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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#631

It was awesome ,

It was a long update ...

But, Even though why did u stopped it there

I loved it ...

Continue soon

Thanks for pm,

Pm me for next update

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Amazing part.

Are they going to kiss??😳

Continue soon.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago

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Rosered1

@Rosered1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

They wont kiss 😭

Hope Asad wont go to the shell once again

Updte was superb👍🏼

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Rosered1

@Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Happy Birthday in advance

Love and lots of hugs 🤗

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DDP with Pookie

@yum_immy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Loved the update 😳

Edited by yumna.imad - 11 years ago

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Divya

@divya_asya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#637

this is fantastic...

You're not allowed to scare me again ever like that, you're not allowed to put me through what you did today, you're not allowed to make me feel lifeless, you're not allowed to walk alone when you have someone to walk along with you, you're not allowed to bear every pain, every fear by yourself when you have someone to share it with you. And you're not allowed to leave me and go away'' I loved dis lines...

omg he kissed her scars...

Loved dis update a lot!!

Edited by divya_asya - 11 years ago

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#638

"She quivered a little, letting out a moan, "Asad.." "Zoya," he whispered leaning his forehead on hers, their lips barely an inch away from the other."

This is just EVIL! 😒 🤣

"Taking a decision he shifted her a little and got in next to her. Sitting close to her, leaning slantingly on the bed post he put his arms around and made her rest her head on his chest. Hugging her close, with one arm around her waist and the other on her head, he caressed her hair, wanting to shield her from her pain, her nightmares; her ordeals."

Is this the same Asad Ahmed Khan from the previous chapters? NO - He is a man irrevocably in love! ☺️

"You're not allowed to scare me again ever like that, you're not allowed to put me through what you did today, you're not allowed to make me feel lifeless, you're not allowed to walk alone when you have someone to walk along with you, you're not allowed to bear every pain, every fear by yourself when you have someone to share it with you. And you're not allowed to leave me and go away ..Do you get that Miss Zoya Farooqui?"

Have I told you, you are a talented writer? The dialogues were fabulous in this chapter(and the previous ones too! 😳) 😎 👏

The entire bathroom scene was beautiful, Asad standing outside imploring Zoya to let him in was really something else!

"When will they be back?" Zoya questioned again.

"Tomorrow morning.." Asad said shortly.

😆

The care, concern, love, trust, unadulterated adoration was portrayed beautifully. ❤️

Delightful chapter! ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Hope that's enough love to suffice for the pre-birthday celebrations! 😉 When is the exact date if I may ask?

Look forward to the next looonnnggg chapter! 😎

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago