||~ The Sunshine of My life #5 AsYa FF ~ Prt42A&B P125 THR6 PG 140 - Page 65

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Gaffur is an enemy who turns out to be family, lets see how it turns out to be when they find out about it. A sensitive matter to deal with

AH Glad you liked Aahana moments, sometimes I think I overdo it, because if I wouldn't put in her moments, the story would run its course and get over 😆 Aahana keeps increasing the number of chapters.

Waiting to see the volcano(Asad) erupt with Ghaffur's revelation...
hahhahaa... You portrayed so cutely.. We aren't to be blamed.. 😆😉
and as for increase in number of chapters we would be happy...😳😆

you updating now??😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome update as always!!
Loved it to the core!!
Gafoor is such a bad person and hope he doesn't turn out to be zoya's father otherwise it would be disastrous..
Love the way zoya understands asad and asya has a lot of understanding, love and care in their relationship.. It always warms my heart seeing such true, sweet and beautiful love..
Zoya surely knows how to calm his anger and I'm happy that asad now shares everything with her..
The bandage part was cute where asad was like now I know how to calm u down and it would be useful when we fight..
Love the dinner part!! Asad feeding ahana and that sweet baby approving the food as a tester😆
Ahana has always been the cutipie, she's just tooo adorable..Love her loads muuah!
Love the way zoe cares for ahana, she literally reprimanded asad for feeding her spicy rice but later it became normal by ahana making her parents laugh..
The part where asad wanted zoya to sing a lullaby was cute and sweet..
I really loved that part where his head was in her lap and she made him go to sleep..
Raabart and mona are amazing as always.. Love the friendship and mischievousness they share..
Ayaan did share his feelings with her and I'm happy that bro in law and sis in law get along soo well
Beautifully written
Do continue asap
Thanks a lot for the pm
Hugs..


Gaffur is Zoya's father, there's never been a suspense on that. But like every test, they'll pass this one too. Aahana's a charmer yes 😆
Zoya is the best Ammi, she cares most for the baby, maybe a bit more than Asad too. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

awsome update👏

loved asya's understanding
arghh...hate gaffur😡
loved d devar-bhabhi convo
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm😊


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome part!! Loved it!! Zoya calming down Asad!! Ahana Ms.Cutie !! Asad feeling calm!! Ayaan-Zoya bond well!! Superb & emotional!! Gafoor 😡... time's to pay for ur deeds


Thanks dear 😊 Gaffur will pay of course.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

I loved this sooo much

asya and ahaana eating was sooo cute
Loved how ASad went from all depressed to all naughty type with Zoya
thanx for the pm
update soon


Thank you glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Loved the update so much...

Asya and aanu...no words to describe how entertaining they r!!

Mona n rabert...cool talks!!! Just like buddies...

Lets see how asad reacts to the past thing...
Continue soon


Asad and his past are a sensitive issue Thanks so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Well AsYa are bounded together by one soul, which was once again reiterated in this chapter. Words no longer justify their relationship.

AsYa are one soul, and that needs no proof 😉

"That's not the point, I made all your favourites today and I was waiting for you to react on it and all you're doing is playing around with her, as if she's some food tester. Is my cooking so bad?"


The family moments were entertaining.


Putting Asad off to sleep was beyond adorable and beautiful.

I am glad that it touched most of you, I love such scenes, writing them is even more fun.


"Zoya motioned him to talk softly lest her two babies woke up demanding her presence."


A captivating introspect. That just came out of no where, but it sounded so perfect.


"...she smiled flashing her milky whites at him. And then bent forward to his plate, opening her mouth for more food making her parents laugh uncontrollably."


Aahana just oozes cuteness and so does all her scenes.

Ayaan and Zoya were charming, the fact that they had the conversation they did in the presents of a sleeping Asad, made it all the more endearing.


Gaffur shares a profound history with Asad, interesting play out for the upcoming chapters.

Surely dramatic, you'll have to decide if its interesting.

There was a new facade to Asad's personality present in this chapter, one of easiness, calm and liberated happiness, his lighthearted scenes with Aahana and Zoya were enchanting.

Rightly pointed so, It was intentional to show the difference in Asad, how everyday he is moving away from his past and taking steady steps by leaving behind a lot that hurts him. Anger is his weakness and its the first time he was able to overpower it with smiles and laughter.


Your comments always make me so happy. I am always so eager and excited to read your feedback 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sabrinsz91

Its really nice that Zoya can calm Asad down and make him understan the situation in a different light.
Loved the cute family together time. Its good to know Ayaan is so matured and understand situations really well and wants the families to be in peace. Really loved Zoya and Ayaan's bonding.
It s really touching and very sad to know what Asad is being through.
Loved the update sooo much 👏 ⭐️


Zoya's the only one whose been able to do that 😊

Ayaan is mature, after all he's been brought up by Asad in a lot of ways.

Thanks so much dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

a very cute update...!!

Loved it to bits!

Each and every scene has been depicted beautifully capturing the emotions as well as it's innocence!

Aahana is just too cute for words!



Thanks so much dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

aanu and her antics are just sooo cute ...luv her more n more ...
luvd d way zoya supports asad ...
update soon
thnx for pm


Thanks 😊

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