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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
Update
Soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting. Looking forward to the update.
Congrats on the new story. You have wonderful writing skills.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Ankie another masterpiece by you👏👏👏
I will be waiting

I love the prologue & the theme

Its different😃

What a father is this Siddiquie😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Sunshine of My Life has a story left to say,which will take a while to finish. But I wanted to pen the idea down for this and post. I love the book too man, it touched me beyond any other work I've read so far, even though its not like there isn't any better or well written book then this one. But thanks so much.. I'll be looking forward for your comments. Do you read Sunshine of My Life too? Please do comment sometimes 😛


I do read and I love it but sometimes I get so lazy I just like the post 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I feel awful for the late response, I have so many tasks awaiting my attention, people waiting my opinion or something or the other from me in all spheres of my life, it's just the universe conspiring against me, experiencing exceptionally hectic days recently, (especially the days my favorites update their fiction here) at the end of which all I crave is a refreshing shower, my bed, snuggles against my pillow and Asad from the "Butterflies" massaging my feet. 😛 Not complaining though, this comes with wanting to lead a life well lived. 😉 Enough of my tirade, as an author I understand you anticipate readers feedback and this is the 2nd time I'm late, sorry once again, didn't want to read it last night and give you a sleepy undeserved comment. 😳


I haven't read the book just read the review now. This is a refreshingly unique concept from the books I recently read as well as the AsYa fiction here. I shall be putting the book on my "must read" list. The synopsis is charming! 😃


Coming to the prologue:


"No!" Asad immediately balked," What a job I have done of raising Ayaan, you've seen what he did..how am I going to manage that poor girl and the miracle growing in her " Asad sighed," Zoya has a mind of a child. Some say she has mental issues, but to me it seems something else, other than the fact that she can't hear or talk.." 👏 👏 👏

This is so Asad, his basic character in true essence, thankfully Ayaan always sat on the borderline of my liking, so this isn't too disappointing. I ardor strong, intense, multi-layered, principled male characters and having AAK, my favorite Indian Television character tailored from Alex Montgomery character is going to be a splendid read. Zoya was always a free spirit and a liberated soul precisely like Annie Trimble.


An extract form the back cover of the book:


"But he never dreams he will grow to cherish his lovely, mute, misjudged Annie"her childlike innocence, her womanly charms and the wondrous way she views her world. And he becomes determined to break through the wall of silence surrounding her"to heal"and to be healed by Annie's sweet song of love." ❤️
"Asad couldn't have a child of his own, marrying Zoya wouldn't only safeguard her and give her a better life, he would get a child too, whom he had craved for but he knew he couldn't ever have."


"P.P.S - Just to clear Asad is not already married in this story. He is only medically diagnosed that he can't have a child."


Thanks for the clarification!


"P.S = I won't be starting this one until my ongoing FF,Sunshine of My Life is over "


Does this mean Sunshine is ending soon? 😒 Your comment on Zoya's past been revealed later in the narrative indicated otherwise. 😛 😆

I'm more of an analytical person despite a vivid imagination that could plan down anything and everything to the minute detail and live my future in my imagination, but a writer by no means, thankfully I always just managed to get an "A" in my creative writing papers, that in its self is sufficient for me to appreciate writers both professional and non professional. ⭐️ 👏 Qubool Hai is the 1st Indian Television show which I watched religiously until last December, and emotionally invested myself in and I have to applaud a select few writers on this forum for their amazing writing skills, Noe123 is writing an adaption of Jane Austen's "Emma" and I cannot reiterate what a fabulous job she is doing with it, she leaves me overwhelmed as the updates progress, you guys are really talented. I certainly anticipate reading your AsYa adaption of the book and am confident you would do justice to it. ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

I feel awful for the late response, I have so many tasks awaiting my attention, people waiting my opinion or something or the other from me in all spheres of my life, it's just the universe conspiring against me, experiencing exceptionally hectic days recently, (especially the days my favorites update their fiction here) at the end of which all I crave is a refreshing shower, my bed, snuggles against my pillow and Asad from the "Butterflies" massaging my feet. 😛 Not complaining though, this comes with wanting to lead a life well lived. 😉 Enough of my tirade, as an author I understand you anticipate readers feedback and this is the 2nd time I'm late, sorry once again, didn't want to read it last night and give you a sleepy undeserved comment. 😳


I haven't read the book just read the review now. This is a refreshingly unique concept from the books I recently read as well as the AsYa fiction here. I shall be putting the book on my "must read" list. The synopsis is charming! 😃


Coming to the prologue:


"No!" Asad immediately balked," What a job I have done of raising Ayaan, you've seen what he did..how am I going to manage that poor girl and the miracle growing in her " Asad sighed," Zoya has a mind of a child. Some say she has mental issues, but to me it seems something else, other than the fact that she can't hear or talk.." 👏 👏 👏

This is so Asad, his basic character in true essence, thankfully Ayaan always sat on the borderline of my liking, so this isn't too disappointing. I ardor strong, intense, multi-layered, principled male characters and having AAK, my favorite Indian Television character tailored from Alex Montgomery character is going to be a splendid read. Zoya was always a free spirit and a liberated soul precisely like Annie Trimble.


