Okay since I'm in love with this story, its time for a long comment, bear with me, you may wanna sit down for this
Firstly you updated
My face throughout the entire update
Poor Zoey, the girl has suffered so much from this world and yet she is so selfless
And then that little A hole and A hole's B only humiliated her even more
Fave lines
"He dropped in his knees; his head hung low and his fingers clasped together in pleading."
Asad so without a doubt deserves this, this should be his new pose, now only if he did that in front of Zoya,
Lines that made me want to strangle Asad:
"After a minute or so a determination arose in him, a determination to correct his mistake, a determination to give her all the happiness and a determination to make her his."
"No, I am not late. We can still start over. She will be angry with me but I have confidence that she will forgive me eventually. I would do anything to get her forgiveness. She loves me too much Humi."
Does this guy honestly think that after he acted like Satan, that the sweet little angel will forgive him,
Seriously these lines made me wanna strangle him so much, he has such a big ego, "oh no I treated her like dirt and made her feel worse about herself then she already did but I'm sure if I apologize once she will forgive me, because after all she is in love with me"
"The Zoya you and me knew is dead"
So that means the Zoya THEY knew is dead, so that means Zoya has changed into a completely different person and the old Zoya who would forgive everyone so easily has changed
I really hope that this new Zoya bites back to people and snaps at them, as much as seeing someone so innocent and kind is nice the world and its inhabitants are cruel, a lot of people will take advantage of people, I pray that no one ever has to go through anything for Zoya's life,
Please make her strong and independent and make Asad jealous, there just has to be a jealous Asad,
Now that my rant is done, I'm going to be on my laptop refreshing this page until I see another update, and BTW I have an essay due tomorrow, so please if you don't want me to fail English thn PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE
NOW.
Bade Achhe Lagte Hain
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