SaHil OS: In his Arms

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Everyone,
This is my first OS ever. I've always been a silent reader on the forum but as I stressed earlier we need more FFs, OS, and SS on SaHil so here I am taking the lead with one. This is an OS on a Junoon moment I really wanted to see in today's engagement episode.
Wish me luck and please comment!



"Ya Allah!" exclaimed Sanam finally frustrated at her umpteenth attempt at tying her dories. It was Azhar and Asma's engagement this evening and as Asma had taken a liking to Sanam, she had sent Sanam a surprise dress to wear for the occasion. A beautiful turquoise Ghagra Choli with golden embroidery. Sanam had squealed out of delight at the sight of it then. But right now this was just too damn annoying.

"Allah Miya Pai Gaya Pangaa," she made a face in the mirror. "Woh Jallad Jin tho mujhe khaa jayega! Abi tak Jalebi aur Samose bee pesh nahin kiye aur itne dher se isse band ne ki koshish kar rahee hoon ye bee nahin hua. Kya Karoon?!"

And as she had predicted, Aahil Raza Ibrahim was on his way to bark orders at her. "God, ye larkhi ek kaam dhang se nahin karti. Maine kaha tha ki theek 8 baje snacks ley ana. Lekin mautarma abhi tak ghayab hain. Aaj tho iskee khair nahin hai."

He hurried down the steps to her room. For some reason, it seemed so far away today.

Sanam back in her room was oblivious to the storming Aahil and was still impatiently trying her luck at her dories. There were three of them and she had managed to pull together the very last one. Finally giving up, she decided to shout for help.

"Latif! Laatiiiff..patha nahin mere awaaz ja bi rahee hogee ya nahin!" she rushed towards the door to shout again but as she opened the door, she collided with something hard and stumbled backwards. She was anticipating a hard collision with the ground but it never came because a pair of muscular arms grabbed her just in time.


Sanam opened her big eyes and met a black sea in Aahil Raza Ibrahim's eyes. His intense stare made her uncomfortable but also kept her glued to it. Try as she might she could never look away. She searched his black orbs for some clue of him being human. Because deep down she knew those eyes spoke volumes and he indeed was no Jallad Jin, it was all a pretense. But she just wasn't able to read them.

Aahil was lost in Sanam's big brown eyes. Her kajal beautifully smudged below her waterline made them even more ethereal. Her eyes were trying to read his nervously.
They always landed in awkward situations like this and he just wasn't able to pull away from her magnetic stare. It just kept him frozen in his place.

As Aahil came into his senses he realized that his hands were touching her bare skin and there was a tangled mess at her back. As his hand moved slightly, Sanam too became aware of this and tried to straighten up. She quickly pulled away and twisted the dories around her finger in an attempt to close the blouse as much as she could. She even turned around slightly before realizing that if she did that, she would be totally exposing her bare back to Aahil.

"Woh woh woh main Latif," she stammered nervously. She impatiently closed her eyes and breathed out. "Woh mujhe iss blouse ke saath..I mean mujhe help chaiyye thee tho main Latif ko bula rahee thee" she finally murmured.

Aahil stared at her quizzically and then a sudden glance behind her reflected her situation. The mirror said it all.

Aahil closed his eyes and pinched his forehead. "Ye larkhi muje paagal kar de gee," he thought.

" Lao main kar doon," he offered and reached out to her but as he stepped forward, she stepped back.

"Nahin, aap? Aap kaise?" her eyes bulged out, awestruck at his offer. "Latif ko buladain please."

"Latif bahar hai! Main help kar sakta hoon warna aisee aa jao."

Of course the latter wasn't really an option so she moved forward but didn't turn around.

"Turn around!" he growled.

"Aap aise kar do na please," her eyes pleaded with him and somewhere in the corner of his heart he felt her embarrassment and touched the switch behind him. Darkness suddenly engulfed them but moonlight streamed in from the small window in her room.

He gently turned her around and she didn't argue this time.


Her hair was undone and was now covering her back. He gently swept it away and she shivered as her back lay exposed in front of him. Aahil caught the middle dori and began to tie it. His knuckle unconsciously touched her soft skin and she jumped slightly. The dori in his hand was tugged forward as electricity jolted up his arm as well.

They were definitely attracted to one another but were oblivious to it. Aahil had been with many girls but none of them were like Sanam nor did they wear complicated clothes like her. Sanam had just been in a heartbreak from her broken engagement so she wouldn't even know if love came knocking on the door.

Aahil succeeded in tying her middle dori and quickly caught a hold of the topmost dori, the last one. Sanam was breathing heavily and there were so many sensations in her tummy. His every move was sending a million shocks through her body and she had almost forgotten her Samosa and Jalebi tension.

Aahil's knuckle kept brushing against her velvety skin and it was making him go senseless. He was trying to be careful but it was a dori after all and he couldn't take years to tie it. Every time he moved quickly he touched her skin and it made his heart race.

After what felt like eons, he finally swept her hair back in place, covering her now laced up back and let her go.

Sanam had a tear in her eye. She was so grateful for this gesture and especially that of him turning the lights off to make her feel comfortable, that she didn't know how to express her gratitude.

"Thank you," she whispered but he was already gone.

Of course he had heard the thanks but something inside him had clicked and he didn't want to stay in front of her for another second. He didn't know how to react to a thank you. Especially because he didn't usually get many thank yous. But it wasn't just this. There was more to it. This girl made him feel different. And Aahil Raza Ibrahim was well off without any feelings.

Hmmm.. it seems rushed..but comment and let me know about it. Thanks!

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arshi_luver thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Not even one comment? Is it that bad? cliched?? Even negative comments are appreciated...come on guys
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its nt bad its amazing write more
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Oh my gosh this was so good <3

I dunno why but I can't seem to press the like button though :/
Keeps coming up with an error thing.

What if this happens in the show?
It would be AWESOME!

This is great love, the descriptions, there actions- it was gawjus <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suds.

Oh my gosh this was so good <3

I dunno why but I can't seem to press the like button though :/
Keeps coming up with an error thing.

What if this happens in the show?
It would be AWESOME!

This is great love, the descriptions, there actions- it was gawjus <3


thank you, but loved yours more👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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my dear!!!!!! u have got to be kidding me...negative comments ...no way...its all positive...its so expressive...i totally cn imagine them both standing ...feeling awkward n drawn to each other...fabulous ...wonderful...n tq so much...i thoroughly enjoyed reading it 👏 ⭐️
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Unres
love it superb
just amazing
wonderful Os
plz write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is an awesome piece of work. I loved reading it. Do post some more please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is excellent! Clichd yes! But they say cliches always work!😉
There's a unique way to make cliche sound more realistic. And my friend, you have done it beautifully.
It's all positive here!
Loved and just loved their eyelock, that intensity they feel, that awkwardness, that subtle attraction, hard to ignore.
Amazing! Just amazing!!
Do write more man. Seriously!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful..dts da most app word 4 it

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