Asad-Zoya OS: Life Status: Delayed

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anu

@sweety003

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Amazing!!! Noe

So it was just delayed 😉

"Cancel nahi, Ammi. It was just delayed."

"Aapi, maine flight miss nahi ki. Main pahonch gayi thi. Flight was delayed. Delayed. That's it!"

how much essence it held 😛

would love to read if you make this 0S to TS 😳😆

Quote

Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Beautifully written OS
He still wear that engagement ring
U can make it two shot or three shot, it's really interesting if u continue it.
Thanks

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Beautiful OS...the end marked a new beginning for both with Asad offering to drop Zoya at her house😊...loved it to bits

P.S.-well I loved it to bits as an OS but if you ever decide to add at least one more part to this,I would love it to molecules and even to atoms😳...😆

Quote

Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Loved it...!!!

But please give us a second part as welll...!!

It was beautifully written and i could actually imagine their story...!!

Fab job you have done...!!

Quote

Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

An OS, is it really complete, a Part 2 continuation perhaps, perhaps not, endless possibilities. - Life Status: Delayed

"...They just became better in hiding it from me."

He evidently in spite of everything still hurts over the 3 year old break-up.

If I'm not on another tangent today - Significant and Symbolic: "Just Delayed Not Over"

"...A clean break was the need of the hour."

"What was he doing? Why was he slipping into old habits?"

"All these years? You couldn't get it repaired?"

"Done. At least for now. You really need to get it repaired."

"...but she had humoured the manly man in him and allowed him to fix it temporarily."

"After their engagement, he just wore his engagement ring."

"She looked at her own empty ring finger. She had taken off her ring immediately. He had surreptitiously checked her hands as soon as they were in his sight."

She needed a break, for whatever practical reason, he remain holding on with hope, thus still wearing the ring.

"Cancel nahi, Ammi. It was just delayed."

Flight was delayed. Delayed. That's it!"

Just delayed! - Enthralling read! ⭐️

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago