||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: grad2011
beautiful update!!👏
asad's entry in the diary was so emotional and you described each word beautifully :)
the precap is scary i think its something related to zoya's abbu.

Thanks so much, I needed a closure for Ayesha, and now she finally has it 😊 Its time for Asad to move on. Don't be scared its nothing to worry about.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: volatile

Oh no! The precap just took away all the joy of reading the update! I cant imagine what could be the reason for Asad to walk away from Zoya like that! 😕

I will always have a soft spot for Akdu Asad, but this new side of him is so charming as well! Loved his sensitivity, his patience and his romantic side. And my heart just melted when he was disappointed that Zoya was reluctant to go on a date with him!

Please continue soon cos the suspense if gonna kill me!

Asad is frustrated and angry, just a weak moment, but nothing to worry about at all. I am sorry that it marred your pleasure of reading the update. But everyone's allowed to use ways to induce people to read eagerly 😆

Akdu Asad is fun, I love him too, because his Akduness also had its own charm.. But its even more special when the Akdu man goes out of his way to soften up. Zoya's naughtiness rubbed off on him.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: BeautyfulDesire
The part was amazing! Wondering what happened and can't wait for the next update :)

Thanks dear.. and nothing as such to worry about.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: treasure11
Gosh Am loving them soo soo soo much !!!
Asad is such a perfect man
The precap is scary though Isit bcozz he found out her father ?😕

You'll have to wait to see why he's reacted that way but its nothing to be scared about so far 😊

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Madhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#915

Gr8 update asusual. I am loving this ff. God that precap scared me!

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#916

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

I think that throughout the entire chapter, I enjoyed Asad's "diary" to Ayesha, the most

I love that his feelings for her were true, I like that some people aren't afraid to give Asad or Zoya real feelings for other characters, it not only defines the character but it makes the author stand out from the crowd

We really get to see how much Asad has changed in this update, from teh guy whohid his feelings from the entire worlds scared to be seen weak and scared to feel weak, he begins to open up and the diary was perfect to show this

I want to give her the world Ammi, make life a bed of roses for her

Oh my god, please excuse me while I go and fan girl over how perfect this line

I think I understand Zoya's dilemma over Asad moving on from Ayesha so quickly, she starts to feel guilty as if she's stolen someone's life but isn't seeing the part where Asad's trying to move on.

Asad is so good at persuading people in this story, I'm surprised he didn't become a lawyer

Okay okay so um I was all smiling and sighing dreamily near the end of the chapter and then BAM comes the precap, I'm sweating now and I don't know whats going to happen here

Like seriously why do all good things have to come to an end, I know this isn't the end but still, meeeppp, I don't know what to say, my face has fallen and I feel like crying right now, I thought you weren't going to give out any precaps, and when you did you just had to give us a cliffy didn't you?????????

Update soon

I am a recluse and people like us normally take to venting our feelings by writing in a diary or through something, I have taken up writing a story also because of the same reason.. Hence Asad having that habit was just natural.

I am so glad you said that - I thought some people might think it to be a little imperfect that Zoya wasn't Asad's first relationship.. but that's how life is. You can admire and respect two people.

As you rightly pointed out Zoya feels guilty that she is taking Asad away from Ayesha. She feels horrible that Ayesha couldn't live a life to see her daughter grow and now she feels she's taking a place. But she is gradually going to realize that Asad merely means to do all this to start a new life. He's learnt a lot after being in love, and he doesn't want to dwell in the past.. he doesn't see why he should be.

I got bored of the silent Asad, so I've made him talk so much here 😆

Don't worry about the precap though, Asad is having a weak moment but that won't take away what I have built so far. I am sorry if it troubled you, wasn't my intention at all. 😳

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
lovely update...
relationship maturing with each passing moment between asad and zoya...
dinner date...hmmm...
ring tab hi dega kya??
precap mai angry man back...
koi panga hogaya kya dinner pe???
continue soon

Sab questions ka answer next update mai 😊 And thanks so much 😃

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Nitya Suresh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

The letter was truly beautiful... Asad is so sweet...

And Zoya is amazing!! Not everyone has a heart like hers...

And precap.. :o

What happened...

Update the next part soon... :)

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#919

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Ankitha.. Why are you giving heart attack to readers...with the precap ?? What is wrong with Asad.. did he find out anything about Zoya's abbu or the attackers...??😭
Loved the letter which Asad wrote to Zoya.. He is so very sweet over here... and also the talk with Zoya was very meaningful...

Wonderful update..😊 I want to comment more but later..

Nothing to be worried about. I love AsYa as much as you guys do.. Trust me not to harm them 😊

I am glad you liked the update.