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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Its a nice update

Thanks for the pm

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Farz reminds of one of the short story I read long back.

It too was mostly a monologue and interspersed with some dialogs.

On first read (the story I read long back), it seemed like 2 lovers in live-in relationship.

And the twist in the tale was that one of the party was a cat.

And then the story made perfect sense.

Just answer this one question? and answer it pronto?

Is there an animal involved in your story?

Just a plain yes or no would do.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: NAVI55

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Farz reminds of one of the short story I read long back.
It too was mostly a monologue and interspersed with some dialogs.
On first read (the story I read long back), it seemed like 2 lovers in live-in relationship.
And the twist in the tale was that one of the party was a cat.
And then the story made perfect sense.

Just answer this one question? and answer it pronto?
Is there an animal involved in your story?
Just a plain yes or no would do.

Most definitely NO.

It does involve a pen. Well two. Maybe three, but depends.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: NAVI55

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Farz...

You are going to think I am dumb...Or just so blonde...

Maybe a blonde would get it faster...

But I still dont get it...If all my above assumptions are incorrect Then I have no clue now...

But...

I'll go out on a limb here...

And at the thought of sounding really stupid and probably wrong again...

One of the characters is dead...I'm thinking Zoya...

Hmmm...

Wrong again huh???

Feel free to punch me now...I am in need of a black eye

You already know that Zoya is very much alive. And kicking. Okay punching. *get it get it???*

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

PINK BABY BOOTIES????

SAY WHAT!!!

😆

My God Navi!

Like art?

OH my God.

My writing is abstract...like art..?

Oh my this is huge! Now I understand what you meant last time when I told you your work is a piece of art.

You throwing my own words back at me? And I can totally tell you mean it and you forgot about my comment last time.

Thank you so much Navi dearest!

You rock!

Love you!

And how's being confused like? Hehe

Haha!

Mwah mwah mwah!

Pink Booties...I know...I too am wondering where I got that from😆

One must always take the time out to appreciate the written word...especially if it's written so well...

I have mentioned before, Your style of writing is exceptionally amazing and your ideas which culiminated in this fabulous os was brilliantly executed👍🏼

It was unusual...Just like you...

Also very different from other writers in this forum👍🏼

You are so welcome...

And now you realise how many comments I actually wrote😆😉

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Credit goes to the uploader...

I just borrowed this pic...

MWAHHH!!!

Love you HHH!

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

OMG Navi you have no idea how long we planned this!

But always got delayed...first it was just coz the story wasn't ready then life got in the way then it was finding a time where we could do it together and and and so much more!!

This was the double dhamaka Zanu was telling you about in her thread, but she said it a little too soon...coz we didn't post it then.

And then when you ask me...I tried distracting you with other things haha...don't know if you caught that or not..MOST DEFINITELY NOT!! Haha!!!

You tried distracting me😡

How could you...I thought you ignored me😕

But I liked the surprise...

Very very much...

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Res
Read it once. need to read it again for commenting.😊

Unres

You have a teriffic sense of humor.

Thanks for the PM. What did I read ?

Asad proposed and Zoya rejected.
Asad cried.

Why were Asad's dialogs edited out in the 2nd pink part.
Honestly, didn't get the significance of the pink references. Maybe am a bit dense.
Pls. enlighten.

First of all heyya!

Sense of humour? You meant in the OS right? Or something else?

Hehe.

Sure thing on the PM. Well actually I wouldn't bother, but I might regret so yeah...am so glad I did!

Yes Asad proposed and Zoya rejected...the crying bit sure, why not. But where did you get this from? The first part or the second part?

Asad's part was not recorded. That's why.

Okay I'm putting it to you. Why is Zoya's bit in italic? And why was Asad's in quotation?

The pink reference.

Hmm.

You know how Zoya said fine, I'll use black ink the next time? What do you think that means?

I can just tell you...but I'd rather not. Would it be terrible to want you to figure it out yourself? Another hint, the parts in pink (the second part) is the proof Asad was talking about.

Thanks so much for trying so hard! While it makes me feel so bad to have to put you through it, I'm glad too that you really want to know!

Mwah!

Love ya!