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@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#511

It was soo emotional and painful ,,

she had gone thru soo muchh and Asad made it worse with his words 😭

I know she is not dead but maybe not a normal Zoya they knew ,,

Do clear all this sooon ,,

I can't see my Asad crying and sad ,,

I am missing that dimpled Asad

I hope she will forgive him and yah update sooon !

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Amazing + shocking update...👏

Poor zoya had suffer alot...😔

WTH Zoya can't be dead...😲

Well u said zoya whom they know is dead may she gone crazy , or is in some shock...😳

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😊

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Shau

@delena_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Love it!
But why the cliffy😭

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@yum_immy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Awesome update👏

But what about zoya being dead? I guess what humeira meant was zoya has changed?

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spn2013

@spn2013

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Fantastic I was crying while reading zoyas past. Beautifully written. Waiting for update.

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#516

i can only sing now...Zor ka jhatka haye zor se laga...haa laga...

shaadi ban gayi umar qaid ki saza, haa saza...😭

and that's the truth for both Asad and Zoya

poor Zoya...had a horrible past 😭

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Such an emotional update. I don't think Zoya is dead.

She should not forgive Asad so easily.

Continue soon.

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#518

AMAZING Update.. Loved it..

ZOya's past was very painful.. Zoya is dead..I don't think so..

Please continue very soon..

Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Okay since I'm in love with this story, its time for a long comment, bear with me, you may wanna sit down for this

Firstly you updated

My face throughout the entire update

Poor Zoey, the girl has suffered so much from this world and yet she is so selfless

And then that little A hole and A hole's B only humiliated her even more

Fave lines

"He dropped in his knees; his head hung low and his fingers clasped together in pleading."

Asad so without a doubt deserves this, this should be his new pose, now only if he did that in front of Zoya,

Lines that made me want to strangle Asad:

"After a minute or so a determination arose in him, a determination to correct his mistake, a determination to give her all the happiness and a determination to make her his."

"No, I am not late. We can still start over. She will be angry with me but I have confidence that she will forgive me eventually. I would do anything to get her forgiveness. She loves me too much Humi."

Does this guy honestly think that after he acted like Satan, that the sweet little angel will forgive him,

Seriously these lines made me wanna strangle him so much, he has such a big ego, "oh no I treated her like dirt and made her feel worse about herself then she already did but I'm sure if I apologize once she will forgive me, because after all she is in love with me"

"The Zoya you and me knew is dead"

So that means the Zoya THEY knew is dead, so that means Zoya has changed into a completely different person and the old Zoya who would forgive everyone so easily has changed

I really hope that this new Zoya bites back to people and snaps at them, as much as seeing someone so innocent and kind is nice the world and its inhabitants are cruel, a lot of people will take advantage of people, I pray that no one ever has to go through anything for Zoya's life,

Please make her strong and independent and make Asad jealous, there just has to be a jealous Asad,

Now that my rant is done, I'm going to be on my laptop refreshing this page until I see another update, and BTW I have an essay due tomorrow, so please if you don't want me to fail English thn PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE

NOW.