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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

I don't know why I felt Zoya cant speak. she is mute!!

i.e. why she says in the end that she has to fight her demons on her own.

The pink notes and all. Asad rejected her first and then he got rejected.

u underlined TELL and the she mouthed the " i Love you" never said that.

in the end she says i will find a way to say that to you and I can always write that.

i dont know may be thinking too much

Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Farz...

Come here...

Now...

I love you Navi!

You rawk!

Now you're making me miss mah dawg!! Who's working very hard! Miss you Zanu! But it's okay! We'll communicate okay! Soon!

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I love you Navi!

You rawk!

Now you're making me miss mah dawg!! Who's working very hard! Miss you Zanu! But it's okay! We'll communicate okay! Soon!

Awee...

I love you too❤️🤗

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: NAVI55
My second read...

I wasnt confused earlier...

But Now...

I am 🤪

You are not a very predictable writer...That's what I love about you...You write in an almost ABSTRACT way...Like art👍🏼

Hmmm...

*A sigh of immense contemplation...

Is Zoya proposing???

I have no idea but whenever it comes to the colour Pink...I am thinking Pink baby booties

PINK BABY BOOTIES????

SAY WHAT!!!

😆

My God Navi!

Like art?

OH my God.

My writing is abstract...like art..?

Oh my this is huge! Now I understand what you meant last time when I told you your work is a piece of art.

You throwing my own words back at me? And I can totally tell you mean it and you forgot about my comment last time.

Thank you so much Navi dearest!

You rock!

Love you!

And how's being confused like? Hehe

Haha!

Mwah mwah mwah!

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Farz,

Main kahin nahin jane wali. Not anymore.

Maybe I was wrong. Jane wali, so it was not Asad.

Gosh, have to rearrange my ideas all over again.

Will come back tmrw with a new thought and idea.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Farz...

Is it your sole intention to drive me crazy???

Come here and answer my questions...

PLEASE

You have no idea how terribly bad I feel that I made you this way! My story is so very confusing and complex I guess!

Hayye!

You know I love you way too much to want to drive you crazy...though I'm pretty sure my clinginess IS MOST DEFINITELY driving you loco!! Hehe!

Mwahh!

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Farz,

Main kahin nahin jane wali. Not anymore.
Maybe I was wrong. Jane wali, so it was not Asad.

Gosh, have to rearrange my ideas all over again.

Will come back tmrw with a new thought and idea.

😆😆

Confused...

Dont worry...You will get it soon enough...

I was more than confused...

I have been here from 10 Am, reading this over and over again...

And just when It seems like I have an idea...

Poof...Another thought takes over...

That's the power of her words...😉

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

You have no idea how terribly bad I feel that I made you this way! My story is so very confusing and complex I guess!

Hayye!

You know I love you way too much to want to drive you crazy...though I'm pretty sure my clinginess IS MOST DEFINITELY driving you loco!! Hehe!

Mwahh!

Don't feel bad...

You wrote this wonderfully...It's me just being exuberant to know if my ramblings were on the right track or not...

If you are driving me loco...

Then...

I must be driving you Coco's😆

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: NAVI55
By the way Have you noticed...

You

Have

Over

700 Views...Not bad for 2 days...

But I think

You stumped some of the readers...

Farz...

Please come

and shed some light...

After you explain...

I would probably feel like the biggest...stupidest person ever...

because...

everything most probably is so clearly stated...

Its just that my small brain is unable to recognise what it is😕

OMG!!

Yeahhh...

I just saw!!

Now it's more than 1200!

Haha! It's fine by me!

I've a million times before read works but didn't drop in a line to comment! But still I'm getting so much love! I feel bad! Oh well! That's all in the past!

Mwahhh Navi!! You're checking up on me!! Hayyeee feel so blessed!

And I guess I really must have stumped the readers!!

And you most of all!

And you went all out to try to crack it!

I love you so much for that!

And so so much more!!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Hello...

Farz's Soul Dawg...

But...

My Doc😉

Zanu🤗

I see the two of you have been busy with your double Dhamaka...

OMG Navi you have no idea how long we planned this!

But always got delayed...first it was just coz the story wasn't ready then life got in the way then it was finding a time where we could do it together and and and so much more!!

This was the double dhamaka Zanu was telling you about in her thread, but she said it a little too soon...coz we didn't post it then.

And then when you ask me...I tried distracting you with other things haha...don't know if you caught that or not..MOST DEFINITELY NOT!! Haha!!!