"Cancel nahi, Ammi. It was just delayed."

"Aapi, maine flight miss nahi ki. Main pahonch gayi thi. Flight was delayed. Delayed. That's it!"

how much essence it held 😛

would love to read if you make this 0S to TS 😳😆

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Beautifully written OS
He still wear that engagement ring
U can make it two shot or three shot, it's really interesting if u continue it.
Thanks

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Beautiful OS...the end marked a new beginning for both with Asad offering to drop Zoya at her house😊...loved it to bits

P.S.-well I loved it to bits as an OS but if you ever decide to add at least one more part to this,I would love it to molecules and even to atoms😳...😆

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Loved it...!!!

But please give us a second part as welll...!!

It was beautifully written and i could actually imagine their story...!!

Fab job you have done...!!