An extract form the back cover of the book:


"But he never dreams he will grow to cherish his lovely, mute, misjudged Annie"her childlike innocence, her womanly charms and the wondrous way she views her world. And he becomes determined to break through the wall of silence surrounding her"to heal"and to be healed by Annie's sweet song of love." ❤️
"Asad couldn't have a child of his own, marrying Zoya wouldn't only safeguard her and give her a better life, he would get a child too, whom he had craved for but he knew he couldn't ever have."


"P.P.S - Just to clear Asad is not already married in this story. He is only medically diagnosed that he can't have a child."


Thanks for the clarification!


"P.S = I won't be starting this one until my ongoing FF,Sunshine of My Life is over "


Does this mean Sunshine is ending soon? 😒 Your comment on Zoya's past been revealed later in the narrative indicated otherwise. 😛 😆

I'm more of an analytical person despite a vivid imagination that could plan down anything and everything to the minute detail and live my future in my imagination, but a writer by no means, thankfully I always just managed to get an "A" in my creative writing papers, that in its self is sufficient for me to appreciate writers both professional and non professional. ⭐️ 👏 Qubool Hai is the 1st Indian Television show which I watched religiously until last December, and emotionally invested myself in and I have to applaud a select few writers on this forum for their amazing writing skills, Noe123 is writing an adaption of Jane Austen's "Emma" and I cannot reiterate what a fabulous job she is doing with it, she leaves me overwhelmed as the updates progress, you guys are really talented. I certainly anticipate reading your AsYa adaption of the book and am confident you would do justice to it. ⭐️


Thanks so much for such a detailed comment, and such an endearing response, that encourages me a great deal. You don't have to be sorry about posting late at all. I do understand you must keep busy. I just let you know, your comments are awaited and matter.😊

Writing an adaptation is really not easy, because you're always scared to do injustice to the original writer, and his or her story. Annie's Song has touched me beyond I can explain. Annie's innocence and ignorance, but her charm, her inner beauty and her intelligence made me fall for her.. And Alex who is so real to life, but so giving, so selfless and a man who gave the girl a new life had me floored.. The characters though set too early in time suited the basic structure for Asad and Zoya. I don't know if I'll incorporate everything that there is in the book, because like I said it was too early in time, but I still will try and keep its soul intact. And I hope I do a good job of it.

No Sunshine is not ending soon AT ALL.It has about 10 parts more. I intend to have a One shot series over AsYa and Aahana's life even after it ends, so it won't really be ending.. My intention of posting this prologue was to let everyone know how thankful and encouraged I am as a writer that I am ready to take up another story and that too a challenge in the form of writing an adaptation of sorts. I am not sure if I am that accomplished a writer to do so, but I certainly do want to try and I hope I am successful.

Thanks once again for this comment and your kind and motivating words🤗


And yes Noe123 is doing an amazing job out of her story, she is an inspiration for sure. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Thanks so much for such a detailed comment, and such an endearing response, that encourages me a great deal. You don't have to be sorry about posting late at all. I do understand you must keep busy. I just let you know, your comments are awaited and matter.😊

Writing an adaptation is really not easy, because you're always scared to do injustice to the original writer, and his or her story. Annie's Song has touched me beyond I can explain. Annie's innocence and ignorance, but her charm, her inner beauty and her intelligence made me fall for her.. And Alex who is so real to life, but so giving, so selfless and a man who gave the girl a new life had me floored.. [The review did give the impression of a poignant and inspirational read.]The characters though set too early in time suited the basic structure for Asad and Zoya. I don't know if I'll incorporate everything that there is in the book, because like I said it was too early in time, but I still will try and keep its soul intact. [Would love to read a contemporary adaptation of the original storyline.] And I hope I do a good job of it.

No Sunshine is not ending soon AT ALL.It has about 10 parts more. I intend to have a One shot series over AsYa and Aahana's life even after it ends, so it won't really be ending.. [This is just amazing, Sunshine is the best fiction apart from a few OS's by SmileyStar in which AsYa are parents, really appreciate and welcome the fact you would continue with One Shots on it.] My intention of posting this prologue was to let everyone know how thankful and encouraged I am as a writer that I am ready to take up another story and that too a challenge in the form of writing an adaptation of sorts. I am not sure if I am that accomplished a writer to do so, but I certainly do want to try and I hope I am successful. [We should always endeavor to accomplish challenges, or we would never know our full potential and capability. I sincerely encourage your endeavor.]

Thanks once again for this comment and your kind and motivating words🤗


And yes Noe123 is doing an amazing job out of her story, she is an inspiration for sure. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M



Sunshine of My Life is not going to get over even when the story does.. after its story is over, I will post a OS series of post marriage moments, taking recommendations from readers, so don't worry😊

I am glad you like the concept and I hope you like it when I write the story. And you are a great reader, always there commenting and giving feedback😊



aww thanq so much...now I'm happy.. n pls add some ASYA post marriage moments in FF itself n OS series of Aanu n one more kid n their brought up etc...sunshine of my life FF should never end bass..😎 .
n I'm nt a gr8 reader .bt I vl take that compliment 😛 ...im just a reader who loves ur FF madly n re reads it .its a beautiful n Amazing FF.
update sunshine plezzz.. plz start writing n update asap 😒
Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting update..
but we donot want sunshine to end..
lovely story... we dont mind even if u start this nxt yr..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting... I too love d book .. Its kinda different I felt

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