One Night...... (A SaAhil two shot.) pt2 upd june 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful! I loved the camaraderie they share despite that not being seen for miles anywhere in the show. But I'd love to see this happening in the show eventually. The comfort they share, the small talk, the silent support of each other and yet the presence of the underlying currents of attraction.
I promise I'll give a longer comment on the second part if time permits... Erm... Not that it matters but take that as an incentive to update quickly? 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
amazing TS soupy..

cant wait for part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
That was amazing.
Do continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just amazing
beautiful Os and
w8ng for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
omg!!!👏 cant wait for the next update!!! this is lovely! pleeaasseee do write more on SaHil!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very heart warming story, loved it so much, I can totally imagine Aahil and Sanam having this conversation, wish cvs plan some sensible track with them.. Beautiful writing, please do write more, eagerly waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
WOW
Ahil talking about the night, stars and moon and asking Sanam about her opinion on love? Seems impossible at the moment but with your skills of writing, I could picture it all. And I would like to see something like this taking place between the two in the show. Not cheesy, not too flimsy but so real and effortless.

Great start. Looking forward to read the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

This is just beyond perfect and amazing. You are a beautiful writer Soup. Amazingly talented. 👏

I loved it. Loved it. The kitchen part. Aahil and Sanam's small conversation about love and him sneaking around to eat that sensuous delight. 😆 ( on that. Nothing could be better than this name for her kheer. 😆 ) Everything is so beautifully written.

And I was literally laughing when he tried to start the conversation and blurted out 'beautiful night.' 🤣 And then the way he was cursing himself mentally for that. 😆

Continue soon dear. I am hooked now. 😊


Thanks...😳...a lot...😳😊 Seriously, I am overwhelmed with the response on this one...hope to do justice to part 2...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: diana72

its so touching to c tht sahil had a truce moment. his thought abt her r running loose n he cnt seem to control them...the convo between them was beautiful...am glad u have written this piece...it gives much pleasure to read it...do continue .. ..tq


Thank U...a truce moment...yes...though they both don't want to admit it...it is just One Night...Will it change anything?😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Soup!

You cannot do this! You simply cannot!!!


Why do we have to waittt.


It's like serving us warm kheer *I like mine cold :)* and just after our first sensuously delighting mouth...you take it away saying you'll serve it in a day or two (and the portion shall be smaller...)


I WANT IT!!!


Amazing this is! So very! So very veryyy!

It's like raining SaAhil fanfic today...I mean first earlier today I got this...

Then this

And then mah darling Pragya gave us this



Awesome you guys!


I'm so very very happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Hayye! You all make me so very happy!!


Edited:

And this too!!


I love today!


Farz,

Thank U...😆

Kheer...I love it slightly warm...and I loved your analogy😆

Thanks for the links..checking them out soon...

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