You know what's the best part?
The endless possibility.
Noe, I'm beginning to sound oddly repetitive.
How do you do it? How are you able to capture a moment? And leave us wanting more?
I'm pretty sure your other readers would (and should too) be asking for a continuation...and I'll be lying if I say I don't want it. But that's the beauty of it right? As aforementioned. What IS the continuation?
So many things you've included in this two-hour-long moment. Where to begin?
Everything.
If I have to point out one thing..coz I don't think many will...the part where he said Ammi and Najma are now able to hide how much they misses Zoya from him...that whole thing. Even of him accusing her of not keeping in touch...there's something else there. This underlying current that I felt.
They hiding their feelings in front of him. Why. He's hurting more? He's upset?
Hmm.
And that thing you did with the company logo/emblem...a random -but no quite so-thought. A memory.
I love you Noe.
You've once again outdone yourself.
Having said that, I'm not asking for a continuation, I'm asking is there one? Is there a continuation. Coz I keep looking at the title and the two letters are screaming 'you fool' at me. This IS an OS. Or is it? Being foolish gives me hope.
And now speaking of the title. Life status. Flight delayed. They've broken up three years ago. He's still sporting a ring that could be the same one as she'd put on him. And hers is still empty from the moment she took the one from him off.
Now. The bag. The wobbly bag. What an amazing touch with the bag, Noe! Even getting it repaired got delayed.
And wanna know something else that I caught that's funny. Asad going back to the counter for more napkin/tissue (when Zoya was on the phone).
I'm guessing I got your humour. Unless it was just one of those things and I may have read too much into it.
Did I? Did I read too much into it? No, right? Coz Zoya did tear the last piece...but it wasn't enough for him was it. Haha.
Okay.
You're amazing Noe! So very.
I'm very very impressed by the quality of your work.
And I honest to God love this.
Love you!
Mwah!
I see that Asad hare. No, no. Not from your Emma one. Heartbeat. Or maybe even the show. Same, but different. Oh I don't know.
I read somewhere in time again...in one go...again!
And. I'm still blown. As if I was reading it for the first time.
And. That Asad did sound like the Asad from your Asad-Haya story. Zoya is different. Yet the same. She's actually the same. You put her in different situations. And it is still Zoya. Though different. Get it?
Oh well.
You awesome.
And I'm so blessed to have found you and read your excellent work. So contented I am.
Hugs.
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