Originally posted by: p_s05
Well AsYa are bounded together by one soul, which was once again reiterated in this chapter. Words no longer justify their relationship.
AsYa are one soul, and that needs no proof 😉
"That's not the point, I made all your favourites today and I was waiting for you to react on it and all you're doing is playing around with her, as if she's some food tester. Is my cooking so bad?"
The family moments were entertaining.
Putting Asad off to sleep was beyond adorable and beautiful.
I am glad that it touched most of you, I love such scenes, writing them is even more fun.
"Zoya motioned him to talk softly lest her two babies woke up demanding her presence."
A captivating introspect. That just came out of no where, but it sounded so perfect.
"...she smiled flashing her milky whites at him. And then bent forward to his plate, opening her mouth for more food making her parents laugh uncontrollably."
Aahana just oozes cuteness and so does all her scenes.
Ayaan and Zoya were charming, the fact that they had the conversation they did in the presents of a sleeping Asad, made it all the more endearing.
Gaffur shares a profound history with Asad, interesting play out for the upcoming chapters.
Surely dramatic, you'll have to decide if its interesting.
There was a new facade to Asad's personality present in this chapter, one of easiness, calm and liberated happiness, his lighthearted scenes with Aahana and Zoya were enchanting.
Rightly pointed so, It was intentional to show the difference in Asad, how everyday he is moving away from his past and taking steady steps by leaving behind a lot that hurts him. Anger is his weakness and its the first time he was able to overpower it with smiles and laughter.
Your comments always make me so happy. I am always so eager and excited to read your feedback 😆
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