3#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala:AsYa FF[Ch11-14 LINK#4 Pg1] - Page 26

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

Summer is on its way, last exam is on Tesday, so I'm just waiting for the moment when I leave the class room shouting I"M FREEE

And I suddenly miss school! :( best part was scribbling on each and every friend's hands happy holidays.. 😆 School :(

You may have to repeat that a couple of times so that people can get back on the right path

As long as Readers are happy, me is happy, if that mean to repeat a 10000s of times I am ready to do so.. I dont blame actually they were minute details, dont even wish anybody to remember or catch them,, 😆 Feels good to find people questioning, cause that means they want to know more. 😳 and also are really interested.. better they read the update 😆

Referring back to Asad getting married to Zoya from the very beginning, does that mean he was in love with her when he saw her???? So was it sort of like love at first sight for him???? Or has he known her for some time that's why he sent the proposal or her hand????

So many questions,

U will get those answers soon 😆 We are heading towards a very big revelation in a way 😆

Your style of writing is very mature and sophisticated meaning that the ones who are reading are the ones not getting it, so me basically

Not really. 😆 Cause no matter what a story teller should always posses the power of convincing in one go! I Lack that.. Still working hard on it 😆 There's no shame in admitting that, cause how else would i even learn and improve and also gift you guys with better stories each time.. 😳

Trig, I get it, but I HATE Quadratics, absolutely despise

I HATED MATHS. 😡 😆

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Germany will win today

Originally posted by: SovaSana

awesome and a long update

loved the way asad was staring at zoya when she was sleeping

so zoya is slowly realizing his importance in her life

did asad really get into an accident?

i hope not

do continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: gowtu

Ankie
wht was tht !
Ek tho itna lately updt mila..
Cliffy k jaroorat tha kya...

To know if people are really interested to read the story 😆

Hope ntng serious...

Amzng updt ankie loved it alot
it was long..

Khush kardiya..

Asad was so hpy to see zoya's changed behaviour towards him...
Even me too..

See, i told you be patient, Zoya is as adorable as a sweet kid. 😆

Par ye langoota dost ko kaha se laayi... Ha ha 4saal baba wala..
But na i felt like he was crrct too..
Poora ka poora hawa nikhaalli...

Asad ka bhi.. Meri bhi.. Hmph..

hahhahaa! Hawa nikal diya 🤣

Zaruri tha! Nahi toh hawa rotten nahi ho jata 🤣 😆

Refill hona better hai burst hone se 😆

Sadhna too :( :(
poor zoya ko roladi...

Awh seems to good to find you feel sorry for Zoya 😳

Aa..aap yaha Mrkhan ?
Nai main tho office mein hoon :p :p
lolll main bhi yahi bolti hoon aise Que k
not office.. U know wht i mean..

ahhahahahaha!!!


When he said i think zoya likes me.. Like means LIKE wala like..i was like awww asad...

HAHAH! He cant spell it out. God knows what all he has to go through only to make him say that 😆

Superb updt ankie..
Continue soon

Originally posted by: p_s05

You are evil! Chapter 12 make an appearance soon. 😆

Maleficent

Nadeem and Asad hilariously delightful.

I tried my best to keep them! 😳 Hope I succeeded 😆

"...and Sadhna remembered making friends with Zoya over a huge piece of cake..."

Only the author can write this and Zoya execute it. - Charming!

HAHA! It was an abstract addition to the story, made me imagine and feel good to find 2 boys and a girl making faces at each other 😆 only for THE LAST piece of Cake 🤣 😳

A chapter of realizations, how beautiful and reassuring when the reader knows Asad is in bed cuddling with his wife, reminiscing the past, the journey to the present.

I NOW wish I dint do that 😡 😆 but somewhere as a reader myself I wish to be always assured of a happy ending through out.. so yea!

Glad that you really liked the update!! 🤗 Thank you!

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

At 3:18a.m.

Like Seriously.

-_- NISCHACHOR na something something Chor na Ami 😳 😆

☺️ - AsYa scene

😆 - Asad wakin up

🤣 - Paratha scene

- Paratha end scene

😆 - Nadeem n Asad scene

- Nadeem Asad / Sadhna Zoya scene

😭 - Nadeem Asad ' Sadhna Zoya scene

😳 - Asad Zoya Panipuri scene

😭 - Zoya confused n thoughts scene

😲 - Last para

😡 - last line

Now decode them and deduce my reactions 😈

Abb bol 😈

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

ha ha Indians getting excited about World Cup Football is like, Begani Shaadi Mein Abdullah Deewana! 😆 Kidding..

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

😲 🤣 🤣 anku ur not wacthing WC kya

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Reserved. Ek aur baar padhne de.

Sorry for the massive delay, lappy do baar hang ho gaya tha 😭

Lappy ko do thappad mar! Fridge mein, chiller mein rakh.. then microven mein garam kar.. khud ba khud thik ho jayega 😛 😆

^ The above isnt to be tried anywhere on Earth btw 🤣

MOVING ON.

I had to read this three times 😆 I'm getting slow 😒

ANYWAYS.

U READ THE WHOLE STORY 😲 ! I L Y 😳 😆

First things first, Zoya is the cutesht. Cutesht matlab cutesht. When you finish this, I'm taking her home. Bas.

Uska Asad usse dega udhar pe pehele soch 😆

Okay.

I should be giving you an award for best new character creation. Nadeem! The guy is so adorable! Okay I know he was a bit harsh when pin-pointing out the reality to Asad, but he cared for his buddy and didn't want him to get hurt. Totally understandable. And their "pakane" wale inside jokes 🤣

HAHA! Thank you! He started as an abstract character. I never wanted to develop him.. but haha! I love him too now.. 😆

But Asad though 😭

Thode aansu hai, thodi hasi

Aaj gham hai to kal hai khushi

😳

Zoya and Sadhna's bonding is beautiful. The Awww kind. Friendship over a piece of cake. Awww 😳

HAHA! It was an abstract addition to the story, made me imagine and feel good to find 2 boys and a girl making faces at each other 😆 only for THE LAST piece of Cake 🤣 😳

But before I start fangirling, let's finish this.

What Sadhna said to Zoya. NOT understandable. Nope. Na-da. Not at all.

Go ahead and break the girl's happy bubble. Make her feel like the BIGGEST JERK around. Make her feel GUILTY AS HELL why don't you 😡

But it was NECESSARY. A necessary evil.

Zoya had to understand what she has done, and a revaluation was much-a-needed. No matter how hurt you are it is not exactly advisable to behave the way she did. But I'm glad she realized that her running away with the other guy (forgot his name) was a mistake. A very big mistake.

Exactly. Sadhna and Zoya had this conversation before where Zoya had admitted how guilty she felt. Scolding or Rebuking never works in such kinds of situations, u just need to make the person realize what mistake he or she has committed by asking him or her questions on what he or she wanted to do 😆 a part of counselling applied in Sadhna n Zoya's convo.. 😆

But Asad though 😭

Andar se toot raha hai aur bahar se Zoya ko khush karne par tula hua hai *sniff sniff*

HAHA! He LOVES her he only cant bring the word to himself.. 😆

And then disaster strikes.

So this is the Mangalpur-esque part. Hmmm interesting.

NOT.

How dare you leave a cliffy missy? 😡\

Cause its ages to have my fiction left on cliffys 😆