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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Too Chhupee Hai Kahan Mai dhunthi Yahaan
Tere writing Bina Fika Fika Hai forum Kaa Jahaan
Too Chhupee Hai Kahan Mai dhunti Yahaan
Too na likhi tho Gaya Rang Jaane Kahaan
Too Chhupee Hai Kahan Mai dhunti Yahaan..

AWESOME...


Oh wow!!!


This is so AWESOME!!

You're writing your awesome lines for me!! After such a very long time I'm reading them!!

Such thoughtful message! You're so very sweet! I'm so overwhelmed! I mean, fika fika hai forum ka jahan? And gaya rang jane kahan? All this happening...coz of me? Or rather the lack of, me? hehe

Love you loads!!

Mwahhh


You rock Rajni ji!!


Awesome!!

You have to tell me what you think of the story!

You must!!!

I need to know!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Res ...Unres...

You added me to your dedication list😳
Aweee...
Aren't you the sweetest friend ever😳
I ❤️ you Sugar🤗
Mwah mwah mwah!!

🤗🤗🤗

Ok...Thank you for writing this...
You're very welcome!!

We wont talk about the ban...No go area...
Yes, let's not!

Well written Os👍🏼
Awww!! Really!!?? Mwahh
BUT...
Of course there's a BUT...

Very cryptic...
Hmmm...
Hmmm😃
Don't copy me! Hehe!
I guess I will have to go back and read it all over again...
How many times have you read it so far? Must be tired of it by now. Very tired, I bet.
It's Monday morning and my brain is still on a go slow...Blame it on the Balding Taklu😕He gave me some nasty assignments to complete😕😡
Taklu giving you nasty assignments to do??!!! Oh man!!
Don't worry! You give it back to him!!

My first thought was that it was Asya reminiscing about their younger days...(You mentioned specs and blind) but then I struck that off...
They were reminiscing...so don't strike it off.
Second thought was that Zoya was telling him that she was pregnant...(I have no idea where I got that thought from😕...so I struck that immediately after the next one hit my brain)...
PREGNANT? Yeah I would really like to know where THAT came from! Ha-ha! I wasn't aware that I made it sound like she was.
The third thought was that someone was confessing their feelings and proposing...(Hmmm, I could be wrong here...Lets delve deeper into this enigmatic piece...I am trying to find my magnifying glass😆 Scrutinise every word...Phrase...sentence...)
Yes, some did propose and got rejected. And then that person was proposed by the same that rejected.
Too much thoughts I have...As you can see...Thinking is not good for my brain...
Then stop thinking. Start...feeling.
This is probably not as complicated as it seems...I am going to find another angle to look at it from...Hmmm but which angle?
Front view is good.
Pink and black writing...Hmmm...
Yes, pink. And black.
Are they writing to each other or E-mailing by any chance???
They are not, but one of them is. And no, no emails involve.
Going back to have a second read now...Lets see if I can get this right...
You've had a gazillion reads by now. Please tell me. You got something. Hehe.


Reply in pink!

Love ya Navi!!! Mwahh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey that was awesome.

It was quite enigmatic but very interesting.
Amazingly written. I will have to reread it to get certain things clear. Great work


Enigmatic eh?

Yeah I guess I did made it that way! Just to add some suspense and mystery to it. Thanks so much for reading! And you really think it's amazingly written? Mwah! Thank you!

And just a humble request..Would you comment again based on your second reading? Maybe I can clear some doubts if you still have any by the time you're done?

Hee! Thanks!

Mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
I got it. I guess! Hehe! 😆
Took me one more careful reading!

So basically Asad asked Zoya out, she rejected! she asked him back!
The pink part is the letter she wrote to him. And he was recollecting the letter. Hence the ' Pink has grown on me'.

Please tell me I am right this time? 😆
Edited by -ARLover- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
OK Farz,
I take back when I said I understood.
The bag rummaging , I thought was Zoya...She was looking for something perhaps a love note.
Then one part I thought they were chatting on a messenger.
Then there was the initial start that was more like blind towards their love, but now they are clear and acknowledged their feelings...
I thought it was Zoya initially proposed and Asad rejected.
So then Asad is trying to woo her. And she is giving him a hard time.
And in the end she forgives him! With Chalo mAuf kiya...
Please tell me I am so so wrong!
Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: NAVI55

I have unres'ed...

But...
I need to go and read again...
Because I know I am way off the mark...
Let the analysis begin😉


How many times did you read?!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Oh...

Dont worry...
I am also stumped...
and I have read this like five times already😆
I think I am too slow today...😆


Haha, 5 times! 😲
She has an amazing style of writing though!

I put across another explanation. Hope I am correct this time! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


How many times did you read?!!!

I have read this +- 10 times...😆
I could kick myself now...because when I read it again...
It's like so obvious...
Thank you for putting me out of my misery and clearing cob webs of my mind...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Ok...Strike the letter thought or email...

They are speaking to each other...
But why The pink writing...😕
Hmmm???
I know this is not complicated...
But...
Why am I not getting this???
*Rhetorical question...


Now what do you have to say for yourself...?

Well in your defence, it is a little vague...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Oh...and yes...

I know how much you adore Haider...
You just had too mention him here😆
Wouldn't want to leave him out...😆


YES!!!

OF COURSE!!

How can I leave him!


Even though he is not at all in the story. But I guess he is!!


Mwahhh

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