#2 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 5-9 ! LINK NEW THREAD !

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Fantastic Update Bano! ❤️

Loved the Dilshad - Zoya bonding and also the last scene where Asad tells Zoya about the baby!

Continue soon!

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Ira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

ABSHOLUTELY POSITIVELY EXCELLENTLY MAGNIFICENTLY AMAZINGGG UPDATE!!!!! I just can't get enough of re-re-re-re-re-re-re-reading tha part where Asad explains how to baby got into her belly and she carressed he belly to sleep!! SHOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!! And Dilshad and Zoya's bonding also SHOOO CUTE! And i didnt know Zoya had asthma :( SHOOO sad :(

Lolll enough of my 'SHOOO's'... (for now 😈 )
And now i repeat ABSOLUTELY POSTOVELY MAGNIFICENTLY EXCELLENTLY UPDATE!! It was nothing short of purfection just like all your other updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WITH CHERRY AN SPRINKLES ON TOP UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!

Thank you! ❤️

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marcoe

@marcoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

Beautiful update

It means zoya's not mad

Zoya-dilshaad conversation was really good

Can't wait to read how asad gets zoya to mature

Update soon

Love,

Marcoe🤗

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

That was amazing and beautiful I loved it

thanx for the PM

update soon😃

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

lovely update
totally enjoyed it
its lovely 2 c dilshad n Zoya bonding
in one day Zoya learned so many things

Arey jab mera Saviour cum doctor hai mere paas toh mujhe apna khayal rakhne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai, tum jo ho mere saath ! Aur haan, bed pe jump karne se mujhe kuch nahi hoga !" Zoya exclaimed as if it was a matter of fact, Asad was touched but didn't showed it.

"Pehle toh mujhe answer nahi dete aur phir scold bhi karte ho !" Zoya crossed her arm on her chest and pouted.

thisz my most favorite part n d most cutest n sweetest part...

finally asad gave her an answer
continue soon

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

It astounds me how so many writers get Dilshad's character perfect. Delightful interaction between a mom, her daughter and son. An absolute charming chapter.

You have left me impressed with the Dilshad and Zoe scene, the conceptualization of it was picturesque. Ammi and son in the garden and kitchen were cute too.

The little of AsYa were pleasant.

You inscribe fairytales wonderfully. Lovely writing sweetheart.

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grad2011

@grad2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#897

amazing update!!

loved asad and dilshad's bonding how he share everything with his mother and now zoya is also comfortable with dilshad😊

finally asad answered zoya's question about where did the baby came from 😳

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: fifi1297
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Awsum update...
Loved it...
Loved zoya and dilshad bonding...
Cake scene was cute..
Asad explaining abt baby to zoya was vry cute scene...
Superb update..
Continue soon...
Thnx foe pm😊

The little baby's explanation was the part i enjoyed writing the most ❤️
I'm glad you liked it Laibaa ! 🤗

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: cutie15
Thar was a very very beautiful update..!!
Lovd zoya's nd dilshad's bonding..!! :)
It was awsum..!! 👏 👏
u r soo amazing.. 😊

Thank you so much Cutie !! 🤗 ❤️