Yeh Lo Main Hari Piya- An OS

GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Res

Read it once. need to read it again for commenting.😊

Unres

You have a teriffic sense of humor.

Thanks for the PM. What did I read ?

Asad proposed and Zoya rejected.

Asad cried.

Why were Asad's dialogs edited out in the 2nd pink part.

Honestly, didn't get the significance of the pink references. Maybe am a bit dense.

Pls. enlighten.

Edited by GitaIyer - 11 years ago

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Its so awesome. You write very well. Keep writing :)

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: suparnasahaMS
nice

Aww!!

Thank you so much!!

I miss talking to you guys (Haider's chahnewalons)

Mwahhh!!

I hope you got the story!

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Sugar...

Btw...

I just listened to the song...The title of your OS...

It's really nice...First time I ever heard it I think...

I can't remember if I heard it before...

You like the oldies I see...

Awesome Choice👍🏼

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: NAVI55
I have noticed that you are replying...

Which is good...

For you and the readers...

But...

I also notice that you are not elaborating on the story...

Hmmm...

Is that delibrate?????

You want to keep the suspense going for longer???

Or until your ever loyal buddies get the story right???

I am still in deep contemplation😆

But of course I will take a break and do some random spamming now...

I'm afraid you're not so wrong!

I'm really hoping someone would at least get it right.

Just that most important bit!

Then I can explain the rest,, if it isn't self explanatory already...

hehe

Mwahh

Thanks for trying so hard to decipher my story!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Awww

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: NAVI55

OhmyGod! Am dead!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: NAVI55

I love you too handsome!!

So very much!!!

Mwahhh

Hayyyeee

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I'm afraid you're not so wrong!

I'm really hoping someone would at least get it right.

Just that most important bit!

Then I can explain the rest,, if it isn't self explanatory already...

hehe

Mwahh

Thanks for trying so hard to decipher my story!

No need for thanks...

I actually like puzzles...And your Os although its written exceptionally well is looking like a puzzle to me...

Please dont take offence with that...

But I did mention that your style of writing is different so your take on things will also be different...I also enjoy reading things that are different...Keeps the predictability away...😃

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

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