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Posted: 11 years ago
when are u planning to update
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Originally posted by: ashrina

OMG!! Such a naughty naughty..update!!!

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I was a bit bust past few days with my job & it severely raining in my place
Work stress & change in climate my health is also was not keeping well
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and wen is the next pm for this story coming??
i wanna see it ASAP in my inbox..
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Part 7

Dilshad had informed to najma about what all she knew about asad & zoya up to now. No doubt najma was shocked. Her Akdu bhaijaan had fall in love that too with the carefree zoya. She was extremely happy that zoya was going to be her Bhabhi. She knew both asad & zoya are egoistic. They won't confess there feelings so soon. They need help. Both najma & dilshad was out for shopping. Suddenly an idea stuck her mind. She took her cell phone & made a call to Ayaan.
Ayaan: tamater! How are you?
Najma: I am fine bhaijaan. Are you busy now?
Ayaan: no tamater.
Najma: can you come near cafe coffee day near MG road now?
Ayaan: fine tamater. I will be there.
He cut the call.
Dilshad: why did you call Ayaan? Why you want to meet him now?
Najma: to help bhaijaan & zoya.
Dilshad: how?
Najma: jealousy ammi.
Dilshad: jealousy?
Najma: ha ammi as said fights, friendship then jealousy will be the initial steps for love. I know zoya & Ayaan bhaijaan are good friends. Since both are of same age they get together well also. So now can't we use this to make bhaijaan jealous? Definetly he will react. This may help them to say out there feelings.
Dilshad know najma has a point. They both went to cafe. Ayaan also joined them there. As dilshad & najma started explaining about asad & zoya Ayaan was dumbstruck. His mouth opened in to a perfect o shape.
Najma: bhaijaan close your mouth.
Ayaan: how all this happened tamater? I can't believe bhaijaan is in love that too with zoya. I mean they both fight with each other 24 * 7.
Dilshad: beta jaghada wahan hota Jahaan pyaar hai.
Ayaan: so what's my role?
Najma: simple just behave closely with zoya & make bhaijaan jealous.
Ayaan: tamater why are you making me to meet mukka Ahmed khan? You don't want your brother to be in this handsome shape?
Dilshad: don't worry nothing will happen.

In KV

It was zoya who opened the door for dilshad & najma. She was suprised to see Ayaan with them.
Zoya: hai raabart! I think it's the 8 th wonder of the world you coming in through the door.
Ayaan: Mona! It's not that I never come through door.
Zoya: oh really!
Ayaan: anyways I need an urgent help from you. My laptop is not working. Please see it na Mona.
Zoya: give it to me.

Zoya took her tool box & sat in the hall for her work. Najma purposefully skipped in the name of studies & dilshad too went to her room. Ayaan was sitting next to her.

Asad could hear loud noise from hall. He wondered what's going on there. When he came to hall he could see zoya working on a lap top & Ayaan was sitting next to her. They both were creaking some shayeris. No wonder it's zoya & Ayaan who are sitting together. He thanked Allah that his house didn't broke in to pieces.

Ayaan could sense asad's presence. But he pretended that he didn't see him. He thought to imply his plan & also prayed to Allah that don't let him meet with mukka Ahmed khan.
Ayaan: Mona. This pizza is excellent have it na.
Mona: I will raabart. Let me deal with this first.
Ayaan: it's really hot & delicious. No problem rabbart will feed Mona darling.
Asad's thoughts: darling! I mean seriously, when did zoya become his darling? Wait! Did he said that he will feed her? No ways only I have that right.
He saw Ayaan taking a slice of pizza & he was almost going to put it in her mouth. No ways he can't allow that.
Asad: what's going on here?
Ayaan: bhaijaan when did you came?
Asad: I came 25 yrs back. What I asked is what's all this?
Ayaan: bhaijaan my lap top is not working so I thought that Mona darling can fix it for me.
Asad's thought: again darling?
Asad: Ayaan what stupid name is this Mona darling? Call her zoya or miss.farooqui.
Zoya stared at asad's face. Is he jealous? She could see his irritation in his eyes. Allah Miya! Thanks a lot. It's a chance for me.
Zoya: mr.khan. Raabart & me are partners. He has full right to call me what he wants. Understood?
Asad's eye brows raised. Partners? Now where did that come from?
Asad murmured: incredibly foolish!
Zoya: sunliya meine
Asad: Ayaan if you want to repair your lap top better you could have given it in a shop. She can only create a mess.
Zoya shouted: how dare you mr.khan? What are you trying to say that I can only create a mess? FYI I have done BCA ( bachelors in computer applications) for the past 3 years & I have passed out this year with gold medal. I think you have forgotten that I have made a password lock on your phone. Do you want me do some thing like that once more?

