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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Both shared their feelings with their friends
Zoya was upset & asad wanted to know what happened to her
She didn't give any attention to food, all her attention towards past, present & future with asad
Their car broke down & asad was fixing it
Suddenly a cliffy end
Look like zoya pushed him & hurt herself
Something like mangalpur type of scene is on the way
Sorry if I am wrong
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res i'm first !! 🥳
Unres ! 😉


Awww i so love the way Asad's all tiredness vanish when he sees Zoya sleeping peacefuly on the couch !!

Haha! How so romantic of me nay 😆 But I guess yehi hota hoga when someone truly loves. 😆



I LOVED HOW SJ LOOKED HERE..


Then Asad's bad day's begining, but then Zoya illuminating it with her cute yet simple gestures ! 😳

Thank you. My Asad is a bit pagal too. 😆 Zoya was extra candyfloss sweet. 😛 😆 Cause she had to make Asad feel better hai naa. 😳 😆

Awww i was so heartbroken when Nadeem reasoned him !

Nadeem loves Asad as his younger brother.. He is very protective about him, and he has always wanted the best for Asad. And U get one such slice here.. 😆



MR KHAAANNN!!!!! <3333

But then it was not Nadeem's fault euther, he was only trying to protect his yaar ! 😕

Thank you. I thought people would run after Sadhna and Nadeem's life but am glad you guys understood their prov 😆

On the other side i was relieved that Zoya takes her 1st Nikkah only as a mistake... 🤔

Ermm??? 1st nikaah is with Asad. 😕 😆 Achha okay, i dont mind much cause i know its ages since i started the fiction.. Clearing the mist.. Zoya was supposed to get married to Asad, who she didnt even meet once. So she had a plan she ran away on the eve of her wedding with Asad with her guy whom she thought she loved.. But then an unfortunate incident happened and he lost his life the very day! Zoya witnessed his death and it was a terrible shock for her. Her parents caught hold of her, coaxed her, and when nothing worked threatened her and she to save her father's reputation got married to Asad. She on the very first month of their marriage made it clear that once they reach bhopal they would separate their ways. Asad HAD to be OK with it and after that Zoya herself freely started taking little steps towards Asad slowly.. And now she is very much clear that she likes Asad a lot. That's a long way from her not even caring about his existence before 😆 Hope that helps 😆

I loved Asad's gestures trying to cheer her up with paani puri, jokes, etc, he's such a loving and caring guy ! ❤️

Cause he LOVES her. He feels restless when she is not around, he can do ANYTHING for making Zoya smile.. 😆

Then the cliffy ! I so want to kill u because of that ! 😡 i guess Zoya saved Asad by pushing him but got herself in accident.. 😭

Haiyee Haiyee.. 😆

Chalo ab Ankie agla update soon dena please ! 😳

95+ Likes and I start writing.. 😆


That was such a sweet comment <33


Asad looked like a BABY here btw.. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove

Tht was really awesome
But why did you stop at a cliffy
Now I REALLY REALLY want to know
What happens next
if you dont update ASAP
I dont wht ill do but itll be baaad!


Thank you!! How about if it turns to be super good instead.. 😆 Expect the UNEXPECTED 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


Hiii!!!

Hello!! Kem Cho Maja Mein!! 😆 means kaise ho maze mein? meaning how r u? Enjoying. 😆

K so I know I haven't commented in a while, but I have been very busy with exams so don't blame me. Blame the people who came up with the idea of school, I swear if I find out where they were buried, I would dig them out, somehow bring them back to life only to kill them again (metaphorically speaking that is, don't worry I ain't no crazy psycho kid with mental problems, at least I hope not)

HAHAHAHA! I too felt the same, and STILL feel the same.. 😆 So VALID, 😆 Anyway its all fine love! 🤗

Although I am very happy to see a long update, did you really have to end it at that point, at THAT point, at THAT point, really???

Cause I needed to know who all are REALLY interested in the fiction. 🥱 😆

Even though my urdu/hindi is quite suckish, I managed to understand most it, so hurrah for me.

THANK YOU! It was such a sweet gesture <33

I don't know what to comment now, both there situations are so different and complex. One feels as if this whole time the truth has been a lie while the other feels as if she is only hurting herself more by falling in love with him. At least that's what I got from it, like I said suckish urdu/hindi.

