Bhang Ke Nashe mein - asya ss part 9 on pg 130

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Part 1 below
Part 2 on pg 12
Part 3 on pg 28
Part 4 on pg 45
Part 5 on pg 65
Part 6 on pg 82
Part 7 on pg 98
Part 8 on pg 113
Part 9 on pg 130
Link to thread 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4029393/bhang-ke-nashe-mein-ss-thread-last-part-on-pg-56

I really got frustrated seeing yesterday's episode. I mean it seems like billi is the lead not asya.)

(This story starts from the holi party where asad gets angry after seeing shireen & rashid. He leaves with dilshad & najma.)


Zoya was still playing with the kids. She was having lots of fun. She has celebrated holi in New York also. But celebrating holi in Bhopal was different. In her own place along with her family. Ya khans has become there her own family. After API & jiju it's them whom she can call as her family. She always feels KV is the real place where she truly belongs.
She was extremely happy as she was able to unite 2 brothers today. Asad & Ayaan - step brothers, but they love each other than real brothers. They meet each other even breaking the wall in between 2 families. They have fought with each other, one for there father & the other one against there father. But now Atleast there misunderstandings has been cleared. They became like the old asad & Ayaan.
She didn't knew when asad & his family left. It was Ayaan who came & informed her that asad & his family left. Now ayaan's family is also leaving. Ayaan told her that he will drop her back. But zoya was not in a mood to go back soon. She was having lots of fun. She didn't want to end it soon. She informed him that she will manage. After all she is zoya farooqui, there is nothing that zoya farooqui can't do in this world.
She was playing with few children. She was running after them & chasing them after sometime she felt so thirsty. So she went in search for some water. Few children gave her drinks, poor zoya didn't knew it was Bhang inside the bottle. She felt it tasty & she was drinking it again & again.

In KV

After reaching back KV asad remembered that zoya didn't come along with them. He called Ayaan to enquire. Ayaan informed that zoya didn't return back. She is still playing there. Asad was getting tensed. This girl is nothing but a musibat magnet. He can't even imagine something happening to her. It's weird she was exactly the opposite girl what he wants in his life. But he know she has a heart of gold. Even after going through so much misery in her entire life, she is a cool & easy going person with full of life. He has never seen some one who sees so much positivity in life. She is so selfless & affectionate person.
He took his car keys & went to bring her back.

Asad was searching for zoya. He can't find her. After all she is zoya Farooqui who won't sit in a place for a second.
He spotted zoya in the middle of a group. She was happily dancing. For a second asad was stuck. Her dimple smile & the reflection of her smile in her almond shaped eyes, how can be someone so beautiful & innocence at the same time? He went towards her. She smiled seeing him.
Zoya: mr.khan it's so fun, join us
Asad: miss.farooqui have you gone crazy? I am not mad to dance. I came here to take you with me back to KV. Come
Zoya: no way I am not coming with you Akdu!
Saying that she ran. Asad too ran after her. In between he murmured : what this girl had? So much of energy? Running like as if she is in some race competition.
Finally zoya got exhausted she stopped to get some air. Asad too stopped.
Zoya: mr.khan you look so funny. Ha ha ha
She was going on laughing. Asad felt it weird.
Asad: miss.farooqui why are you going on laughing? What's wrong with you?
Zoya: laughing is good for health mr.khan. So nothing is wrong with me. Drink this mr.khan it's so tasty.
She gave the bottle to asad. When he opened it he felt a weird smell. Wait! It's Bhang! My god she drank Bhang? No wonder she is behaving too weird. Now how am I going to handle her?
Asad: miss. Farooqui right now you are coming with me that's it.
He dragged her. She was going on shouting.
Zoya: mr.khan leave me. Akdu Kahika! You are too bad. I hate you.
Asad: same here miss.farooqui. I too hate you. At least we have something similar.
Zoya: you liar. You always lecture about truth & tradition, now you are lying to me.
Asad: what I lied to you miss.farooqui?
Zoya: mr.khan you told me that night in farm house that you really like me.
Asad felt stunt. Ya he unknowingly confessed his feelings to her under influence of Bhang. But he can't be close to her. After all he is rashid Ahmed khan's son. He can only hurt her if he be close to her. It's better for them to stay apart.
Asad: miss.farooqui stop blabbering.
Zoya: I am not you liar. Akdu, jahaphana six packs what you think of yourself? I hate you mr.khan I really hate you. You are too bad.
Some how he dragged her to the car. She was going on blabbering that I hate you, I hate you.
Asad: just get inside miss.farooqui
Before he could realise she pulled him towards her & clamied his lips. His eye went out due to initial shock but then he too responded back. He too kissed her. Once he came back to reality he left her lips. He saw zoya lying on his chest.
Asad: zoya zoya
He tried to woke her up. But she didn't. He realised she slept off. He carried her in his arms & made her lie on the back seat. He saw few hair fall on her face. He put it on a side and kissed her forehead. He murmured : I love you zoya.

Note: after 3 months I saw QH today the repeat telecast. I was too frustrated to see billi's torture. I thought of updating my FS. But my mood went after seeing yesterday's episode. I hope I have not taken my frustration on this os. Please leave your comments & likes.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely OS

Zoya and bhaang..

and she kissed him.. wow..

good work
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Hi,

It was really a lovely os

thanks for this

Poor zoya didnt know that it was bhaang 😆

asya kissed 😲😆

at last asad confessed to a sleeping zoya


i loved it to core

it was awesome ...
👏
Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Wow graphics
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Lovely OS
Keep writing
Even I was disappointed with Yesterdays Episode
I mean it didnt seem realistic
Like she killed all of them at once
Like I dont get that
Anyway amazing piece of writing
Plz write more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres above

Thanks a ton 😳

Keep writing 👏

I am highly frustrated with yesterday's episode

its not at all making some sense

Billi can kill a lion

and she kills everyone

They are showing tanu as the main lead not asya ...

But pls don't stop writing

And do continue ur works on asya

This is my only request to u ...

I really love all your work,




Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Keep writing

I loved it 😊

it was awesome ...👏

And love u for this <3 🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute os❤️ i loved it
try to make it a two shot
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Can i ask u something ?????😕

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