One Night...... (A SaAhil two shot.) pt2 upd june 7 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

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its always amazing to read u sumi .

Originally posted by: namzie

wow we really need SaHil FF ...totally devoid of it .thanks Soup . needless to say its beautiful ! cant wait for the second one

Originally posted by: Laila2009

Chicksoup, You did an excellent job! I never knew you wrote fan fiction. Very good imaginary created; the story line grabbed my attention and kept me intrigued..When it comes to romance; I see Sanam more like her father - practical and realistic...not easily caught up in romantic emotions...she has too many responsibilities in life for that to happen...I hope the writers keep true to that image, you most certainly did. keep up the good work...when are we going to see the second part?

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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Recharge karwao! :@

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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now back to comment 😆

Disclaimer : Commenting as a READER of Fiction not Fan-fiction 😆 (I hope none mis-interprets the meaning of the 2 terms 😆)

hmm kaafi aachi thi.. hmm hmm better thi.. kyunki iss mein dher sara khana added tha 😆 how so meee 😆

acha frank thoughts..

As a reader of fiction (not fan fiction! 😆) this was NOT sweet...

this was kind of ---- warm..

wwarm like a just made naam rooti in a chilly winter night!!! <333

Or Warm like the gloves-- when one rubs their icy freezing cheeks with them in a chilly evening sunset...

Warm..

That warm...

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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Oh my! Soup. This was so so excellent! God, the people here write so well man. *hope one day, i too become one of them* 😆

Oh the fic! This was super brilliant! I just loved their "kheer mulaqaat" Err..Sensuous Delight (see the pun?😆)

Its so good. I just loveddd it like anything! Aahil, lol. "Beautiful Night? Seriously?" 😆 That was so funny! I love these mouthing parts in between, gives that extra touch 😆

Their talks on love? 😲 Already?? 😲😆 I loved how he finds Sanam and her ideologies about love, too real and realistic. 😆

Sanam has a thing with her desserts. Whats next in store for us? As in..dessert? 😉😆

This was brilliant stuff.

Please be up with the 2nd part soon! Like for real SOON!! Okay??

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

The story was amazing, it makes me wonder about the times where SaHil will have those kinda talks, if they will even have any, right now they just have to get past the screaming and planning each other's murder😆

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith

Wonderfully written Soup! 😳


Aahil- "Love...? What is your definition of love?"

Sanam- "Love?...Love ...is...I guess..it is an understanding...a
promise you make when you are bound to a person...by ..say,
birth...like your parents and siblings and all..or by
friendship..or by...marriage...I guess. It is a humanly
emotion...there's no need to bring the stars and moons into
it!"

For some I really liked Sanam's definition of love.

Ah, how I am craving for 'Sensous Delight' now...meaning kheer ofcourse, what else 😛

Kindly, pardon my 'blah' response to this deliciously well written first part of the SaHil Two Shot. Feels so good to see you returning to writing stories. 'Caged'(even though incomplete) was such an emotional short story 😒

Looking forward to the next part! You are a marvellous writer!
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Originally posted by: nikki.171

Beautiful! I loved the camaraderie they share despite that not being seen for miles anywhere in the show. But I'd love to see this happening in the show eventually. The comfort they share, the small talk, the silent support of each other and yet the presence of the underlying currents of attraction.
I promise I'll give a longer comment on the second part if time permits... Erm... Not that it matters but take that as an incentive to update quickly? 😆