One Night...... (A SaAhil two shot.) pt2 upd june 7 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Pori

WOW

Ahil talking about the night, stars and moon and asking Sanam about her opinion on love? Seems impossible at the moment but with your skills of writing, I could picture it all. And I would like to see something like this taking place between the two in the show. Not cheesy, not too flimsy but so real and effortless.

Great start. Looking forward to read the next chapter

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Catch me if u can hehe

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Wow, Laila!

Thank U so much for reading and commenting...means a lot, really...especially since we usually don't get each other ...😳😆

Yes...I see more of Asad in Sanam...too many responsibilities like U said...but she is a woman...there is a yearning in her...even when she wants to be practical, a part of her actually wonders...she sensed Aahil the day he knocked at her door, and Dilshad answered him...and wondered slightly.

Sanam can be convinced without much difficulty...unlike Asad.

So long as she does not get bitten...if that were to happen, Aahil would have to deal with a stone heart!😉

Second part up today or tomorrow...relatively free...hope it lives up to expectations...😆

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Fiction reader kahi ki...😛😆

Hope U really liked it...

Haan toh I did toh 😲

Dekho na kitna baaadaaa comment diyaaa maine 😡 😆

DP- haan...Confused Ahmed Khan!😆

Siggy...AWESOME!!!!!👏 Didn't find it such a classsic scene when it aired...standing alone, it looks really good!👏

apne doosra aur teesra kaam nahi kiyaa!!! 🥱 😆

Awww..U found it warm...🤗

That's exactly what I intended...😊

Haanthat warm!! jo apke huggyy mein hota hai 🤗

and what you say? I DIDNT LIKE IT.. HUH!!! 😡 😳

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Home alone...😭😆

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Incentive enough...😆 Thanks...😳

Yes the underlying currents...will one night make any change in their equation? Will it not take many nights?😉😆

Originally posted by: Laila2009

I meant it sincerely - you did a very good job..I do not welcome a lot of fan fiction...most turn me off after the first paragraph, but you got me...and you made the characters real and give them dialogue that was interesting...I like the curiosity both had about learning about each other; what they think etc...that's what people do and is so often missing in dramas...Of course Sanam is like all women who wants to be romanced etc...she wants what all young women want but never gives herself permission to have it because she either does not have time or fears getting hurt...i hope the writers build on these elements I see, but knowing my luck, they will screw this romance up big time like they did with the Asad and Zoya...as I wrote elsewhere, I like this young lady more than I do Zoya's character...the writers have done a decent job, thus far.

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

btw .. Reply ASAP.. Needed..

Originally posted by: nikki.171

Considering your fear of cheesiness and the way SaHil just are, I am guessing it will make many nights to significantly change their equation. But that also depends on what is coming into the next part. You never know. Oops.. you're the writer so correction: I never know what has happened to Sanam might just nudge their relationship one step forward. On second thoughts every big and small detail counts. Afterall boond boon se hi toh 🤔 something ( Blame my memory for this one! Is the word sagar? ) banta hai. So one night might just be enough?
Whatever happens, I am sure I will enjoy it.

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Farz,

Thank U...😆

Kheer...I love it slightly warm...and I loved your analogy😆

Thanks for the links..checking them out soon...