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Sorry, I thought I comment but I only suggested actors for Karan n Jasleen's roles. Cumn to both of d parts, Asad n Karan hv some ego but at least they r not MCPs. Zoya n Jasleen r type of grey or u can say light grey characters but they r also very nice. Hope Asad wud not put down n taunt Zoya like MCPs. I hate such men. I talking abt d boys like Zoya n Jasz taught lesson to wid d help of gay boys. Hv u decided faces for Karan n Jasz? Then it vl be easier to read d story imagining them? U r one of the or may be the only writer who is showing one of d leads younger than his female lead by 3 years. U were questioned even for showing Asad, Ayaan n Zoya of d same age. All were even shocked to see Humeira elder than everyone. I wud not hv mind if u hv even shown Zoya elder than Asad. Come on, its common for girls to be elder than boys. If in many stories, Asad can be shown elder to Zoya by 5, 10 or even 15 years then y can't it be other way round for once in d form of Ayaan n Humeira. As for d story, I hope u show d leads as equal n not only Asad hvng upper hand like in many stories. It really shows as if women r always supposed to weaker than men. I am yet to read d initial parts which I vl read n comment. I only started reading 4m Gaffur, Razia n Zainab part. I always luk for ur story to be updated as its different 4m many other stories. I love how showed Zoya as a mean girl. Some may not be liking her like dis. If it was Asad like ds then he wud been appreciated a lot for dis. But, I vl support dis Zoya till she does not does sumthn cheap. Update soon n PM me😊.
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