Asad's thoughts: asad beta she is a devil. Remember what all happened last time with her password lock. It's better not to provoke her.
Zoya: and by the way mr.khan there is nothing that zoya Ahm I mean zoya can't do in this world.
Asad smiled by the way she was using his surname & when she stopped she didn't use her maiden name.
Asad sat in the hall itself. He could see zoya & Ayaan going on blabbering each other. For the first time in his life he envy his brother. He can be friendly with every one so fast & keep them engaged. Just like zoya. So carefree & easy going. He so wish it was he who was making his zoya laugh instead of Ayaan.
Ayaan: Mona for a few days you got to get your visa extended. After that what will you do? You will be going back?
Both asad & zoya was shocked. They both couldn't think that zoya will leave one day from here. After all zoya & asad are married. Zoya has the legal rights to stay back in India. Even tough no one else knew about it.
Zoya: raabart. I am thinking to apply for MCA in Bhopal. Anyways I have to do my pg. If I do in Bhopal I will get study visa for 2 yrs.
Ayaan: excellent Mona darling. During this summer vacations they will put add to invite new admissions. If you are going to join the college in Bhopal for pg I will also join for pg. Just imagine you, me, tamater, NikhAt & Humeira in one college. Mazaa Ayega
Zoya: ha Bahuth Mazaa Ayega
Asad couldn't even imagine Ayaan & zoya spending time from morning to evening together. It's not that he is against zoya to do her pg or he don't trust her. He trust Ayaan also. He himself couldn't understand what's his problem. Why he can't take zoya with some one else under a frame? Even it's Ayaan. He is jealous? Jealous about ayaan's & zoya's friendship bonding? May be he is. He remembered how zoya used to get jealous when he & tanveer was sharing the same bonding. He used to enjoy it. But now he can understand her feelings. May be it is possessiveness also. Zoya is his wife now. Ayaan is not aware about it. May be that's the reason.
Asad: Ayaan first of all you were not interested to do BBM( bachelors of business management) you were forced by your family. After your degree you didn't want to join the business, now what happened to you? You want to go for MS?
Zoya: Allah Miya! What's wrong with you mr.khan? If Ayaan wants to do his pg you should encourage him instead of scolding him. What a kind of a brother you are?
Asad: ms.farooqui I know my brother very well. He is not interested in business & management field of studies. It's a course where you need dedication & hard-work. You can't just join because you want to be with your friends.
Zoya shook her head.
Zoya: raabart your bhaijaan can't see any one's happiness. You inform me when they call for new admissions. We will give application together.
Asad pressed his temples out of irritation.
Zoya had corrected ayaan's lap top. She handover it to him.
Ayaan: thank you Mona. You are a genius.
Zoya: I want treat
Ayaan: ok fine I will take you now to chat stall. Come let's go.
Asad: no ways
Ayaan: why bhaijaan?
Asad: you can't have street food it's not good for health.
Asad can't even imagine zoya going in ayaan's bike.
Zoya: Allah Miya! What's wrong with you mr.khan? If you don't want then don't have it. But you don't have any right to stop us. Understood?
Asad: ms.faroiqui I am not stopping you. See it's getting late & I can't allow a girl from this house to roam in street at hour.
Zoya: Allah Miya! Mr.khan I am not going alone. Raabart is there with me.
Asad: Ayaan can't take care if himself then what about you?
Ayaan: ah! Bhaijaan! It's hurts me here.
He clutch his hand on his heart.
Asad: nautanki saala.
Zoya: mr.khan I can take care of myself. I am not a kid.
Asad: you are nothing but a bid musibat magnet.
Zoya opened her mouth out of shock. Ayaan knew after the initial shock she will start & there will be a world war.
Zoya: mr.khan. I am not a musibat magnet. How dare you call me like that? You Akdu.
Ayaan: Mona leave it. I will take you tomorrow morning. Full day outing.
Zoya: pakka?
Ayaan: ha Mona I promise. Now I will leave. It's getting late.
After Ayaan bid good bye zoya turned towards asad.
Zoya: so what was that mr.khan?
Asad: what?
Zoya: is it really about safety issues? Or something else.
Asad: aur nahi hai toh kya?
Zoya: jealous mr.khan?
Asad: jealous? Jealous my foot!
Zoya smiled: some thing is burning here. What's it?
Asad stared her. He went inside. Zoya smiled and murmured: you are jealous mr.khan. Accept it.