HAHA! No not exactly. Like i said before, i dont mind much cause i know its ages since i started the fiction.. Clearing the mist.. Zoya was supposed to get married to Asad, who she didnt even meet once. So she had a plan she ran away on the eve of her wedding with Asad with her guy whom she thought she loved.. But then an unfortunate incident happened and he lost his life the very day! Zoya witnessed his death and it was a terrible shock for her. Her parents caught hold of her, coaxed her, and when nothing worked threatened her and she to save her father's reputation got married to Asad. She on the very first month of their marriage made it clear that once they reach bhopal they would separate their ways. Asad HAD to be OK with it and after that Zoya herself freely started taking little steps towards Asad slowly.. And now she is very much clear that she likes Asad a lot. That's a long way from her not even caring about his existence before 😆 Now that she remembers that she wished for getting separated once 6 months ends.. she thinks he is still with the premonition of what she had yelled to him 3 days after marriage.. 😆 what all she had done previously it makes her fear if Asad's care and affection is nothing but genuine, hence she is getting sad thinking the otherwise 😆 And so is Asad thinking of her melting was nothing but genuine 😆

Nadeem, however, I don't think he was in a wrong place when he was talking to Asad. I think that whatever he said, he only meant it because he was being a protective best friend, and that , to me, is very understandable.

Exactly what I wanted to picture. Nadeem loves Asad as his younger brother.. He is very protective about him, and he has always wanted the best for Asad. And U get one such slice here.. 😆

I was very, very, VERY surprised to see how Asad reacted even after having the talk with Nadeem. I did think that he would distance himself from Zoya to make sure he doesn't get hurt, but it broke my heart when he did the opposite. He loves her so much and I only wish that he realizes soon enough Zoya's feelings for him.

Cause he can kill just to make Zoya smile.. 😆 Both did the opposite of what was expected from them Haha 😆

I don't exactly know how Zoya is feeling, her situation kind of confuses me here, to me it seems as if, she is in love with Asad but thinks that his care and concern are just the same as they would be for anyone else. Do I get the drift, or is my drift just at the other end of the Atlantic Ocean or something??

YES. u are on the right drift. 😆 Proves am not THAT a BAD story teller 😆

The ending has got me of course at the edge of my seat which is not good because I was suppose to be studying for math and here I am fangirling over AsYa, yep that will surely help me when there will be a question asking whats the cos of angle B.

HAHAHAHA. COS TAN THETA 🤣 I hated Trigonometry btw. 😆
Hope the exam went well 😳

Anyways thank you so much for the long update,
Hope this comment makes up for me missing all those other comments,
Loved the chapter, thank you for the PM, please do continue to PM me,

Update when you can:)

YEs this Comment DID make up and am glad to know that I have u as my reader 🤗 Thank you once again :')

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome update dear...
So beautiful 👏 ...
Love the way how asad all tiredness gone after getting one glimpse of zoya.. 😳
So zoya consider her first marriage a mistake...
Asad is do sweet and adorable. ..
Love the way how asad tried to cheer her up...
Loved it
Thanks for such a long update..
Update soon with lots of asyalicious moments...


1st nikaah is with Asad only . 😕 😆 Achha okay, i dont mind much cause i know its ages since i started the fiction.. Clearing the mist.. Zoya was supposed to get married to Asad, who she didnt even meet once. So she had a plan she ran away on the eve of her wedding with Asad with her guy whom she thought she loved.. But then an unfortunate incident happened and he lost his life the very day! Zoya witnessed his death and it was a terrible shock for her. Her parents caught hold of her, coaxed her, and when nothing worked threatened her and she to save her father's reputation got married to Asad. She on the very first month of their marriage made it clear that once they reach bhopal they would separate their ways. Asad HAD to be OK with it and after that Zoya herself freely started taking little steps towards Asad slowly.. And now she is very much clear that she likes Asad a lot. That's a long way from her not even caring about his existence before 😆 Hope that helps 😆

Cause he LOVES her. He feels restless when she is not around, he can do ANYTHING for making Zoya smile.. 😆

Thank you! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ami34

Why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?😡 Cause its ages that i gave a cliffy 😒 😆

