AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 7-Part 23(Last)-Page 106-17/6

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

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SovaSana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

awesome update

asya married

i am so happy and they have a daughter too

such a cute name-mehreen

waiting for an epilouge

do continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

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Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Great job yaar

Beautifully done

Wonderfully written

About this

The chapter was lovely & enjoyable to read but seriously two part in zoya 's writing

One they chose atif's favorite name for their daughter & her convo with humi just made me to cry

All her sentences about asad was lovely

The last their emotions were not unrecognized any more to each other was just perfect .

Love the whole ff & hop you to start a new one on asya & do pm me .

Now you deserve this

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Honestly Beautiful.

Simply loved it.

It felt so clean. I hope you understand what I mean.

It was like this was meant to be.

Fabulous Chapter Anki.

My most favorite part was :

There She was!! Standing in one corner of the empty terrace, she leaned a little on the railing and stared at the distant stars. Winds kissed her sari's open end and it danced and fluttered to its tunes. Her straightened hair that was left open was also not making any attempt to stay in place.

And what happened from there on... They way he comes and stands beside her. Lovely! Beautiful! Breath taking!

I can't wait for the next...

Thank you so much for the lovely comment 🤗

yeah.. i know what you mean.. 😊

it's always a pleasure to read your comments 😳🤗

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Morsmorde

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

this story was really awesome. 😃
i will miss it. 😛
the end was just perfect. 😳
and good that zoya told asad about eveything she wrote in her diary. ❤️
especially this lines , "Dates do not fascinate me Asad. It keeps reminding me of the lost time. This Diary is a record of all the good and bad memories of my life. I always wanted to remember the feelings that I have, and not when I have them."
after two years of marriage they got most wonderful gift and joy of their life, Mehreen Ahmed Khan. 😳
Our Emotions are no longer Unrecognized.
there could be no better ending other than this lines. ❤️

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BeIndependent

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Awesome...fantastic update..👏👏

i loved every part of this update plus the complete story..😳

loved the way Zoya told Asad abt her diary...diary...hayee...😳😆..what else could be a perfect end of this story other than diary writing...Superb...👍🏼

Asad..Zoya ..Mehreen ..happy family...😳😆

please start your next story soon...😳

Keep writing.😳..i will miss this story.😭...u noe its very unique coz of no meaw meaw...😆...thank u for beautiful love story...😃

thanks for pm..😊

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

wonderfull n fabulous...

totally luv it...

beautifully written...

asya are so cute...

luv the way hw zoya told to asad about her diary n hw important it is to her...

zoya gave birth to a baby girl...

a beautifull n perfect family...

really hope u will be start a new story soon...

thx fr the pm...

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written...😊

thanks a lot... 😛

Originally posted by: Ramlath
Wow... Awesome story...

thank you so much 😃

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: imcooldude
it was a really nice, but feeling little sad coz it was last part...,
so will you starting new story, if Yes then plz..., on AsYa(kabhi)

Everything has to end someday right? 😳

awww..don't feel bad 😛

i have still not decided anything on a new story...

but if i write, it will surely be on AsYa only 😊

thank you so much for the lovely comment 😃