Ayaan did call najma & dilshad & informed the developments. It was very clear that asad was getting jealous of ayaan's getting close with zoya. He was sure that tomorrow asad won't allow zoya to go for an outing with Ayaan tomorrow. He will come with an excuse. May be this will help asad & zoya to know about there feelings.

Next day

Asad was pacing in his room thinking that Ayaan will come soon & take zoya with him for outing. He had to stop it. But how?

Even during breakfast he was going on thinking about it. Today is last day for najma in college. After that for next few days it's vacation.
Najma: bhaijaan
Asad: yes tamater.
Najma: where are you lost? How much time I was calling you?
Asad: kya Baath hai tamater?
Najma: from tomorrow it's holidays for me. What about the road trip?
Asad: we will go tamater. Ammi you decide where to go I will do the arrangements.
Dilshad: ok asad.

After breakfast najma left to college. Dilshad was cleaning. Zoya went to get ready.
As asad heard ayaan's bikes voice asad went towards her room.
Asad: ms.farooqui my phone is not working can you please fix it?
Zoya: first of it's mrs.khan & you want me to fix it? But I think last day you said that I can only create a mess.
Asad didn't say anything. She smiled.
Ayaan was calling her from the hall. She said about asad's mobile. Ayaan smiled. Even dilshad from was smiling.
She sat in the hall. Ayaan & asad also. Asad was looking her. She was wearing dark blue stretch jeans & black printed top. Her fair completion was high lightened when she wore black. She had left her hair loose. Only kohl was the make up she used. She was gorgeous.


Zoya's dress


Ayaan: you look so gorgeous today Mona.
Zoya smiled. Zoya: thanks raabart.
Asad fisted his fist. Only he can praise her beauty.
Asad murmured on ayaan's ears: beta do you want to meet mukka Ahmed khan.
Ayaan gulped. He could sense his anger.
Zoya: Ayaan there is ice cream in fridge. You want it?
Ayaan: ha Mona.
Ayaan's phone rang. He took it & went out.
Zoya got up to take ice cream for her & Ayaan. It was then asad noticed zoya's kurthi's back zip was opened revealing her milky skin. This girl is really care less. He went near her & pulled her behind the pillar. She was about to shout. He closed her mouth with his palm. With other hand he pulled up her back zip. Zoya was startled. She looked in to his eyes. His eyes were fully filled with love. She smiled at him.
Asad left her. She went towards the fridge. Ayaan came inside.
Ayaan: bhaijaan ammi called me. I have to go now. It's urgent. Can you please take Mona out for me please bhaijaan?
Asad smiled. He couldn't control his happiness. He was getting a chance to spent some time with zoya.
Asad hugged Ayaan. After biding good bye Ayaan left. Ayaan & dilshad was happy that there plan was working.

Pre cap: asya on road trip.


I am sorry I was very busy with my job for past few days & it's heavy raining in my city. Because of my work overload & change in climate my health was also not keeping well. I hope I did justice to the update
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yipeee I m 1st🥳
so Naj, Dillu & Ayaan made plan 2 jalaofi Asad😆
& its working brilliantly⭐️
& indirectly Zoya is also helping them😉
It was amazing part👏
continue soon dear😃
Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
too good uma and it was hilarious at some pts too
I really loved it

what a jealous update was it
continue soon

Cant wait to see asya road trip
I m sure MM will create new musibats for her knight in shining armour
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
jealous asad is too good
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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