#2 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 5-9 ! LINK NEW THREAD ! - Page 92

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: marcoe

Beautiful update

It means zoya's not mad
Zoya-dilshaad conversation was really good
Can't wait to read how asad gets zoya to mature
Update soon
Love,
Marcoe🤗


Thanks Marcoe ! 😳
No she's not mad 😛
Glad u liked it buddy !! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

That was amazing and beautiful I loved it

thanx for the PM
update soon😃


Thanks yaar !! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

lovely update
totally enjoyed it
its lovely 2 c dilshad n Zoya bonding
in one day Zoya learned so many things

Arey jab mera Saviour cum doctor hai mere paas toh mujhe apna khayal rakhne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai, tum jo ho mere saath ! Aur haan, bed pe jump karne se mujhe kuch nahi hoga !" Zoya exclaimed as if it was a matter of fact, Asad was touched but didn't showed it.

"Pehle toh mujhe answer nahi dete aur phir scold bhi karte ho !" Zoya crossed her arm on her chest and pouted.

thisz my most favorite part n d most cutest n sweetest part...

finally asad gave her an answer
continue soon


I'm glad you liked it Amu !! 🤗 ❤️
Yeah i try to be realistic, i'm not criticizing other writers but when a person lives with u 24/7, u dont do one thing per day, but u can do many things in 24 hours 😕
Haan Zoya ko apna jawab mil hi gaya 😳

Love u Amu !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

It astounds me how so many writers get Dilshad's character
perfect. Delightful interaction between a mom, her daughter and son. An
absolute charming chapter.



You have left me impressed with the Dilshad and Zoe scene, the conceptualization
of it was picturesque. Ammi and son in the garden and kitchen were cute too.



The little of AsYa were pleasant.



You inscribe fairytales wonderfully. Lovely writing
sweetheart.



Awww thats so sweet yaar !! Thank you so much !! 🤗 ❤️ i try to do my best in characterization and i'm glad that its working ! 😳
Thats really sweet ! A big Thank you !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: grad2011

amazing update!!

loved asad and dilshad's bonding how he share everything with his mother and now zoya is also comfortable with dilshad😊
finally asad answered zoya's question about where did the baby came from 😳


Dilshad is Asad's best friend, his confident and his support ! 😳
Baby's scene was the scene i enjoyed writing the most !!
I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fifi1297



Seriously...it was such a cute part...
loved dat one...
awsum😊
Great job...


Thanks yaar ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

I loved Asad's explanation to Zoya regarding the baby..
For me the best part of the chapter was Dilshaad and Zoya bonding.. That portrayal was picture perfect..


Thanks Azraa ! 🤗 even i absolutely enjoyed writing the baby explanation ! ❤️
I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Haan kyon ki Zoya ki mom most of the time yahan pe hoti hai toh voh hi karti hai lekin aaj jaldi chali gayi 😆
Ab phone charge pe lagaya and getting bored
Thik hai voh, Eid ke liye yahan aane ki soch rahi hai ! 😕 😆

oh ok toh wo kaha gayi hain appy 😆 wohi karti hain kya saara kaam 😆
tere kya hin har time phone charge par lagaya hua hain 😡 😆
jab toh ho gayi musibat apple 🤢 😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

oh ok toh wo kaha gayi hain appy😆wohi karti hain kya saara kaam😆
tere kya hin har time phone charge par lagaya hua hain😡😆
jab toh ho gayi musibat apple🤢😡



Apne ghar chali gayi ! Haan most of the kaam vohi karti hai ! 😆
Haan toh kab laake de raha hai tu mujhe charger ? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another cute update!!!

Awww loved Zoya's and Dilshad's motherly interactions!!!😊

Wow each time I read this story I gain more and more respect for Asad!!!❤️

Well I guess he did a nice job of explaining!!!😃

You do an awesome job!!!👍🏼

Update real soon!!!⭐️

Thanks for the pm!!!🤗
Edited by Ami34 - 11 years ago

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