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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice start 😊
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Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Nice update

thanks but ill like if you tell me a little more in detail your thpughts about the story and concept like a reviewif you liked it please spted the word so many note ppl read it its going to be a full on asya story but its necessary to know about the family backgroung of

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Originally posted by: yumna.imad
Nice start 😊
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would love a more detailed response and if ypu like it please do spread the word so more ppl ...read it ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice start
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice start
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Please give me a detailed review and if you liked it please spread the word
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Chapter 3:rashid to do his md in delhi maulana azad college age 22 Gauffar suffered from jaundice so one year gap now gauffar age 22 doing bEd

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I didn't saw u update two parts
Ghafoor is anwer son & his father enjoyed his life
He saw that his father just used his Ammi & doesn't love her
He want some relaxation for her Ammi in the form of good bahus
So he completed his course
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
I didn't saw u update two parts
Ghafoor is anwer son & his father enjoyed his life
He saw that his father just used his Ammi & doesn't love her
He want some relaxation for her Ammi in the form of good bahus
So he completed his course
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

no she thats what i am trying to tell its not that gauffars dad dint love his ammi bit he loved all three of his wives its is possible its a bit more deep do read the two parts together thanks for replyingi downloaded a pic from the net and saved it in my phones picture gallery how can i use that as my profile pic?do read the ladies thought too

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I just found this FF I just PMed u about it to

The updates were good but when are Asya coming into the story???

I like the story so far though 😃

thanx for the pm and please if possible send the link with it as well it helps me a lot

Update soon excited to read more

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1985 Delhi Rashid had finally started his MD in gastrointestinal surgery ya he was very good student he dint have any particular views about marriage and his future wife but he was sure he wanted a companion not a obedience machine but he respected his father a lot and his father don't want Rashid to find a bride on his own so he agreed that he won't befriend any girl but he put forward a condition to his father that before marriage he would like to meet the bride once.Rashids mother wanted the qualities she had in her future daughter in law maybes if possible her replica but Rashids father understood and said to himself well Ali miya whatever be your perception of an ideal woman he had understood his son thought differently although he felt his wife was the example of an ideal woman his son was irritated when his mother don't give her own views Rashid carved for a different viewpoint so he could take an appropriate decision well youngsters sure we're wired why did they want to have a wife who would challenge their view Mr Ali felt that a woman's view should be restricted to the kitchen, he said i don't ask my begun why did you was my clothes with xyz washing powder instead of abc... Humph but Rashid had always been a dutiful and obedient soon so he felt that us keeping all his issues aside he would get a get a (making irritated faces) Doctor bahu .Rashid mother was even more horrified of this proposal she did try to make Rashids abbu understand but like... she always agreed to her husband last word1985 Luknow Mr sayed akhtar and Mts akhtar had twin daughters born in the year 1964 named dilshad and shireen akhtar .Mr Akhtar was a high scool teacher now retired while his both the daughters were now 21 year in age although they were twins not identical though but still they say ma that twins are like a shadow of each other but both his daughter were poles apart.One was graceful, shy, timid, the agyakari one and the other was jhasi ki rani , she loved life on her own terms... Dilshad was a Doctor doing her internship and Shireen had finished her home science course. Mr akhtar was proud of Dilshad no doubt but he was worried there was no one in his own village as qualified as Dilshad and she would not marry anyone less than her. Dilshads radio don't allow her to do her MD lest she becomes so qualified that
she doesnt find a groomShireen was confused how did her sister turn out to be she was sure if dilshad got a chance she would have run to Delhi meet Indira Gandhi and demanded a special constitution and state for women humph...Shireen tried to recall an argument with Dilshad where Dilshad was telling her about a state or was it a country she was confused newspapers sometimes called India a state to... back to the point Dilshad told her that there was a foreign country exclusively for men so why shouldnt India also... Shireen hardly understood Dilshad talks making dum aloo and achari bhindi were more easy. Today 1987 Mr akhtar was very happy he had gotten an worthy proposal for Dilshad.Dilshads dadi don't allow her to do her MD but she was not the one to back out she instead did her diploma in ENT fit one year , the guy was a doctor a highly qualified one to and The boy Rashid had desired to meet the girl once before getting married showed that the Guys Dishad thought were ideal to be married to existed so the guy was coming tomorrow morning. Sayed: Beta Shireen a boy is coming to see Dilshad do prepare her. Shireen:gulp thought... why don't her father tell her to dance to garbs for the whole night that would have been easier when shireen was thinking all this her father was busy describing rhe boy, his qualification which she dint hear.Shireen:Appi meri pyari didi papa said a boy is coming to see you tomorrow Abbu is really happy so please cooperate Dilshad:yes Shireen don't worry. Shireen punched herself was this really her sister but then she thought that Dilshad understood that husband comes first then profession Dilshad to herself:Coming to may me ill see that after this you don't want to may at all he he heee...,. Tomorrow's came Dilshad got up early prepared her special make up kit and one hour before the boy was to come locked herself in the room and prepared to get ready. She smiled and I said first impression is the last impressionDishad went opened the make up kit pained her face black and her lips deep red she pit contact lens that made her eyes black hiding the lovely green colour she kept a small bottle of isocyanide in a small bottle that resembled the perfume then she wore a ghagra and covered her head till her neck with two duptas so her face wasnt visible she also kept a pan which would ensure that her teeth would look red she saw herself in the mirrior she looked horrifying perfect even the superstar Dharmender wont be able to resist her now perfect CHAPTER:3-B

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