~The Sound of Love~AsYa FF | Prologue Updated V.IMP NOTE PG 14

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Hello guys 😃 So I am here with a new story.. This story was on my mind from a long time, but I wasn't sure if I was confident enough to write an issue of this sort. But the response to Sunshine of My Life and the encouragement you all give me has pushed me to finally take it up.


This story is based on the book, 'Annie's song by Catherine Anderson' which touched and inspired me to a great extent and I wanted to write it on AsYa. It's not exactly a copy of it, but it is an adaptation. I am not sure if many of you have read the book, but if you have I hope you enjoy my take on it.

My intention is not to hurt anyone or offend the original piece of work. I am an amateur or so I believe, and I find it a challenge to write an adaptation that affected me so deeply.

I'd just like thank each one of you whose been reading my work and encouraging me, its all because of you I've reached so far with Sunshine and now got the push to write a story like this.. Love EACH and everyone of you.


But need to write some special mentions .. Naaz(blessing_beauty) for being so encouraging and sweet and giving me feedback, Ankie(MisHumptyDumpty) for being so helpful and hearing me out at any hour I PM you, p_s05(Prashni) and Amulya for being such great readers and writing comments that inspire me so much, Ana(SleepingBeauty) for helping me whenever I am stuck and reading whatever I write and Preeti(Ishaqzaadi) for being the bestest friend and sister always 🤗



Prologue


"Asad are you sure about what you're going to do?" Dr Anwar asked Asad as they came out of Zoya's room.

"Not too sure.. I mean I want to take up the responsibility, but it'll be a handful managing Zoya.."

"Because she has a disability?"

"No!" Asad immediately balked," What a job I have done of raising Ayaan, you've seen what he did..how am I going to manage that poor girl and the miracle growing in her " Asad sighed," Zoya has a mind of a child. Some say she has mental issues, but to me it seems something else, other than the fact that she can't hear or talk.."

Anwar nodded," Yes, it's always seemed like that to me too.. I've always suggested Mr Siddiqui to take her to a better town for a correct diagnosis.. but.."

Asad grunted," That man.." he groaned angrily.

"You could do a lot of good to Zoya if you were to marry her. Gaffur plans on sending her away till her delivery, and then give the child away..What a sin would that be Asad.."

Asad nodded thoughtfully, making a decision.

"Mr Siddiqui, I'd like to marry your daughter.."Asad said staring into Gaffur Siddiqui's dark and empty eyes, with such confidence that irked him.

"This is no joke Mr Khan!" He yelled," Your brother forced himself on my daughter, and now you're asking for marriage? How do you think I can trust you?" Gaffur demanded.

"I've cut all ties with my brother, he no longer lives with me.. he made a mistake, committed a sin, but I am here to correct it.. I take full responsibility of your daughter.."

"And the child she's pregnant with?" Gaffur questioned icily sure the man would walk back on his words," I will raise it like my own.." Asad promised more to himself than the arrogant man and useless excuse of a father questioning him.

Asad couldn't have a child of his own, marrying Zoya wouldn't only safeguard her and give her a better life, he would get a child too, whom he had craved for but he knew he couldn't ever have.

Gaffur was aiming to get into politics, listed for that year's elections. But his daughters pregnancy had him fearful of his dignity in the society. He wanted to keep her in hiding, let her give birth and give away the child in foster care. Asad hated the man, hated the father within him even more, but he wouldn't let that be known to him yet.

"You can have the kid, raise it like your own, but after the kid is born, you divorce her, and she'll come back to me. If yes then it's a deal and if not, then the door is to your right Mr Khan.." Gaffur said with a rigid finality.

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PLEASE do comment and let me know if I should go ahead with this or not.


P.S = I won't be starting this one until my ongoing FF,Sunshine of My Life is over 😊


P.P.S - Just to clear Asad is not already married in this story. He is only medically diagnosed that he can't have a child.


IMP NOTE : - NOTE : - Since so many people have asked the same in the comments.. I am just posting a note for it. Zoya had a hearing and speaking disability from when she was a child, but her parents never understood that, and took her behaviour to be one of a crazy child. They didn't educate her, didn't expose her to the outer world, due to which she never grew up mentally and remained a child. The Sound of Love is the story of Zoya's journey from being a child to a woman, of liberation from a cage that her parents bound her in and lead a new life, a complete one and of her realization that the disabilities cannot snatch her chance of a beautiful life. Zoya may not hear or talk, but she is an intelligent and sharp girl, whose talent and courage was never understood because no one ever wanted to. But Asad comes into her life and changes it all for better. They both evolve individually as much as a couple..


Hope that clears what the story is about.. Shall post once my ongoing FF is over, or at least not now, but sometime later. I hope all you guys keep reading and commenting.. Thanks for the response guys 😃

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aarzoo50 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful and interesting prologue...
ayaan has forced zoya n now asad has decided to take up her responsibilty...
but gafoor puts up a condition...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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http://dl2.glitter-graphics.net/pub/3411/3411312b5vzz5ovt2.gif
On Your New Work ..🥳
Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww. New Work 🥳

Yeah !!!

I loved it a lot 😳

It was Awesome,⭐️

Amazing,😊

Beautiful,😃

Very Interesting,😛

Quite Zoya ??😎

I have never seen Zoya being Mum for 2 mins 😲

Now she is going to be deaf and dumb 😆

Its going to be quite new and Brilliant FF ..👏

I love the concept a lot .😳

Why did Gaffor need Zoya back after the baby is born ???😲

And Is Asad Married ?😉

Continue soon

I am in love with ur works 😳

Thanks for Pm ...

My side its Thumbs Up for this Work .👍🏼


Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ANKUUU congrats on ur new storyyy ❤️ I simply love this concept and cant wait to read how you pen the chapters down 😳😳 Im sure u gonna rock it😳😳😃
Whatever happened wid zoya is soo wrong above tht she is pregnant tooo and Asad wannaa Marry herr⭐️⭐️Awww he cant have babies 😭 WHYYY THISSS DADDDYYY of Zoyaaa giving conditions😡😡😡i hateee him alreadyyy !!!!!!!!!!!!!🥱🥱🥱



P.S is invisible highlight karrr😛😆😛

...yeah im waiting forr SOML🤣



Edited by blessing-beauty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anki Anki Anki Anki!!!!!! OMG This is such an amazing story line! Totally loved it! 👏 Completely different from the usual cute story. This seems much mature and describes a little darker shade of life. 👏
I'm eager to read what you write further! 😳 I know it's gonna be awesome since you're writing it! 😃

Love you! ❤️

Mrina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nc prologue
Intrstng

Luking frwrd for updt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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R
Nice concept..

M waiting fr part 1
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful and interesting prologue...
ayaan has forced zoya n now asad has decided to take up her responsibilty...
but gafoor puts up a condition...
plz continue soon...


Thanks so much, hopefully you'll like the story too 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such an amazing and unique storyline...
Awesome prologue. ... 👏 👏 ...
Eager to read this story...
Update soonn...

Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago

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