What happened to Asad!!!😲 Tell me what do you think has happened n what might happen next tell me tell me tell me 😳 😆

Please save him!!! Zinda hi hai woh 😆 Issi liye toh past yaad kar raha hai 😆

Or Zoya!!!⭐️ haiyee we r such sadists 😆

Loved it!!!❤️ Thank you! 🤗

Awesome di!!!👏

Thanks for the pm!!!🤗

Update soon!!!😃 With 95+ likes. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonajain

are u mad or ARE U MAD ??????? it was freekingly awsume update

Tujhe ab tak pata nahi ki I am MAD 😕 😆

from asad entry n zOe wait to zoe screams for asads life
it was A.W.S.U.M.E.L.Y B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L <3

i loved ASAD NADEEM convo...specially the humour dat u put into their convo is sooo cuteee

i loved ASAD caring for zoeee sooo much...BEAUTIFUL

now my shayarriii 🤣

arz kia h

pyaar mai dimaag ho jata h khaamosh dil karne lagta h baatein
pyaar mai dimaag ho jata h khaamosh dil karne lagta h baatein

izhaar se pehle inteZar hai yeh pyaar ,izhaar se pehle intezaar h yeh pyaar
jaldi ghar laut aao ab tanha akele kat ti nahi yeh raatein


shukriya

THIS WAS SERIOUSLY AWESOME How true btw


this was a serious one...i simply LOVED UR UPDATE

Woh toh tujhe hamesha hi pasand aata hai be 😡 😆 kabhi kuch toh naya bol 😡 😳 😆

okay after reading ur update ek gaana yaad aa gya


baat akar zubaan tk rukne lage
ankhon ankhon mai ikraar hone lage bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lage hone lage
pyaaar hone lage

Pyaar toh hona hi tha!! ❤️ Kajol Ajay <33 I love them <333 thanks for the sweet song sweets <33


lots love
shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty



<font size="2">1st nikaah is with Asad only .😕😆Achha okay, i dont mind much cause i know its ages since i started the fiction.. Clearing the mist.. Zoya was supposed to get married to Asad, who she didnt even meet once. So she had a plan she ran away on the eve of her wedding with Asad with her guy whom she thought she loved.. But then an unfortunate incident happened and he lost his life the very day! Zoya witnessed his death and it was a terrible shock for her. Her parents caught hold of her, coaxed her, and when nothing worked threatened her and she to save her father's reputation got married to Asad. She on the very first month of their marriage made it clear that once they reach bhopal they would separate their ways. Asad HAD to be OK with it and after that Zoya herself freely started taking little steps towards Asad slowly.. And now she is very much clear that she likes Asad a lot. That's a long way from her not even caring about his existence before😆Hope that helps😆</font>

Cause he LOVES her. He feels restless when she is not around, he can do ANYTHING for making Zoya smile..😆

<font size="2">Thank you! :)</font>


Hi ...thanks for the summary ...
Bt I have read each and every part of ur ff...
I know this story from beginning. ..
I dont know how that line turned out to be like that ...I want to type something else bt typed this 😕
Sowieee 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty



That was such a sweet comment <33


Asad looked like a BABY here btw..😆


Love ! Love ! Love ! Love ! ❤️ maybe ! 😆

Acha ? Sorry jab yeh angel... (KSG)



...dikhta hai toh meri nazrein wahin pe atak jaati hain ! ☺️ ❤️

Agar yeh Asad pagal hai, toh i absolutely love this pagal ! ❤️

Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with you Mr. Jahanpanah six-packs ?!

Nadeem and Sadhna r only being caring and trying to protect their respective friends 😳

Sorry sorry sorry... 😆 i think even when i read the first time i didnt get it, let me tell u that i learnt english on IF or else i didnt even know what does 'speak' meant 😆 but now i can almost talk in english as much as french ! All thanks to IF, i cant even write a proper sentence in french but i'm able to write FFs that too in english ! 😃
Oh ok 😆 yeah it helped (i knew when i was writing the comment that i was wrong somewhere ! 😆) but seriously now i got it, Thank you ! 🤗

Kyon ? Mera tukka sahi nikla ? 😉 😆

Glad u liked the comment ! ❤️

Even if he looks like a baby, he remains cute and handsome ! ☺️ ❤️

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