||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 90

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Posted: 11 years ago

I think that throughout the entire chapter, I enjoyed Asad's "diary" to Ayesha, the most

I love that his feelings for her were true, I like that some people aren't afraid to give Asad or Zoya real feelings for other characters, it not only defines the character but it makes the author stand out from the crowd


We really get to see how much Asad has changed in this update, from teh guy whohid his feelings from the entire worlds scared to be seen weak and scared to feel weak, he begins to open up and the diary was perfect to show this


I want to give her the world Ammi, make life a bed of roses for her

Oh my god, please excuse me while I go and fan girl over how perfect this line

I think I understand Zoya's dilemma over Asad moving on from Ayesha so quickly, she starts to feel guilty as if she's stolen someone's life but isn't seeing the part where Asad's trying to move on.

Asad is so good at persuading people in this story, I'm surprised he didn't become a lawyer

Okay okay so um I was all smiling and sighing dreamily near the end of the chapter and then BAM comes the precap, I'm sweating now and I don't know whats going to happen here

Like seriously why do all good things have to come to an end, I know this isn't the end but still, meeeppp, I don't know what to say, my face has fallen and I feel like crying right now, I thought you weren't going to give out any precaps, and when you did you just had to give us a cliffy didn't you?????????

Update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
relationship maturing with each passing moment between asad and zoya...
dinner date...hmmm...
ring tab hi dega kya??
precap mai angry man back...
koi panga hogaya kya dinner pe???
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ankitha.. Why are you giving heart attack to readers...with the precap ?? What is wrong with Asad.. did he find out anything about Zoya's abbu or the attackers...??😭
Loved the letter which Asad wrote to Zoya.. He is so very sweet over here... and also the talk with Zoya was very meaningful...


Wonderful update..😊 I want to comment more but later..

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a wonderful update 👏 ⭐️
But precap...is really worrying me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsume update
trulyyy amaazzzing
continue sooon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyy!!
Okay so im finally here to edit this. :P The update was sooo good! Loveeed how asad does stuffs for Zoya and how zoya doesnt want him to do something out of the way for her like removing Ayesha's potrait. I really love Zoya's pov about how Ayesha was is and always will be asad's first wife and Aahana ki mom. She will always hold a place in their heart so she doesnt want them to go out of the way just to make her happy and remove that picture.
And what Asad said was something that touched my heart. He loves her soo much and he is finally showing it! yayy
And yayyy he is going to propose finally!! But then u said once they get married the story ends that means either they arent getting married or the ff is ending :|
Edited by SleepingBeauty. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏Superb update Ankita

It's amazing how asad has changed !!!!!!

Loved the cute bedroom convo 😳😊

Precap is scary 😲

Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ...👏👏
I Loved it...Happy shappy wala update likha aapne Ankita..dil khush kar ditta...😳..it was simple yet adorable..😳


but precap..🥺..what happened to Asad.😕..ummm..update soon..😆

thanks for pm..😃


Edited by sweetluck - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why is the precap so scary...??
My head's gonna go mad thinking about what has happened...!!!

But loved the diary entry...!!

The way you have written...!!! Too beautiful...!!!

But why is Asad so angry?

Please don't tell me it's got to do with Zoya...!!!

Just this morning they were so happy and peaceful...!!!

Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww I can imagine anu in those shirt and nappy... shez so cute
This is the first line that I read after opening the page 🤣

AsYa ka nikah ho raha hai

I know how difficult it bez for a father to imagine his daughter's marriage😭

Asad wants to spend some time alone with zoya...

Starting was fab 👏

Precap scares me 😲

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