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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

OH FARZ!

YES JULIET! 😳

I won't call myself your fan, that is just lame, I am nobody's fan.
But that certainly wouldn't make me stop from calling myself your fan.

But you and your friend there, Zanutix, Both have made me cry on very different occasions. Her's was the Drizzling Sunshine!
Oh my!! Yes! That story made me feel a lot of things! I was so very touched and overwhelmed! And Zanutix is such an incredible writer I cannot even begin to tell you how much.

And I had THAT effect on you? With THAT being bold, underlined, italicised and yes PINKED.
Did you read her OS Beyond? You must!

You guys write so well that I feel ashamed to post any of my bull around as a piece of work.
What are you talkin' about! I feel ashamed that my story requires decoding, and that my story-telling needs improving and brushimg and mopping and polishing. You write amazing! I love your GREAT FERRIS WHEEL story and of course your BUTTERFLIES, and am actually waiting for I DON'T LIKE YOU..

See! I follow your work. If you don't see a comment, it's coz my phone sometimes do not allow me to, so I simply won't. Bt trust me I read ALL of 'em. Yes even CLUSTERS OF DESIRE but that one is sooo mature I need time growing up first *akhir main nanhi munni rahi toh hoon*
This OS better get an award because if it doesn't, I will know this forum belongs to Ass kissers only.
Oh my GOD! You saying it is good enough already. Way too good. Ass kissers! Oh my! Really!? You think that? Zanu won for Drizzling Sunshine! And she's most definitely NOT an ass kisser, she's a darling sweetheart (when need be) and a ferocious dawg at other times. *runs away before dawg attacks*
I kind of guessed the mute with your TELL, but I don't like reading stories like this.
If I tell you I don't too would you believe me? 'Coz I really don't. But see, she's accepted it. In fact he has too. She even was done feeling sorry for herself and has come to terms with it. This was just one of those stories that needs telling, that people don't get it is a whole different issue.

Heee!

Mwah!

I am too weak hearted so I objected that thought.
Awww, am actually quite glad you did, otherwise we wouldn't come to this now would we?

This was beautiful. This was the best I have read so far.
Oh my GOD, stop doing that. THE BEST YOU HAVE READ SO FAR? No! Please! You've obviously read better ones, if not WRITTEN them!

But I'd accept the beautiful bit graciously! And gratefully! Mwah! You think it's beautiful? Why, thank you!
Truly Amazing. Mwah! Especially the Hahuhu part! I didn't even guess that! It make me overwhelm and emotional.
I know right! And he was busy feeling all ticklish to even realise what she was doing. Okay he was busy holding her. Hehe. Can't blame him now, can we?
Spectacular Sweetheart! Why thank you so much dearest Juliet!
You should be very very proud.
Oh, trust me. After this, I quite am. In fact very much so! Very, very much so!

THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading and re-reading my story for however many times you have. And for all the beautiful things you have to say about my work (and Zanu's!)

Am so thrilled, you have no idea.

You stayed up way past midnight just to know the revelation, and even take the time to comment! Again. And again!

You truly are the real sweetheart! And you've made me so very happy! Mwah!

Love you loads!

Edited (by Farz):

I humbly apologise for the formatting, I have no idea why it is the way it is.

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Yeah...

Only you was missing my cherry blossom😆


Yep you were missing.

And my janu Zanu! Mah dawg! See how much I miss you dawg!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Well said Juliet👏

I tell her that her writing is good...
But this lass just does not believe me...
Maybe now she will...


Oh goodness! I believe you I believe you!

I so want to, anyway!

Okay fine I believe you!

*overwhelmed*

*am in tears, happy wala*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ARLover-


@Navi- The statements in Bold. Word. 👏
This piece of fiction confused me, made me curious, I couldn't stop thinking of this..It was really good! 👏
And I am generally too lazy to comment. Probably because of Farz, I'll get to the Dazzler title! 😆


You guys!!

Thank you so much for all your support and love!

And WOW!!! 20 more till you're a DAZZLING DAZZLER!! Woohoo!! Excite already!!

And you, someone who's generally too lazy to comment has made me so very happy with all that you have commented on!

I love you darlin'!!

So thrilled!!

Mwahh!!

And this fiction did ALL of that to you yet you stayed on, trying to crack it!??? Why thank you oh-so-very much!

Am so overwhelmed by the response I'm getting.

Even though I need to explain certain things, I'm so very glad that at least SOME of you got it right on your own! Am immensely proud, feels like it is a great achievement

Hayye!

Mwah!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

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Coz she forgot to carry black ink. She said next time would be with black ink. she wanted to make it special with black ink so she cried. She was trying to find that one in the bag. Asad told her he found her classy with pink only. May be


AGAIN. YOU'VE GOT IT RIGHT!

Yeah Asad finds it classy. Pink has grown on him. I wonder how...*hehe*
Mwah!

So so happy! And every bit glad that you did!

Hayye. Awesome feeling!

Thanks so much!

Love ya!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

again m going missing i have to go in a party!! hehehe


Party?? Woohoo!! Shake a leg for me, if it involves dancing. Otherwise bite/suck an ice for me. *just a weird habit*

Mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Oh...

Have fun Apu...
Do lots of dancing...


Haha!

I just said the same to her!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

😆😆
Farz did u hear that...Somebody's going to become a dazzler soon...
And you helped pave her way...
I was thinking of this all day...Thats why I am still here😆


Wow!!

Imagine that!

Me paving the way for y'all! Hayye!!

Mwah!

Navi you just turned Dazzler! So much hurry to start rocking? We're not done being dazzled by you. Hee!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

😆😆
I am going to look for a picture when I was 7...and send to you😉


Promise?
Am so excited already!!

Woohoo!

Yay!!!

Woohoo!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I want links to ALL your works which are based on AsYa. Cool? 😃

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