Hola... well you must be thinking why I UNRESed after 2 days so well its b/c I took that much time too cool down and judge the chapter on a neutral ground rather than giving a anger driven review..😛
I love Angsty stories with a capital A may be my vicious streak loves seeing other's in pain or the feminist in me loves spanking male butt 🤣 ... Anyhow I love your story...😊
Coming to the chapter you built up is really commendable. It's great if Asad will not be able to meet Zoya for sometime in near future well duh-uh that jerk needs to sort out his shit... simple as that.😆 What I really can't get is that, this guy who professed his undying love towards HIS jenny till sometime back now he want to make Zoya HIS. Its not like he was in love with the person who had done all those things for him (Like in movie -- Mujhse Dosti Karogee) rather he was in love with what I think is Jenny's outgoing, glittering & made up persona to Zoya's introvert, demure n shy self. He was after a perfect made-up porcelain doll image of Jenny n that's not love that's unsighted devotion. Acc. to me love without trust and love with blind trust both are fated to be doomed. 🤣😳
Had he visited Humi for the seeking forgiveness from Zoe I could have understood his stance in that but to suddenly say that he wants her and all shows that he is not at all redeemed and still is the dickhead he was; now he's after Zoya's b/c she suits his perfect lady love image. Seriously darling his character needs a serious build up b/c he's coming to be very small-minded, jerkish and his boorish ways add cherry on the top. He does not love Zoya but wants to atone for his wrongdoings. He first needs to learn what this four letter word called L.O.V.E. is.😳
BTW... that flashback scene is from your previous work Truth To Be Told naa .. I had gone through it yesterday well seriously gut-wrenching piece of work... *bows down*😭
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