Asad-Zoya OS: Life Status: Delayed - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
I swear you understand their character the best! Like seriously <33333
The emotions are so real.
Are you continuing this? 😳 Please do! Although you can make up a backstory yourself but I really want to read what you had in mind!
Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Interesting concept..!Engaged to be married and a breakup..It is clear they still have feelings..Maybe a part 2??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
AHH!! I loved it !! U should so make this a TS !!! PLEASEEE ANd thanks for the PM ! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Its nice...previously together...nw after broke up still able to reach the level of being able to converse .,...and pretty much care about each other...wil there a 2nd part?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
It was very nice with a possibility of continuing...I hope you would
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Noe it was a different and really really heart touching OS! Just two hours of delay did what three years of separation due to some MU couldn't! Perfect! Thousands of thoughts are running in my mind about what must have happened before...and after! You know you write everything so well, it is becomes effortless to imagine! This concept was really nice. Hopefully you will write soon! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
fantastic story👏
u nailed it👏
the scene was runing before my eyes while reading it👏
first i thought this would be their first meeting and in this two hours delay and together in flight will make them together
but really this is totally different
and after reading that i m building 1000 reasons for their breakup😆
i was about to ask to turn it into two shots but ur note😒
no worries with these imaginations we can build up a story in mind😉😆
do write more and more like this😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
very nice pleaseee update soon
thanx for the pm
do continue this pleaseee
Posted: 11 years ago
#39
That was wonderful! Loved it, very nice writing. <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Pretty update yaar
Brilliantly done
Love it

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